Back to the Future Article: TIME MACHINE

posted by aircloud7

is there really such a thing as a time machine.
The time machine in back to the future 4 runs on rasberry slurpies and hair restoring shampoo.
The flux capacitor is a dimesional convertor that converts 3D+ 2 of time to 10 D plus 2 of time.
Large spacial not curled up.
it converts Einsteins equation to 12 D two time dimensions don't mean one of past and one of future but two pasts and two fufures............
Graham Partis friends have done the math on a 3D model and 2 Dimensions of time works out perfectly.
The math is based on Newtons clock software that you can find on Kogregate.............

OBJECTIVE OPINION OF MAX BACK TO THE FUTURE 4 SCRIPT

posted by aircloud7

So I’m not going to resubmit your script to you with dialogue changes, because your dialogue isn’t actually that bad!  Although there’s a few spelling mistakes here and there and some punctuation errors, I think your dialogue as a whole is strong. All your characters have their own voices… which is important, and conversations flow smoothly.

The tone of your script is consistent with the other Back to the Future movies which is crucial if you’re writing a sequel to it! There are a lot of light hearted conversations and your jokes flow well. You had me laughing at some of the jokes,...