Sailor Moon Spanking

(Author's Note: This is an anime that I plan on creating to become a live anime, and air on television day. This, however, is not the finished product. Just a bit of what I thought of. If this is liked, I may post the other 12 episodes on this club. Until then, here is the first episode. Enjoy)

Shusaku was in the middle of running down a hallway for dear life. As he turned the corner, he stopped to take a breath, only for him to then start running again, as soon as he saw Rina, Yukiji, Mr. Tadakuni, and the entire female volleyball team running right toward him. Shusaku jumped in terror, then...

This is about a girl named yui who is sent to some mansion(Sorry forgot the name of the mansion lol)To live with some friends of her father...first of all how old is this chick and why is her father sending her to some random peoples house she dosent even know!?Anyway...I cant tell if this anime is total crap or a gift from the heavens theres some things I liked and some things I hated speaking of which lets get on to the characters.

Yui:Bella swan but with less of a personality and is mentally retarded.(Not really but some things she did were just stupid.)

Ayato:Jerk who uses 3rd person too...