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Chapter 4
The wind howled in the mountains. Snow ruffled as Liam lead Hunter and Griffin up the mountain side. Hunter’s brown fur ruffled in unison with the wind and Griffin’s flaming orange was a contrast to the white all around. “What’s our job here?” Hunter asked Liam, craning his head towards the navy blue padding up the mountain. “Ruuqo has been alerted that two wolves are heading towards our territory.” “So? Maybe they’re just passing through? I mean, they’re just two wolves! What could they possibly do to a whole pack-,” “I think we’re supposed to lead them to...

I had been going through hell in that damned town... Silent Hill. Nothing is right creatures everywhere, blood stains on the straight, the schools, the houses. I've had to go through de-dead people's bodies to find keys to places that had lead to no where..... "I never even got the chance to see Kate." I said to myself. I have seen the horrid killings of Lilly and myself had to kill Garth because he had gone crazy. Even I might be going crazy after watching a video tape which shows I killed Kate but i won't believe it! know I was here at Lakeview Hotel. "Wait what is this?" something on the...

I stood there in shocked silence, gaping at what was taking place in front of me. I glanced to my right and saw Ronna's brothers, Armstrong and Lerbo, standing there with stupid grins on their faces.
They were all cheering me as I exited the cave.
"Lerbo, what is going on?" I growled, this sorta had me uptight, just shake it off and move on, I thought to myself.
The taller, more muscled wolf stepped forward and attempted to keep his smile under control.
"Im sorry sir, but the look on your face was great."
He grined again
"So what is going on?"
"Well, when you sent Blake out, he told them to...