Writing Poem I Wrote

sehdt posted on Sep 17, 2011 at 05:28PM
Please read and tell me what you think.

LOVE NEEDED

Do I need love
I have lasted so long without
I wonder if I need
But then again if I never
Kiss another man I might forget how
Forget that feeling of his lips touching yours
His smell of aftershave
The crick in your neck afterwards if he’s taller than you
The sweet feeling of contentment as you leave
The hardest part is those milliseconds just before
Your lips part from your kiss when you know the touch will end
The touch of his hand on yours
or his hand on your cheek
or when he puts his hand at the back of your neck
I don’t want to forget those feelings but if the right man never comes along
I might have to.

Ok it does not rhyme or scan very well but any thoughts would be great

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over a year ago ivoryphills said…
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Very profound! And descriptive, too! Never thought a kiss would hold so much before reading this.
over a year ago sehdt said…
Thank you didn't realize it was that profound. It was written on a day when I needed to get onto paper what I was feeling.