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I would like some feedback on my story.

( link ) This is the link to my story on deviantART. I know that vampire literature is very much in the spotlight at the moment, but I would greatly appreciate opinions on my style. My inspiration comes from the works of Anne Rice, and I have tried very hard to recreate the language of 19th century London. Please read the prologue and the other two chapters.
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Uchiha-Sasuke posted over a year ago
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vampiregrrl999 said:
Wow! This is frickin awesome! I don't know how else to put it! Keep writing!!!
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Thank you very much. I will continue to write. It just takes a very long time to form a chapter to a standard that I'll accept.
Uchiha-Sasuke posted over a year ago
1-2vampire said:
Yes the vampire literature is very popular at the moment, mainly because of Twilight, people are looking for more vampire novels. I don't like Twilight, but I used to, and even though I'm ashamed to say it, it got me into vampires. I've got two shelves on my bookshelves full of vampire novels. (apart from one, I admit) But I'm writing about vampires right now as well, but as long as the plot's unique, it doesn't matter. (: L.G Smith has written tonnes of vampire novels -- Vampire Diaries, Night World. What I mean is it doesn't matter whether or not vampire novels are popular, they are still read.
This is very very good, atually. I love your style. It's amazzzing (: keep it up.
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Thank you! Yes I was also a fan of twilight, but there are far greater things than that! I just wish more people would see that.
Uchiha-Sasuke posted over a year ago
TeamRosalieHale said:
Wow amazing! I hope you keep up the work as it is incredible and I can't wait to see what comes next.
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There will be more. Thanks for reading.
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micahfemale said:
...it's so boring ...come on dude ...well, it's hell better than twilight ..but that's not saying something ...twilight makes fun of itself....
it's okay ...but it's damn short ...maybe add some details ...or something ...
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