This is a poem that I wrote for the novel/movie we all know and love, Twilight. I want your guys's opinion on it.

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Bury me deep inside your heart
And hide me in the dark
Don't let in the light
Never let me go, hold me tight

Don't ever let me go away
Please be with me and stay
I want to be buried in your heart
Yet it's so dark
Even though you love to hate
I feel as if this is fate

Please love me as I do you
Please make my only dream come true
I sleep in silence
I dream in darkness
Just hold me tight
Keep me away from the light
Bury me in the dark
Inside of your heart...