Inspired from the MTV show Moving In.
Warning reted - M.
Hay, my name Is Bella Swan I'm - 19. I have a boyfriend, Edward Cullen(19). I love him but ther Is one problem. I love a boy named Jacob Black(18) too. so I asked my parents for help. My mother Renee and father Charlie. ***knock on the door*** *oww, he's here* open door and sees Edward. *hello, love* he kisses me softly. *come In* we walked to the living room. ***knock on the door*** *just a second* I opened the door and saw Jacob. *hay beautiful* he hug me and we walked to Edward. *what Is he doing here* Edward said angry. *no, what are you doing here* Jacob said. *ok, boys sit down, you are here for a reason* they both looked at me, and then my parents came. *hay, boys. you both here cause Bella like you both and she asked our help* Charlie said. they both looked confused.
*so you will have to do things and then we will help Bella with that* Charlie said *now, the first thing Is. we are going to see what you have brought In your bags* my mum said. Jacob looks worried now. *come on lets go* we walked to the table and Charlie turned to Edward. *give me your bag* Edward gave him the bag and Charlie start looking. *ok, i dont really see something wrong* Charlie said and turned to Jacob *give me yours* Jacob gave him the bag and Charlie start looking. then he gat out a condom and I was shocked. *condom?* Charlie looked angry at Jacob. *yeah, like your going to get something* Edward said. *I..* Jacob didnt know what to say. *ok, so Edward you get A, and Jacob -B* Charlie said, and gave Jacob a look.
*next* my mother said.
*ok, now we are going to play wollyball. in the pool and we will see how Is better athlete and stronger* we all changed, me and my mother bikini and the boys in a surfing shorts.
*ok, so Bella with Edward and Jacob you are with Renee* we get in to the pool. me and Edward to one side and Jacob with Renee to the other. *and start* Charlie throw the ball to the pool and we started playing, all the time Edward was protecting me from the ball and It looked like Jacob Is getting tired and Edward not. and then the ball came and Edward jumped and hit the ball. this time Jacob didnt stop the ball. *yeah, baby. this is how we do it Cullen style* Edward smiles and looked so sexy with he's abs, I didnt even looked on Jacobs abs. *and again Edward Is the winner* Charlie said. ***after three hours*** we sat for diner. *so Jacob tell me, why did you brought that condom with you* my mother asked. *well, I thought... I mean protection first?* *oww, come on. she's nineteen and you eighteen. what did you thought?* Charlie said. Edward looked smiling at me and I smiled back. *so Edward what do you love In Bella* my mother asked.
*amm, well I love everything. what I love the most Is when she's blushing* and of course I blushed *and I love that she's always telling the truth., I love her eyes and jsut everything about her* I smiles at him and I saw Renee smiling too. after we eat Charlie called the boys to the back yard. *so boys this is where you going to sleep* and showed then two tent. *and you need to build then yourself. and you cant get In to the hous*
***after the night*** before my parents are going to give one of them the key for the hous they wanted to ask them last question. *we want to know why do you diserv the key?* my mother asked. Edward was the first to answer. *well, I love Bella and Im going to love her no meter what. as you saw sex Is not the only thing I want from Bella* Edward gave Jacob a look *and I think that with me she really will be happy* he said smiling to me. *ok, thank you. Jacob?* *amm, I really love Bella and I think that with me she will have beter life then with him* *ok, thank you. now me and Charlie are going to think we'll see you* ***after 2 hours*** Jacob POV *ok, here Is the key *Charlie gave me a key *If Its not the key, you going and never coming back here. you get It?* *yes sir* I said and walked to the door... Edward POV *here Is the key* Charlie gave me a key *If Its not the key, your leaving and not coming back* *yes* I walked to the door...
Jacob POV I tried to opend the door, but It didnt open. I was so angry and throw the key and start walking away. *fuck It, he's a dick... why because of the condom. fuck you* and I leaved the place. Edward POV I tried to open the door and It opened, I was so happy. I get In and Bella run to me. *I love you so much, I knew they will pick you. I love you Edward* I kissed her like I never did *i love you too. hay can you believe he brought a condom?* *no, god. I was so shocked. he's crezy, I would have never had sex with him* I smiled at her and we keep kissing
thanks for reading. please comment. :)
Warning reted - M.
Hay, my name Is Bella Swan I'm - 19. I have a boyfriend, Edward Cullen(19). I love him but ther Is one problem. I love a boy named Jacob Black(18) too. so I asked my parents for help. My mother Renee and father Charlie. ***knock on the door*** *oww, he's here* open door and sees Edward. *hello, love* he kisses me softly. *come In* we walked to the living room. ***knock on the door*** *just a second* I opened the door and saw Jacob. *hay beautiful* he hug me and we walked to Edward. *what Is he doing here* Edward said angry. *no, what are you doing here* Jacob said. *ok, boys sit down, you are here for a reason* they both looked at me, and then my parents came. *hay, boys. you both here cause Bella like you both and she asked our help* Charlie said. they both looked confused.
*so you will have to do things and then we will help Bella with that* Charlie said *now, the first thing Is. we are going to see what you have brought In your bags* my mum said. Jacob looks worried now. *come on lets go* we walked to the table and Charlie turned to Edward. *give me your bag* Edward gave him the bag and Charlie start looking. *ok, i dont really see something wrong* Charlie said and turned to Jacob *give me yours* Jacob gave him the bag and Charlie start looking. then he gat out a condom and I was shocked. *condom?* Charlie looked angry at Jacob. *yeah, like your going to get something* Edward said. *I..* Jacob didnt know what to say. *ok, so Edward you get A, and Jacob -B* Charlie said, and gave Jacob a look.
*next* my mother said.
*ok, now we are going to play wollyball. in the pool and we will see how Is better athlete and stronger* we all changed, me and my mother bikini and the boys in a surfing shorts.
*ok, so Bella with Edward and Jacob you are with Renee* we get in to the pool. me and Edward to one side and Jacob with Renee to the other. *and start* Charlie throw the ball to the pool and we started playing, all the time Edward was protecting me from the ball and It looked like Jacob Is getting tired and Edward not. and then the ball came and Edward jumped and hit the ball. this time Jacob didnt stop the ball. *yeah, baby. this is how we do it Cullen style* Edward smiles and looked so sexy with he's abs, I didnt even looked on Jacobs abs. *and again Edward Is the winner* Charlie said. ***after three hours*** we sat for diner. *so Jacob tell me, why did you brought that condom with you* my mother asked. *well, I thought... I mean protection first?* *oww, come on. she's nineteen and you eighteen. what did you thought?* Charlie said. Edward looked smiling at me and I smiled back. *so Edward what do you love In Bella* my mother asked.
*amm, well I love everything. what I love the most Is when she's blushing* and of course I blushed *and I love that she's always telling the truth., I love her eyes and jsut everything about her* I smiles at him and I saw Renee smiling too. after we eat Charlie called the boys to the back yard. *so boys this is where you going to sleep* and showed then two tent. *and you need to build then yourself. and you cant get In to the hous*
***after the night*** before my parents are going to give one of them the key for the hous they wanted to ask them last question. *we want to know why do you diserv the key?* my mother asked. Edward was the first to answer. *well, I love Bella and Im going to love her no meter what. as you saw sex Is not the only thing I want from Bella* Edward gave Jacob a look *and I think that with me she really will be happy* he said smiling to me. *ok, thank you. Jacob?* *amm, I really love Bella and I think that with me she will have beter life then with him* *ok, thank you. now me and Charlie are going to think we'll see you* ***after 2 hours*** Jacob POV *ok, here Is the key *Charlie gave me a key *If Its not the key, you going and never coming back here. you get It?* *yes sir* I said and walked to the door... Edward POV *here Is the key* Charlie gave me a key *If Its not the key, your leaving and not coming back* *yes* I walked to the door...
Jacob POV I tried to opend the door, but It didnt open. I was so angry and throw the key and start walking away. *fuck It, he's a dick... why because of the condom. fuck you* and I leaved the place. Edward POV I tried to open the door and It opened, I was so happy. I get In and Bella run to me. *I love you so much, I knew they will pick you. I love you Edward* I kissed her like I never did *i love you too. hay can you believe he brought a condom?* *no, god. I was so shocked. he's crezy, I would have never had sex with him* I smiled at her and we keep kissing
thanks for reading. please comment. :)
Ah, ah, ah ,ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
I seek you out
Flay you alive
One more word and you won’t survive
And I’m not scared of your stolen power
See right through you any hour
I won’t soothe your pain
I won’t ease your strain
You’ll be waiting in vain
I got nothing for you to gain
I’m taking it slow
Feeding my flame
Shuffling the cards of your game
And just in time
In the right place
Suddenly I will play my ace
I won’t soothe your pain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I won’t ease your strain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
You’ll be waiting in vain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I got nothing for you to gain
Eyes on fire
Your spine is ablaze
Felling any foe with my gaze
And just in time
In the right place
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
I seek you out
Flay you alive
One more word and you won’t survive
And I’m not scared of your stolen power
See right through you any hour
I won’t soothe your pain
I won’t ease your strain
You’ll be waiting in vain
I got nothing for you to gain
I’m taking it slow
Feeding my flame
Shuffling the cards of your game
And just in time
In the right place
Suddenly I will play my ace
I won’t soothe your pain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I won’t ease your strain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
You’ll be waiting in vain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I got nothing for you to gain
Eyes on fire
Your spine is ablaze
Felling any foe with my gaze
And just in time
In the right place
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little more fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, or Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do you think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
Bella swan was a shy girl,
she came to live with her dad who is shy as well,
She joined forks high school with no friends
But look how she turned out in the end,
A boyfriend whom she loves very much,
And her friend Mike who has a crush
She has entered the supernatural world
and now has to join the Cullen family as well.
Victoria is back and in a hunting mood,
Edward, Bella and Jacob camping in the woods,
Bella has agreed to marry Edward
and Jacob didn't realize he isn't very clever
Honeymoon in isle Esme is oh so great
until Bella falls pregnant
She has a little girl called Renesmee
And Jacob Black imprints on her and Bella isn't happy.
she came to live with her dad who is shy as well,
She joined forks high school with no friends
But look how she turned out in the end,
A boyfriend whom she loves very much,
And her friend Mike who has a crush
She has entered the supernatural world
and now has to join the Cullen family as well.
Victoria is back and in a hunting mood,
Edward, Bella and Jacob camping in the woods,
Bella has agreed to marry Edward
and Jacob didn't realize he isn't very clever
Honeymoon in isle Esme is oh so great
until Bella falls pregnant
She has a little girl called Renesmee
And Jacob Black imprints on her and Bella isn't happy.
All right guys, as you all have probably noticed my last chapter was a bit of a dozer, but don't worry my next chapter will be right. And just incase that you have not figured it out yet. Most was the chapter is correct except for the bit about going into the car. That bit will be coming up in the next chapter. Also don't be afraid to give me any advice on how I can make my writing Better any critasim is welcome.
On another note this whole story will only be bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine
On another note this whole story will only be bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine