Twilight Series Article: My New Moon Script (fan made)

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posted by okellies

I am a budding screenplay writer and wanted to write a script for New Moon. For lots of reasons. Mainly, to satisfy myself in case the real movie is not what I think it should be

I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have posted it over there too.

here are links to my screenplay
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This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. You will recognize many scenes I kept. You will notice some things that I have combined. You will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.

There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. You will notice them.

This is my second draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third or possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.

Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.

I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would love to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. You could think of it like that.

It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if you go according to the typical 1 page =1 minute rule. Some scenes do go by faster than others, so take that into account.

I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look forward to your comments.

Again, this is a fan made script. If you want to share it with friends, or what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of you gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.

I hope you enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether you want to PM me personally with a lengthy review or just give me a shout out on my comments, I would love it to death.

Thanks for reading!

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xDrama-Queenx hey do you know where i can get the twilight script please ???

tinkattack1843 hey dp you have it posted somewhere wheere i dont have to download it?

holly_twilight where do u get da actual script........

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posted by KatiiCullen94

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