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posted by karpach_14
Chapter 20
Damn when I start writing a story I cant stop. Please tell me when to stop..
“ivan!” I yelled in happiness. I gave him a long kiss. Ryan was walking by with his friends.
“dude I think ou’re out look at them” ryan’s firnd said.
“don’t worry I’ll be with her.” Ryan told him. I pulled away from Ivan.
“how did you some here?” I asked him.
“you said you’re grandfather would be looking after me so he took me with him” he told him.
“im sohappy right now” I told him and hugged him tightly.
“its about time, you make everyone happy and you don’t care if you get hurt in the process” ivan complained. Jake and Embry walked over to me.
“nessie” he warned me.
“no jake” I told him.
“you remember” embry told me. I looked at Ivan he was confused. He had no idea what we were talking about.
“ivan I’ll be right back, and please don’t jisten” I told him.. I let go of Ivans hand and went with jake and Embry I turned around and looked at Ivan he was looking at me.. we walked outside.
“what?!” I yelled at jake this was the second time the pack made me leave Ivan.
“nessie what are you doing?” he asked me angerly. So I returned the attitude.
“what do you think im doing?” I asked him.
“don’t show the attitude” he told me.
“your not my mom” I toldhim.
“youre on our land and there are our rules” he told me.
“its fine with me, ill leave your land and not come back if your rules r against me and my family” I told him.
“nessie its not what I meant” he told me.
“no one knows what you mean anymore, you’re turning into Sam for crying out loud!” I yelled at him and went back into the gym. Ivan was standing byy my randfather. I came up to him and Ivan gave me a bear huge. It was just what I neede.
Jake’s POV.
“nessie went into the gym while me and embry were standing there. Embry turned to me and stated talking.
“I think she’s pissed at you, seriously dude look she makes everyone happy but she’s never happy there’s too much drama in her life, plus this I don’t think she’ll handle it and she’ll slip” embry tld me. I turned to Embry.
“like you’re better remember yesterday?” I asked him.
“jake she’s going t hate all of us if we don’t do something” he told me. And then I realized he was right. If we don’t do something now, its going to be too late later.
“sam” was the only word I needed to say to make Embry understand. Paul, set, quil, and jared came out.
“whats up with the vamp standing by nessie over there?” jared asked me and Embry.
“im sorry you guys but I cant stand her being like this, we made her cry yesterday” paul said.
“you’re right we have to talk to said as soon as possible” I told them. I walked into the Gym and saw nessie standing with Ivan by Carlisle. Ivan had his hand over nessie’s shoulder, and holder her hand and looking into her eyes. Tat was a heart breaking scene. Then nessie got a call and ivan let her go nessie walked away from the crowd and into our direction.
“what?!” she yelled into the phone. There was a hurt look on her face.
“eric, just some to la push school k?” she asked eric. And she put the phone.
“damn!” she yelled and went back to eric. It was very hard for me to hear anything, so I just went to the guys.
“more drama” I told Embry. He shook his head in disbelieve. Sam came out of the woods.
“pack meeting” seth said in annoyance.
“ sam we need to talk to you” I told him, and he nodded.
“listen sam nessie is being hurt all the time, and she’s still making people happy, but she’s never happy” I told him..
“I think that’s why Emily send me here” sam told us. Paul ssnickered alittle. I looked at me. And he stopped.
“she wanted to have alice over to go shopping and because of the treaty..” I TRAILED OFF. Nessie came out of the gym and she didn’t see up. She got her wand out and a picture of her mom..
“frmes of figures step out of your picture” she said and everything went white and then back to normal except bella was standing there.
Nessie’s POV
“mom, I need your help I don’t know what to do” I cried. I felt horrible there was too much things on me right now and I could deal with them. Atleast not like my mom.
“nessie, I know you can do everything on your own” my mother told me.
“no mom not this time, there’s just to many things on me right now, isn’t there a was that you could stay, mom I cant live without you, I know dad is being a jerk right now but can you please stay for me,?” I asked me, she looked at me and I looked into her eyes deeply.
“nessie where am I going to live?” my mother asked me. I smiled.
“ at grandpa carlisles of course” I told her, and she smiled. I hugged her and I got a call.
“nessie so how about you and your mother comes home now?” my aunt laice asked me.
“aunt alice you knew?” I asked her in a surprised voice. I looked at mom and there was a pause in the phone.
“yeahhh. I kind of knew but I didn’t really want to spoil it?” she tld me.
“spoil what?”
“you’ll see” and she hanged up the phone.
“lets go” my mother told me. Then again I had to make a choice, go with my mom, or stay with Ivan.
“mm oyu go ahead ill catch up with you latter” I told her. My mother laft and I went into the gym. I saw my grandfather talk to ivan while checking the students health. There still was a really long line so I came up to my grandfather.
“grandpa can I –“ he cut me off because I think he knew wat I was going to ask him.
“go ahead nessie I already know you don’t have health problems” he told me. I wanted to say something again but he started again. “and you can tke Ivan with you” he added I gave him my brightest smile and a hug. Me and Ivan walked out of the gym and started walking toward the woods to go home, but ryan and 5 other guys surrounded us. We were standing in the middle.
“what do you want ryan?” I asked him calmly. But for real I felt mad my whole life was a drama and I didn’t want this to be more drama at all. I didn’t want this to turn into anther fight.
“oh like you don’t know” he told me I had no idea what he meant
“what are you talking about?” I asked him now confused. He came up to me about an inch away from my face.. I pushed him away with my hands.
“you wish” I told him.
“oh I don’t wish” he told me. He snapped his fingers. And the guys started walking toward Ivan and they grabbed him I could see he couldn’t move, because he wasn’t strong enough anymore.
“let him go” I told him. With an nesver seem expression.
“no nessie first you give me what I want” he told me and got very close to me again and grabbed my waist.
“what the hell is your problem?” I asked him. staring him right in the eyes.
“when I saw you I loved your beauty and I want to you to be mine” he told me. I rolled my eyes.
“im not surprised. You’re the millionth person saying that” I told him, and I took his hands off of my waist again. I moved away from him he grabbed my arm. I turned around and looked at his arm on mine. And then looked at him again. I struggled to get his hand off of mine but all I got was a big purple bruise but he still didn’t let go. I twisted it and somehow I twisted it the wrong way and my arm broke.
“ damn,!!! Ouch!!!!” I yelled and grabbed my arm. He let go and looked at me in a terrified expression.
“let me see it” he said. he broke it and now he wants to see it?!
“don’t touch me!” I yelled. Somehow I figered to get my cellphone out and called my uncle to come and get me because now I really couldn’t go home without help. I dialed uncle Emmett .
“hello nessie? Hows my favorite girl?” he asked playfully.
“ not good, can you come and get me at school?” I asked him.
“well I don’t know what will your parents say?” he asked still playfully.
“grandpa Carlisle is at school and he let me go home now pick me up please!” I yelled into thee phone.
“ok ok nessie where are you?” he asked me more serious npw.
“ la push school” I told him.
“the treaty nessie im sorry” he said apologetically.
“uncle Emmett sam will let you I promise just come and pick me up in a car” I told him
“okay” he said laughing. And I put down the phone.
“you better leave” I told ryan. I know its weird protecting your enemy but im used to protecting people.
“I’ll stay he wont do anything to me anyway” ryan told be calmly.
“your funeral” I told him. the guys still were holding Ivan I could see that he didn’t look well at all.
“let him go now!” I yell this time. Even though I tried being angry at them. I couldn’t. I guess it juyst wasn’t in my blood. Ryan nodded and they let Ivan go.. I wazlked up to him bbeing very careful with my arm. He loked like he was about to collapse. I put one of his hands across my shoulder. And he put some weight on me. After couple of minutes I saw a familiar car racing down the road. It was my car.
“tight car” ryan whispered .
“that’s my car” I told him and his eyes widened. Uncle Emmett stepped out of the car and was looking for us.
“uncle Emmett I need your help!” I yelled and ran to me.
“nessie what happened?” he asked me in a rush.
“get Ivan in the car first he doesn’t look well at all” I told him. he grabbed Ivan and layed him in the back seat. He ran up to me and was about to take me in the carand then he looked on my arm. There was a big purple bbruise on my pale skin you could even see it far far away. And then he noticed it was broken.
“you did this to you?!” he asked me in an angry voice saying every word apart. I didn’t say anything. Instead I looked at ryan. He followed my gaze and looked art ryan angerly.
“you” he said angerly “what were you thinking if I were you , I would be running off right now” he continued.
“uncle Emmett let it go” I told him.
“nessie get in the car” he told mewithout looking at me.
“uncle Emmett you came here to pick me up not fight” I told him and then he turned around and walked him me to the car. I got in the passengers seat and uncle Emmett got in the drivers seat. And wwe drovew off.
“nessie your father will kill everyone if he knew that you went here and that some human broke your hand” he said without looking at me.
“I needed to get away from all of the drama in my life” I told hm.
“nessie I know theres too much things going on right now in your life, but it doesn’t mean you have to run off” he told me. I looked at the road. In stead of him.
“you just don’t know how it feels” I told him with a sad voice. He didn’t say anything and we drove to the house. When we drove in the driveway my father was standing by the house door.
“oh no” I whispered. There was a really mad and angry expression on his face.
posted by surfergal
When I got to the hospital Carlisle met the ambulance people people and me at the entrance andax went a different way than me. . Carlisle e-rayed my my shoulder. He ended up telling me that I had torn a ligament ing shoulder. Carlisle told me that he could call someone at home to come and pick me up but I told him no thanks that I was going to stick around and see if Max was okay. I ended up finding Max in his own room with an I.V hooked into him and oxygen mask on him. His shoulder was all wrapped up in a ace bandage and had an ice pack on it.
Oh Max, I'm so sorry. I said.
For what? He ask....
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posted by bellavampire11
How did i think of this story?Well,it all started with this other story.But this story is completly different.I never knew the title of it.


One night i was walking down the side walk with my friend,Lucy.So what are you going to do tommorow after school?I don't know.Gwen, you don't know?No.Maybe you can come bowling with me and Sara.No,thanks.Why?I really don't like it.Come on.But...Please?fine.YES!Aren't you gonna ask your dad?Well,I am but i say that he is going to let me.And don't forget my mom.Haha.We started laughing.
Then, i noticed that we were in front of my house.Well,bye.bye!See...
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Why is Rosalie so unpopular in the Twilight fandom?

She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.

Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?

Can you imagine being shown up by someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.

Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after reading a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.

So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
posted by CoolMandyz43
“Let’s go back in the house Alice it’s getting too hot!” Cynthia moaned
“Alright” I said quietly as I picked my head up from being on top of my knees.
“Your going to have to race me again!” I said quickly, not giving my sister a head start.
I do declare that when I run I feel like I'm floating, I'm not sure where all this gracefulness came from, but I do enjoy running more than anything. I reached the door and jumped into our wide open living room. There was my parents and the Middletons; William, his mother Anna, and father James. This cannot be a good thing. Nothing ever...
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One month later
fist I was save by edward 2 times,he saved me from being hit by a van and when i was in port angels,I had Vicky with me we got lost and people were trying to take my baby she was screaming i was yelling then he came and got vicky and helped us out and took us to diner and we talk

Second,i found out he can read minds but not mine

thrird,him and his family were Vampires he thought once he told me that i would not want to see him anymore i said i dont care what you are

and forth,i think im falling in love with him he's great around Vicky,Vicky loves him,but im scared to meet his...
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posted by patrisha727
I will write Evening Star tommorrow! ^_^



The guy stared at me with his golden eyes. I couldn't recognize, desire? I shuddered mentally. I glared at him back, he was frozen as a statue, and so was I. Then ten he broke away from the gaze and turned around. I frowned. What was that about? Did I have something in between my teeth? Is my outfit messy or something. I turned around to Angela.
"Is there something that makes me stand out?" I asked her.
"Uh, you pretty much stick into the crowd pretty well. The only person that really stands out is Lauren." Angela snickered.
I sighed.
"Is something...
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posted by EdwardCullen604
"we're almost there" i said as we ran through the forest and came to the river at the bottom of the Cullens garden. the burning in my throat was way down my list right now-iwas too worried about seth-but Elena had made me hunt anyway and i was glad if she had no then...

"theres a wolf inside" Antonio said as we reached the house, Elena knocked on the door i was suddenly nervous what would the Cullens think of me i was supposed to be a werewolfs girl now i was with the vampires. Why did fate always have to come along and ruin peoples happiness, had fate decided that my future looked to good to...
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Chapter 1
The Story So far
Sam Devine is a Human living on the Planet Earth he met a race of Guardian angels who turned out to be an evil race who destroys planets and races and nearly destroyed Earth if it wasn’t for the help of Tridoamon a part of a Jurassic race whose planet got destroyed along with the Guardian Angels and unfortunately the Whole race of Aggronians. Now Sam is looking for a race called the Asurans for more information along with Tridoamon to figure out Sam’s Destiny

Chapter 2
Old + New friends

After the Assault on Solaris Tridoamon and Sam went back to his home to start a...
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posted by Cullen-wannabe
Okay, so basically, I think that the way Stephenie Meyer finished Breaking Dawn, the story could be carried on. So this the first few pages of the next book in the series, that I wrote last night, Called Crescent light.

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Crescent Light

Changing

    The past two years had been very; very different to the route my life had decided to take ever since I moved to Forks four and a half years ago. I had to admit, I was getting used to the terrifying, yet some how glorious turn my life had taken. Terrifying due to the many dangers Edward’s...
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K.Stew and R.Pattz Forced Apart in San Diego?
Fri., Jul. 24, 2009 2:10 PM PDT by TED CASABLANCA AND TARYN RYDER


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Is Rob Pattinson's off-camera romance with Kristen Stewart again being quashed by the Twilight studio suits at Summit?
First, there's no doubt the New Moon crew stole the Comic-Con show yesterday. Despite even Johnny Depp making a surprise appearance, he was still no match for R.Pattz and his awkward charm, not to mention the sexy Brit's real-life romantic interest, K.Stew.
There was some unexplained tension going on between Robsten yesterday, since the real-life...
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posted by rachel-rathbone
THE ALTARLAS THE FITH TWILIGHT BOOK

!!!IF U HAVE ALL READY READ THIS SKIP TO CHAPTER THREE FOR THE NEXT PART OF THE STOTY.!!!!!!!!!!

chapter one
"oh please mum ellie is my best friend please let here stay" renesmee begged
"nessie this life just isnt a place for a little girl to be"i hated it but it was true i even called her nessie. she looked at the floor her long black eyelashes cating a shadow on her cheeks, her long bronze hair falling on her face.
"ask our dad" i said sighing pushing the question on to someone else i couldnt stand hurting here.
******
"nessie you cleaned your room write...
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posted by Hellohoudini
Taylor Lautner Reveals Secrets To Ripped 'New Moon' Bodyby Access Hollywood   

July 17, 2009 LOS ANGELES, Calif. -- Taylor Lautner finally transforms into a werewolf in the upcoming second installment of The Twilight Saga, "New Moon," and the actor revealed the work needed to transform his body into something werewolf-worthy started the day after he finished filming the first movie.

"As soon as I finished filming 'Twilight,' I knew I had to get to work right away; there could be no waiting involved. The day I finished 'Twilight,' I came home and started bulking up. For 'New Moon,' I'm 30...
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posted by UchihaYuki
Sorry it took sooo long for me to get up, i had a lot going on.

-Yuki<3

“So...Jacob...” Alice said as she walked into the living room, Jacob was sitting on the couch with his eyes closed, Alice walked over and sat on the floor next to him. Jacob opened his eyes to look down at Alice. “..What kinda ring are you gonna get Nessie.., you haven’t decided yet.. So...” “Wait a minute Alice, I thought you couldn’t see–“ interrupting him Alice got up and sat next to him on the couch. “I have my ways... Edward read your mind, and he told me you where gonna get a ring.. So that’s...
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posted by surfergal
When I was driving home I was well above the speed limit but I didn't
didn’t care. I was thinking about Max the whole time and our kiss. When I
got back it was 1:00am. I walked through the door smiling. Alice,
Jasper and Edward new why but nobody else. I had to tell Rosalie,
Emmet, Carlisle and Esme. They were happy for me. That night me and
Alice went through every detail of that night. I knew she was going to
know the outcome of it but I couldn't help it. She told me that he
really cared for me and that on the night when I was rushed to the
emergency room he was terrified. Every time she...
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posted by surfergal
Max's POV

When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
posted by wickedwitch2
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.

But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.

The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.

Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.

As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.

She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.

I used to love HP until I read Twilight.

Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.
posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
The next morning I woke up to the birds chirping and a knocking well a banging on the door. I grabbed my gun out of the side table. I cocked the gun and headed down stairs. I looked out of a window that was over looking the drive way. There was no cars, so that means its probably one of the warwolves. I was happy cause it wouldn't be Jacob, he off hunting with the Cullens. Even though I was part of the family, I wasn't a Cullen yet. I have to be a vampire to become a Cullen. I saw Seth, Collin and Brady. Hey guys. Hey, we didn't mean to scare you. Oh its okay, you didn't, you just never know...
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"Mike Welch who plays Mike Newton in Twilight and New Moon recently gave an interview to MTV. He talked with them about Bella Swan’s (Kristen Stewart) scene where she attempts to get over Edward Cullen by going on a three way date with Jacob Black (Taylor Lautner) and Mike Newton. He stated , “I really should’ve checked with someone if this is information I can give away or not.” He said Bella,Mike,and Jacob are going to be watching a horror film at the movie theater,and that Chris Weitz is inserting his own mini “movie within a movie” into the mix.

Mike revealed that the film is...
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posted by VAMPirella1997
End of part 4:
When we opened the door, we were greeted by a shocking sight. A terrible sight. Because it meant that we hadn't left fast enough. We were being exposed to the town. And they believed...

Part 6:
I gasped. It was so quiet that only Alice would have heard. Alice was standing behind me. She stood on her tip-toes to see over my shoulders. "Oh my God." She murmured. Again, only we could here each other. Angela was standing on the doorstep, her face livid. What looked like almost the whole town stood behind her, all their faces the same mask of fury-and a slight hint of fear in some....
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posted by rachel-rathbone
chapter one
"oh please mum ellie is my best friend please let here stay" renesmee begged
"nessie this life just isnt a place for a little girl to be"i hated it but it was true i even called her nessie. she looked at the floor her long black eyelashes cating a shadow on her cheeks, her long bronze hair falling on her face.
"ask our dad" i said sighing pushing the question on to someone else i couldnt stand hurting here.
******
"nessie you cleaned your room write sheel be her in 5 miniutes i can here the car" the tyres rubbed against the gravil path emmett and jasper had laid so ellie and her mum...
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