Here is chapter seven. I hope you like it!! i got my ideas from the Twilight Books so there are connections, but the story has got different points in it! Please read, rate and comment. Enjoy!!
CHAPTER 7
Edward’s POV
She left me. I can’t say I blame her really. I murdered her parents. But I am hurting and I didn’t think she would leave with Sara. Of all people, Sara.
There is a huge hole in my heart, and I am struggling to keep it together. Emmett’s trying to help. But I know he feels guilty, he killed her father. I’ve heard him blaming himself. ‘Damn, why didn’t I just leave her parents alone? Then Bella would still be with Edward and he wouldn’t be moping.’
I have asked Alice to see if she is coming back, but she’s not. I haven’t hunted in 3 weeks now and I can see Esme getting worried. I’ll have to go hunt soon because I can’t go out in public like this. Everyone has been making a really big effort, even Rosealie, which is surprising. We have been playing lots more baseball, and they have been going on really far away hunting trips. But I haven’t gone with them. What if I see her, what will I do?
I am angry at Sara, actually I am more than angry at Sara. She wanted this to happen and it happened like clockwork. She is going to turn Bella into a savage newborn ready to kill any innocent human being.
Jasper and Alice are back from hunting. Why can’t a relationship be as easy as theirs?
“Edward, snap out of it, I need to speak to you” Alice chirped in my ear. Alice ever the optimist.
“What Alice, can’t you see I am not bothered now?”
“Oh you’ll be bothered by this” she smiled and dragged me along to the sofa where the rest of the family were waiting, all with the same confused expression. Alice was keeping me out of her mind. She was reciting the dictionary, of all things.
“Well, as you know, I have been keeping tags on Bella, and up till now she has shown no sign of coming back. But as I was out hunting, she changed her mind and started running back, but Sara has persuaded Bella to stay with her.” My heart skipped a beat and I only noticed myself growling until Emmett told me to shut it.
“So this means that Bella is having second decisions?” Esme asked, hope in her voice.
“I don’t know, but she keeps on changing her mind.” Alice smiled again.
I snarled, “Stop keeping tags on her Alice, she is nothing to us now” Alice gasped.
“Edward, I don’t care what you think, but I want my best friend back. She is something to me. I know you can’t get over her. If you were over her you would be Edward Cullen, not this weirdo who sulks around doing nothing all day” And with that I stormed out. I couldn’t take Alice rambling on at me like that. She was right, I am so not over Bella. But what can fix a hole in a heart. A heart that doesn’t beat, but a heart that you have given someone and they have ripped it out and stabbed it a hundred times over. There is a hole in me now. And it hurts more than being changed into a vampire.
I kept running, and I decided I would go and visit some old friends. It would only take me a day to get there.
CHAPTER 7
Edward’s POV
She left me. I can’t say I blame her really. I murdered her parents. But I am hurting and I didn’t think she would leave with Sara. Of all people, Sara.
There is a huge hole in my heart, and I am struggling to keep it together. Emmett’s trying to help. But I know he feels guilty, he killed her father. I’ve heard him blaming himself. ‘Damn, why didn’t I just leave her parents alone? Then Bella would still be with Edward and he wouldn’t be moping.’
I have asked Alice to see if she is coming back, but she’s not. I haven’t hunted in 3 weeks now and I can see Esme getting worried. I’ll have to go hunt soon because I can’t go out in public like this. Everyone has been making a really big effort, even Rosealie, which is surprising. We have been playing lots more baseball, and they have been going on really far away hunting trips. But I haven’t gone with them. What if I see her, what will I do?
I am angry at Sara, actually I am more than angry at Sara. She wanted this to happen and it happened like clockwork. She is going to turn Bella into a savage newborn ready to kill any innocent human being.
Jasper and Alice are back from hunting. Why can’t a relationship be as easy as theirs?
“Edward, snap out of it, I need to speak to you” Alice chirped in my ear. Alice ever the optimist.
“What Alice, can’t you see I am not bothered now?”
“Oh you’ll be bothered by this” she smiled and dragged me along to the sofa where the rest of the family were waiting, all with the same confused expression. Alice was keeping me out of her mind. She was reciting the dictionary, of all things.
“Well, as you know, I have been keeping tags on Bella, and up till now she has shown no sign of coming back. But as I was out hunting, she changed her mind and started running back, but Sara has persuaded Bella to stay with her.” My heart skipped a beat and I only noticed myself growling until Emmett told me to shut it.
“So this means that Bella is having second decisions?” Esme asked, hope in her voice.
“I don’t know, but she keeps on changing her mind.” Alice smiled again.
I snarled, “Stop keeping tags on her Alice, she is nothing to us now” Alice gasped.
“Edward, I don’t care what you think, but I want my best friend back. She is something to me. I know you can’t get over her. If you were over her you would be Edward Cullen, not this weirdo who sulks around doing nothing all day” And with that I stormed out. I couldn’t take Alice rambling on at me like that. She was right, I am so not over Bella. But what can fix a hole in a heart. A heart that doesn’t beat, but a heart that you have given someone and they have ripped it out and stabbed it a hundred times over. There is a hole in me now. And it hurts more than being changed into a vampire.
I kept running, and I decided I would go and visit some old friends. It would only take me a day to get there.
"It shocked me.I was not sure if she meant to attack.That's the only interpretation of her behavior that my past had to offer.But she was smiling.And the emotions that were emanating from her were like nothing I'd ever felt before.
"'You've kept me waiting a long time,'she said."
I didn't realize Alice had come to stand behind me again.
"And you ducked your head like a good Southern gentleman,and said,'I'm sorry ma'am.'"Alice laughed at the memory.
Jasper smiled down at her."You held out your hand,and I took it without stopping to make sense of what I was doing.For the first time in almost a century,I felt hope."
Jasper took Alice's hand as he spoke.
Alice grinned."I was just relieved.I thought you were never going to show up."
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie you know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... or with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie you know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... or with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
While visiting “The Ellen DeGeneres Show,” for an episode that airs this Friday — the same day Pattinson’s vampiric portrayal of Edward Cullen springs to life on the big screen, he denied having romantic ties to anyone.
“Now, are you single?” Ellen asked.
“Ah, yeah,” the British actor replied.
And it appears despite women throwing themselves at him regularly, Pattinson may be stuck in singleton mode permanently.
“No one else seems to get into a relationship with me. It’s really strange,” he told Ellen.
“People like screaming at me,” the heartthrob added. “Actually, they like screaming at me in relationships as well. No one wants to commit.”
okay, so, all these people are complaining about Bella's Lullaby. I heard, "Bella's Lullaby sucked in my opinion" or "The strings and the orchestra weren't supposed to be in the song" or "They need to cut out the orchestra cuz it sucked with that in it". Just stuff like that which is disrespectful to Summit, Carter Burwell, and all the people associated with the project. People don't need to say such rude comments about it.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a random piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a random piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.