Here is chapter 3. Hope you like it, as some of you may know I changed his name from Jake to Edward. I got my ideas from the Twilight Books so there are connections. Please read, rate and comment! Enjoy.
CHAPTER 3
He showed me a HUGE rock where we just lay and talked. I found out that vampires are immortal, and that he was 17. I also found out that only some vampires were gifted, Edward, me, Alice and Jasper. He said Alice can tell the future and Jasper can affect emotions.
I looked at him with an expression of shock on my face.
“Why did you stop breathing when I said my parents died in a car accident?” I asked.
“I don’t know” he replied with a dark expression on his face.
He kissed me one more time before we got up, hand in hand and raced home. We could run extremely fast, a blur almost. We were also very strong.
When we stepped through the door, Emmett wolf whistled and Alice beamed like a mad woman.
“I wonder what they’ve been up to” Emmett muttered under his breath to the others. But of course we could hear him, and he knew that. I growled at him, instantly annoyed at him for being immature.
But Emmett found this funny, “She’s feisty Edward, better keep control of her”
This time Edward growled with me, we slipped into a crouch, while Emmett just laughed.
“That’s enough guys, Emmett shut it. So what did you do? Oh, also, Alice wants to speak to you.” Carlisle said, a smile playing on his lips.
We started to walk towards Alice when she suddenly said,
“Just Bella, Edward. I don’t need to speak to you”. This made me angry and I hissed.
“Careful Alice she is a newborn and can be terribly temperamental”
I didn’t want to leave Edward, ever.
“Go Bella, I’ll wait here for you when Alice has said what she has to” His lips curving at the edges.
“But I don’t want to leave you”
“How long will you be with her Alice?” Edward asked.
“Oh only 5-10 minutes” she smiled coyly at me. Then suddenly she dragged me out and up the stairs.
“Where are we going?” I asked, bewildered.
“To change your clothes” she answered, laughing, “have you looked at them?”
I stared down at myself and realised that I had ruined my clothes. There were rips everywhere. It was a bit revealing.
“Why did no one tell me?”
“Because Edward liked it, obviously, and Emmett thought it was hilarious. If you hadn’t come in holding hands we wouldn’t have known you guys hit it off.”
She suddenly dragged me into, what I presume was her bedroom.
“Now put this on, oh and this and this scarf. Put these shoes on here is a jacket.” She had handed me some skinny jeans, with a low neck jumper and some sheepskin boots. She finally handed me a black coat.
“Go and get changed, we are all going out” she smiled.
Ugh, I hated going out, and, mainly, where were we going.
“Ah you’ll see”
“Can you still hear me? Well obviously. I miss you, where are you?”
“I am where you left me…”
I rushed downstairs in half the time Alice and I took to get up them. Instantly as I saw him, I threw myself into his arms, taking in his scent.
“Don’t let her do that again”
“Okay, you know it actually hurt me to be away from you then?” He chuckled darkly.
“I love you”
“I love you too”
CHAPTER 3
He showed me a HUGE rock where we just lay and talked. I found out that vampires are immortal, and that he was 17. I also found out that only some vampires were gifted, Edward, me, Alice and Jasper. He said Alice can tell the future and Jasper can affect emotions.
I looked at him with an expression of shock on my face.
“Why did you stop breathing when I said my parents died in a car accident?” I asked.
“I don’t know” he replied with a dark expression on his face.
He kissed me one more time before we got up, hand in hand and raced home. We could run extremely fast, a blur almost. We were also very strong.
When we stepped through the door, Emmett wolf whistled and Alice beamed like a mad woman.
“I wonder what they’ve been up to” Emmett muttered under his breath to the others. But of course we could hear him, and he knew that. I growled at him, instantly annoyed at him for being immature.
But Emmett found this funny, “She’s feisty Edward, better keep control of her”
This time Edward growled with me, we slipped into a crouch, while Emmett just laughed.
“That’s enough guys, Emmett shut it. So what did you do? Oh, also, Alice wants to speak to you.” Carlisle said, a smile playing on his lips.
We started to walk towards Alice when she suddenly said,
“Just Bella, Edward. I don’t need to speak to you”. This made me angry and I hissed.
“Careful Alice she is a newborn and can be terribly temperamental”
I didn’t want to leave Edward, ever.
“Go Bella, I’ll wait here for you when Alice has said what she has to” His lips curving at the edges.
“But I don’t want to leave you”
“How long will you be with her Alice?” Edward asked.
“Oh only 5-10 minutes” she smiled coyly at me. Then suddenly she dragged me out and up the stairs.
“Where are we going?” I asked, bewildered.
“To change your clothes” she answered, laughing, “have you looked at them?”
I stared down at myself and realised that I had ruined my clothes. There were rips everywhere. It was a bit revealing.
“Why did no one tell me?”
“Because Edward liked it, obviously, and Emmett thought it was hilarious. If you hadn’t come in holding hands we wouldn’t have known you guys hit it off.”
She suddenly dragged me into, what I presume was her bedroom.
“Now put this on, oh and this and this scarf. Put these shoes on here is a jacket.” She had handed me some skinny jeans, with a low neck jumper and some sheepskin boots. She finally handed me a black coat.
“Go and get changed, we are all going out” she smiled.
Ugh, I hated going out, and, mainly, where were we going.
“Ah you’ll see”
“Can you still hear me? Well obviously. I miss you, where are you?”
“I am where you left me…”
I rushed downstairs in half the time Alice and I took to get up them. Instantly as I saw him, I threw myself into his arms, taking in his scent.
“Don’t let her do that again”
“Okay, you know it actually hurt me to be away from you then?” He chuckled darkly.
“I love you”
“I love you too”
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie you know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... or with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie you know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... or with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
okay, so, all these people are complaining about Bella's Lullaby. I heard, "Bella's Lullaby sucked in my opinion" or "The strings and the orchestra weren't supposed to be in the song" or "They need to cut out the orchestra cuz it sucked with that in it". Just stuff like that which is disrespectful to Summit, Carter Burwell, and all the people associated with the project. People don't need to say such rude comments about it.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a random piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a random piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
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