Here it is: The long awaited, demanded Chapter 10!! Chapter 11 will follow shortly.
Jacob and I kept planning for hours in the cottage.
I decided that Mom, Aunt Rosalie, Aunt Alice, Grandma, Leah, and Emily would be my bridesmaids, and Jacob wanted Billy as a best man, and Dad, Uncle Emmett, Sam, Quil, Embry, and Seth as groomsmen. Uncle Jasper would read the vows. We wanted a house in Forks, in the woods, like Mom's and Dad's, but with a different design. Our interrests differed from theirs. We went to go see Grandma to tell her our plans for a house.
She and Aunt Alice were upstairs in Aunt Alice's room, with sheets of paper, sketches, and fabric samples scattered around them. This didn't intimidate me like I knew it would my mother. With a sigh, Jacob let go of me (the first time in almost a week) and kissed me, backing out of the room. "See you later," he whispered. I smiled at him, shaking my head. Afraid of Aunt Alice and her planning. How funny. I looked at some of the sketches while Grandma and Aunt Alice chatted.
"Wow!" I said, picking up a sketch. "I love this design!"
"I knew you would, Nessie!" Aunt Alice beamed up at me. "Take a look at the others while you're at it, see if there's anything better."
After getting through all of the sketches, I still loved the one drawing. It was a white silk dress with a low neckline adorned with lace. The sleeves were going to be tight on my arms and wrists, with a little sewn-on heart button on the side of each cuff. The front had a sparkly, thin but not see-through fabric over the silk, which was decorated with beads and more lace that continued to the skirt of the dress. The skirt was the same silk fabric, with long thin triangular cutouts of the same fabric and design of the bodice showing through. The dress was off-the-shoulders and then in the back it was a pattern of crisscross cutouts leading towards the middle of my back. It was perfect for me.
"Definetly this one," I said, holding up the sketch.
Aunt Alice clapped her hands and danced towards me. "Great! Esme designed the front, but the back is my style. I'll get the fabrics and start on it tomorrow with the same designer who made Bella's dress."
I gave her a hug. "Thank-you both so much," I said. "I can't thank you enough. This wedding will be perfect."
"We're glad to do it," she said, hugging me back.
I had to drag Jacob into Aunt Alice's room to talk to Grandma about our house.
"Of course I'll build you two a house!" she said when we asked her. She hugged me, then Jacob. "It would be my pleasure. What do you have in mind?" she grabbed a sketchbook and looked at us expectantly.
"Whatever you think, Grandma," I told her. "You're the expert."
"Just make sure it has extra-high ceilings and huge beds," Jacob added. "I'm still growing, you know."
Grandma laughed and started sketching. "Will do." she looked up and we were still there, watching her plan our house. "Shoo, shoo!" she said. "It's a surprise!" We laughed with her, but obeyed. Aunt Alice wouldn't let us hang around either, so we went downstairs. Uncle Emmett sang the wedding march for us as we came down.
I rolled my eyes. "Shut up."
"I'll shut up if you let me read the vows." he looked at me hopefully.
I sighed. He'd been asking ever since we had asked Uncle Jasper.
"No."
He frowned. "Why not?"
"Because I'll laugh!"
His frown grew deeper. "I'm not that funny."
"Trust me, you are." Just the thought of having Emmett being solemn, reading our wedding vows, nearly sent me into hysterics right then.
Uncle Emmett took a deep breath and sang the wedding march at the top of his lungs. "DUM DUM DA DUM, DUM DA DUM DUM! DUM DUM DA DA DUM DA DUM DUM DA DUM!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jacob lunged for him, tackling him to the ground. Within seconds he had him pinned, one hand firmly over Uncle Emmett's mouth. "Shut. Up." Jacob panted. "Can I read the vows?" Emmett said, removing Jacob's hand and looking at me. I sighed. "Fine. But don't be too funny." Uncle Emmett grinned. "Thanks!"
Uncle Jasper came around the corner. Uncle Emmett struggled out of the pin Jacob had him in and hopped away before Jacob could get him again. "Hey, bro!" Uncle Emmett said, clapping Uncle Jasper on the shoulder. "I took you job. Guess you got bumped down to groomsman." Uncle Jasper looked at me. "Ness!" he complained. I threw my hands in the air. "He sang!" I said. "What was I supposed to do?" Uncle Jasper grinned at me. "Understandable." he agreed. "Make sure to send out lots of anti-laughter waves during the wedding," I told him, rolling my eyes in Uncle Emmett's direction. "Will do," Uncle Jasper said. He went upstairs, to check on Aunt Alice, I guessed.
It was getting late, and Jacob and I walked to the cottage again for the night. This time Mom and Dad were there with us. Jacob and I held hands, but he slept on the couch that night.
Jacob and I kept planning for hours in the cottage.
I decided that Mom, Aunt Rosalie, Aunt Alice, Grandma, Leah, and Emily would be my bridesmaids, and Jacob wanted Billy as a best man, and Dad, Uncle Emmett, Sam, Quil, Embry, and Seth as groomsmen. Uncle Jasper would read the vows. We wanted a house in Forks, in the woods, like Mom's and Dad's, but with a different design. Our interrests differed from theirs. We went to go see Grandma to tell her our plans for a house.
She and Aunt Alice were upstairs in Aunt Alice's room, with sheets of paper, sketches, and fabric samples scattered around them. This didn't intimidate me like I knew it would my mother. With a sigh, Jacob let go of me (the first time in almost a week) and kissed me, backing out of the room. "See you later," he whispered. I smiled at him, shaking my head. Afraid of Aunt Alice and her planning. How funny. I looked at some of the sketches while Grandma and Aunt Alice chatted.
"Wow!" I said, picking up a sketch. "I love this design!"
"I knew you would, Nessie!" Aunt Alice beamed up at me. "Take a look at the others while you're at it, see if there's anything better."
After getting through all of the sketches, I still loved the one drawing. It was a white silk dress with a low neckline adorned with lace. The sleeves were going to be tight on my arms and wrists, with a little sewn-on heart button on the side of each cuff. The front had a sparkly, thin but not see-through fabric over the silk, which was decorated with beads and more lace that continued to the skirt of the dress. The skirt was the same silk fabric, with long thin triangular cutouts of the same fabric and design of the bodice showing through. The dress was off-the-shoulders and then in the back it was a pattern of crisscross cutouts leading towards the middle of my back. It was perfect for me.
"Definetly this one," I said, holding up the sketch.
Aunt Alice clapped her hands and danced towards me. "Great! Esme designed the front, but the back is my style. I'll get the fabrics and start on it tomorrow with the same designer who made Bella's dress."
I gave her a hug. "Thank-you both so much," I said. "I can't thank you enough. This wedding will be perfect."
"We're glad to do it," she said, hugging me back.
I had to drag Jacob into Aunt Alice's room to talk to Grandma about our house.
"Of course I'll build you two a house!" she said when we asked her. She hugged me, then Jacob. "It would be my pleasure. What do you have in mind?" she grabbed a sketchbook and looked at us expectantly.
"Whatever you think, Grandma," I told her. "You're the expert."
"Just make sure it has extra-high ceilings and huge beds," Jacob added. "I'm still growing, you know."
Grandma laughed and started sketching. "Will do." she looked up and we were still there, watching her plan our house. "Shoo, shoo!" she said. "It's a surprise!" We laughed with her, but obeyed. Aunt Alice wouldn't let us hang around either, so we went downstairs. Uncle Emmett sang the wedding march for us as we came down.
I rolled my eyes. "Shut up."
"I'll shut up if you let me read the vows." he looked at me hopefully.
I sighed. He'd been asking ever since we had asked Uncle Jasper.
"No."
He frowned. "Why not?"
"Because I'll laugh!"
His frown grew deeper. "I'm not that funny."
"Trust me, you are." Just the thought of having Emmett being solemn, reading our wedding vows, nearly sent me into hysterics right then.
Uncle Emmett took a deep breath and sang the wedding march at the top of his lungs. "DUM DUM DA DUM, DUM DA DUM DUM! DUM DUM DA DA DUM DA DUM DUM DA DUM!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jacob lunged for him, tackling him to the ground. Within seconds he had him pinned, one hand firmly over Uncle Emmett's mouth. "Shut. Up." Jacob panted. "Can I read the vows?" Emmett said, removing Jacob's hand and looking at me. I sighed. "Fine. But don't be too funny." Uncle Emmett grinned. "Thanks!"
Uncle Jasper came around the corner. Uncle Emmett struggled out of the pin Jacob had him in and hopped away before Jacob could get him again. "Hey, bro!" Uncle Emmett said, clapping Uncle Jasper on the shoulder. "I took you job. Guess you got bumped down to groomsman." Uncle Jasper looked at me. "Ness!" he complained. I threw my hands in the air. "He sang!" I said. "What was I supposed to do?" Uncle Jasper grinned at me. "Understandable." he agreed. "Make sure to send out lots of anti-laughter waves during the wedding," I told him, rolling my eyes in Uncle Emmett's direction. "Will do," Uncle Jasper said. He went upstairs, to check on Aunt Alice, I guessed.
It was getting late, and Jacob and I walked to the cottage again for the night. This time Mom and Dad were there with us. Jacob and I held hands, but he slept on the couch that night.
Ah, ah, ah ,ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
I seek you out
Flay you alive
One more word and you won’t survive
And I’m not scared of your stolen power
See right through you any hour
I won’t soothe your pain
I won’t ease your strain
You’ll be waiting in vain
I got nothing for you to gain
I’m taking it slow
Feeding my flame
Shuffling the cards of your game
And just in time
In the right place
Suddenly I will play my ace
I won’t soothe your pain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I won’t ease your strain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
You’ll be waiting in vain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I got nothing for you to gain
Eyes on fire
Your spine is ablaze
Felling any foe with my gaze
And just in time
In the right place
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
I seek you out
Flay you alive
One more word and you won’t survive
And I’m not scared of your stolen power
See right through you any hour
I won’t soothe your pain
I won’t ease your strain
You’ll be waiting in vain
I got nothing for you to gain
I’m taking it slow
Feeding my flame
Shuffling the cards of your game
And just in time
In the right place
Suddenly I will play my ace
I won’t soothe your pain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I won’t ease your strain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
You’ll be waiting in vain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I got nothing for you to gain
Eyes on fire
Your spine is ablaze
Felling any foe with my gaze
And just in time
In the right place
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
The hour has begun
Your eyes have now opened
To a world where madness craves
To a world where hope’s enslaved
Oh I tremble for my love always
Your window’s opened wide
Your innocence takes flight
To a world where madness craves
To a world where hope’s enslaved
Oh I tremble for my love always
It’s a world where madness craves
It’s a world where hope’s enslaved
Oh I tremble for my love always
It’s a world where madness craves
It’s a world where hope’s enslaved
Yeah I tremble for you love always
Your eyes have now opened
To a world where madness craves
To a world where hope’s enslaved
Oh I tremble for my love always
Your window’s opened wide
Your innocence takes flight
To a world where madness craves
To a world where hope’s enslaved
Oh I tremble for my love always
It’s a world where madness craves
It’s a world where hope’s enslaved
Oh I tremble for my love always
It’s a world where madness craves
It’s a world where hope’s enslaved
Yeah I tremble for you love always
When the thorn bush turns white that’s when I’ll come home
I am going out to see what I can sow
And I don’t know where I’ll go
And I don’t know what I’ll see
But I’ll try not to bring it back home with me
Like the morning sun your eyes will follow me
As you watch me wander, curse the powers that be
‘Cause all I want is here and now
But it’s already been and gone
Our intentions always last that bit too long
Far, far away, no voices sounding
No one around me and you’re still there
Far, far away, no choices passing
No time confounds me and you’re still there
In the full moon’s light I listen to the stream
And in between the silence hear you calling me
But I don’t know where I am
And I don’t trust who I’ve been
But if I come home how will I ever leave
I am going out to see what I can sow
And I don’t know where I’ll go
And I don’t know what I’ll see
But I’ll try not to bring it back home with me
Like the morning sun your eyes will follow me
As you watch me wander, curse the powers that be
‘Cause all I want is here and now
But it’s already been and gone
Our intentions always last that bit too long
Far, far away, no voices sounding
No one around me and you’re still there
Far, far away, no choices passing
No time confounds me and you’re still there
In the full moon’s light I listen to the stream
And in between the silence hear you calling me
But I don’t know where I am
And I don’t trust who I’ve been
But if I come home how will I ever leave
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little more fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, or Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do you think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
Breaking Dawn may have been a smash hit with Twihards all over the world, but the Golden Raspberry foundation was impressed for a different reason.
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little more fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, or Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do you think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little more fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, or Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do you think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
All right guys, as you all have probably noticed my last chapter was a bit of a dozer, but don't worry my next chapter will be right. And just incase that you have not figured it out yet. Most was the chapter is correct except for the bit about going into the car. That bit will be coming up in the next chapter. Also don't be afraid to give me any advice on how I can make my writing Better any critasim is welcome.
On another note this whole story will only be bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine
On another note this whole story will only be bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine
Looking Nessie in the face at the airport was harder than a challenge I went through as a wolf.
"Promise you won't forget me?" My voice was kind of shallow and.... I couldn't describe it.
"Never." The defiance in her voice was comforting.
"Even though you'll be in France." France. Bloody miles away.
"Jake, don't do this to me. Rosalie did my make up, and I like it. And anyway, I'll only be away for a few weeks. It'll go very quick." if I continue building the house, then yes. Bt that s unlikely.
"I'll miss you."
"Me too."
I roped an arm round Nessie for a last hug. Then, with her eyes misted over, she left. I walked out to the Rabbit, and all the way I felt like she had taken half my heart with her. Renesmee, come back, I silently wished as I started up the old Rabbit. I knew that, for 3 weeks, she would drip into my mind like a leaky faucet. Splash, splash, sploosh. Renesmee, Renesmee, Nessie.
"Promise you won't forget me?" My voice was kind of shallow and.... I couldn't describe it.
"Never." The defiance in her voice was comforting.
"Even though you'll be in France." France. Bloody miles away.
"Jake, don't do this to me. Rosalie did my make up, and I like it. And anyway, I'll only be away for a few weeks. It'll go very quick." if I continue building the house, then yes. Bt that s unlikely.
"I'll miss you."
"Me too."
I roped an arm round Nessie for a last hug. Then, with her eyes misted over, she left. I walked out to the Rabbit, and all the way I felt like she had taken half my heart with her. Renesmee, come back, I silently wished as I started up the old Rabbit. I knew that, for 3 weeks, she would drip into my mind like a leaky faucet. Splash, splash, sploosh. Renesmee, Renesmee, Nessie.