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Sorry guys 4 being late, had exams, ended just on Friday!!

Chapter 3

Norah's POV

I'm waiting for death to take over me, the pain, my whole body was about to die. Oh!! C'mon let me die!!
Enough of heart ache and oain..
I was letting out silent tears, but all of a sudden, I let out a loud sob. Why isn't DEATH coming??
Why is it taking so long??
Then I heard something, footsteps of something heavy but soft
THE BEAR???
not again, please please please...
Slow death was better than being ripped off, my whole body ripped of by a bear..
I sobbed louder.. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
Let me die alone..
Please Please Please
The steps got louder and closer..
OKAY!! If this is what fate has in store for me..I'll take it!!GOOD-BYE!!
It was coming closer, from what I could see it looked like a bear. But it wasn't the previous bear, it was sandy coloured..No it couldn't be a bear, its body was too defined..shapely. It came closer to me until it was standing over my useless body.IT WASN'T A BEAR!!! A WOLF!!!
I felt no better though, I could hurt me. It was double the size of normal wolves,if I stood next to it, it would be more than a foot taller than me.It was staring at me..Wy wasn't it killing me??
I looked into it's black eyes... SO BEAUTIFUL!!
Something in it's eyes was sooooooo dunno..honest?? Loving??
It made me feel as if it was human.
It would make me fell better if I cuddled it and slept, better than a teddy. Then I realised that I had stopped sobbing, I was calm..
Then suddenly its eyes stopped staring at me..it was asif it was having an inner conflict..then againthe eyes focused on me. What aws it thinking??
Was it thinking of sparing me?
If it was...Why was it??
WHY??


Seth's POV

I was lost in her eyes when I realised that I had to hurry. I couldn't take herr to the Cullen's in my wolf form!!
I had to phase..
God!! I couldn't help but be embarrassed at this time too!
I was running back to the nearest bush when..I heard her say" Please??" Why was she saying plese? Was she begging me to go away? I didn't let that distract me..I had to save my LOVE anyway, anyhow!! I phased , put on my shorts and ran back to her..
She looked at me and whispered,"Angel?"
Holy Cow!! Was she referring to me as angel? This time I was surely blushing..I felt my ears warm up but I didn't care. I knew that my face must have turned red by now. I got down on my knees, looked at her , still so beautiful...
I couldn't get over it!! I had to hurry!!

I took her in my arms..She held out her hands to touch my face, it sent electric shocks through my body. I started running!! FASTER!!! FASTER!!
I had to be fast enough to know that LOVE would be safe, to know that she would survive..
SHE WOULD BE ALIVE!!
I ran. Ran like my life depende on it..And then I thought: IT DID!!
The trees flew past me. They didn't exist, all that existed was ME AND MY LOVE
And the path that would lead us to the Cullens'.
Her new life..Her new life as a vampire??
A Vampire?? Would I love her the same way as I love her now?
Most importantly: Would She Love me??
It wouyld burn my nose to be near her!! MY LOVE!?!?!?
I would smell like a wet dog to her..Would I?She'd be a new-born..
From all that I've seen and heard and the amount of precautions Em and jazz took before Bella was allowed to meet Nessie..The way she pounced at Jake, broke my bone( not that I mind, coz I know it was her instincts).
But Bella was supposed to be more tamed than most new-born..
That Riley guy I fought..
She wouldn't think of me, for a year or so..Was it safe enough for others? Mom, Charlie, Billy...Nessie??

But I had to save her..MY LOVE!!I let the thought go away from my mind..I wanted her to live..
Live wouldn't exactly be the word. but she would be safe, would be able to protect herself, I'm sure the Cullens would love her..Alice I'm sure..Em would get someone new to compete with..
What if I'd smell like a wet dog? What if she'd burn my nose? I don't care!!
I want her to be happy..She'd be wild for a year..then she would be like everyone else..
All I wanted was MY LOVE to be happy!


(Guys, nothing much in this chapter, never been in love so...don't know how 2 explain..I tried my best though)
1) We never get to hear about Edward's bachelor party, and did Alice even plan a bachelorette party for Bella?

2) There was not enough character development for the Denali clan. I felt like they were just empty, filler-characters to give the Cullens allies later on in the book.

3) The story of the 'immortal children' was just randomly thrown into the story at the wrong time and felt out of place. I would have rather learnt more about the Denali clan than their deceased mother.

4) I absolutely loved the wedding ceremony that Alice planned (Go Team Alice!) and in my head, the dresses, decorations,...
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posted by patrisha727
For certain comments, *winks* I thought who should be Bella's roommate. I hope you like the idea! ^_^


The dorm was larger than expected. My eyes were wide with shock. I'm not even sure this is a dorm! It could be as large as my living room back in Phoenix. There was one large white couch in the center of the room in front of me facing the wall. On the wall was a flat screen TV. I check the number on the dorm. Room 34. Yeah, I'm in the right room. Is this the type of dorm that everyone has? On the left side on the room was one twin-sized bed and on the right, was another twin sized bed. Under...
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Chapter 8- Big News

January 1920

I had been feeling very under the weather lately. I was surprised... Charles hadn't hurt me at all since his arrival home. To tell the truth everything about him had changed. He seemed to truly care about my well being. Something I'd never thought I would see. This morning I told him I wasn't feeling well. He made an appointment with the doctor. Again... this doctor was nothing like the one human being I truly longed to see. Dr. Cullen. My personal angel.

I sighed at the moment I was at the doctors office waiting for the results of my many tests. There were a...
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posted by Alice_Cullen_
Newcomer to the Twilight saga, Jamie Campbell-Bower, dished to MTV about why New Moon will have a PG-13 rating. It isn't all because of shirtless hunks Taylors Lautner and Robert Pattinson, but due to some good lookin' naked guys:

" 'We just all sit there, completely naked, for one scene," revealed "New Moon" actor Jamie Campbell Bower, talking about a racy moment that was added into the upcoming film. "Yeah, it's me, Michael Sheen and Christopher [Heyerdahl]; we just sit there, naked'...

In actuality, the scene has a fully clothed Carlisle visiting the Volturi in Italy, only to locate Aro, Caius and Marcus in a bathhouse. 'It's a full-body shot, and then Peter comes in, and it all gets a bit awkward,' Bower said. "[Carlisle] is clothed completely. They're bathing in sort of a Roman bath kind of thing.' "
posted by rose_emmett
Okay so I think the next 2 chapters are going to be in Renesmee's POV. I dont really know what else to say so ENJOY!



Renesmee's POV:

Since I still had an hour until I had to meet him at the beach I didnt rush. I walked slowly through the forest listening to the birds and admiring the trees and other plants. As I walked I came across my dad and Carlisle walking back towards the house. I didnt pay any attention to them, I just kept walking.

When I finally made it to the beach it was about 6:45 and I didnt think Jake would be there already but he was sitting on the sand facing the ocean.

As I walked...
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posted by TwilytCraze247
chapter one. unlawful death

It had been a warm day for Rochester. But not warm enough for the sun to come out. I was in a happy and in an up right mood, but why wouldn’t I be, it was a couple days from marrying my fiancé Royce, he came from a wealthy, and respectable family my father had chosen for me. It was only right Royce and I was betrothed together. It was all about how the public viewed the family, I was told that from my mother at a very young age, I was also told that I would make the family very pleased when I was older as I would be the most beautiful girl in all of the world and...
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posted by rose_emmett
This story is about Renesmee and Jacob's relationship. Renesmee is full grown now and of course Jacob hasnt aged. There is still a treaty so the cullens cant go on la push. The cullens left to go to college and Jacob and Renesmee havent seen each other in a long time. This is my first story so it might not be all that good, but i still hope everyone will enjoy it.



Jacob's POV:

I walked down to the beach and found the old piece of drift wood Bella and I used to sit on. I sat there for a momment remembering all the things we had talked about, but then my mind traveled off to thinking about Renesmee....
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posted by WritenOnTheSand
As i look out one of the planes windows, my mind shifts from one thought to the next. My new life ahead of me is strangely different. But as hard as I try I can't be excited. Ever since my parents deaths two weeks ago, my joy has been taken away. I haven't even seen my grandparents in five years.

"We will be landing in just a few minutes. Please fasten your seat belts. If you are returning home then we welcome you back, if you are visiting we hope you enjoy your visit to Washington." I hear the captains voice boom throughout the plane.

Landing gives me all but joy. As I get off the plane...
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THE HEART IS SO EASILY BROKEN
THE HEART IS SO EASILY BROKEN
This is my own version , I hope you like it and please remember to comment
P.s. The beginning in italics is a flashback .





************Bella's POV**********

He took a deep breath and stared, unseeingly, at the ground for a long moment. His mouth twisted the tiniest bit. When he finally looked up, his eyes were different, harder-like the liquid gold had frozen solid.

"Bella, I dont want you to come with me."


He spoke the words slowly and precisely, his cold eyes on my face, watching as I absorbed what he was really saying.
There was a pause as I repeated the words in my head a few times, sifting...
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posted by renesmeblack
15. Problems
Jacob




Renesmee stared at me while I glared at Mark. He has been messing with this family for too long. I really wanted to tear him to shreds. Then the unexpected happened. I started to walk towards Mark when I was blown back by an invisible force.
"Don't. Touch. MARK!!!" Karrie screamed at me. I flew into Edward. Both of us were on the floor, and then we were in the air.
"Karrie, stop, you're killing them!" Renesmee yelled.
I heard myself choking and it looked like Edward was burning. But there was nothing to harm us. No flame was covering Edward, and nothing was around my throat.
"I'm......
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posted by team_robward
Chapter 14.
New Arrivals:

I just sat there for a couple of minutes, reading that last paragraph over and over I was truly mesmerized by it. I couldn’t really get over how sweet it was no one ever talked to me like this and he’s handwriting also helped.
“When you’ve finished reading the letter please write a reply, this is the third last reply we’ll be doing in class” Mrs Anderson announced. The class began groaning. The noise woke me from my dazzled state.
“Well you honestly didn’t think we were only writing to pen pals for the rest of the term did you?” Mrs Anderson asked the...
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Okay, Here's all 8 of my chapters + my two love stories.
[:

I've decided to make all my Twilight story chapters into a book like thing, So that's why i put them all together in this, I'm naming it "Breaking Twilight."
i was also thinking "Breaking Eclipse"
but I'm still thinking, but yeah.
I'm glad everyone likes my story! x]
theres more coming!
-Yuki <3

Chapter One: The Game.

It was
Saturday evening, I was sitting on one of the couches in my new family’s house,
I was waiting for Edward to come back with Renesmee or as everyone else liked to call
her “Nessie” which I was getting used to by know....
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posted by renesmeblack
11. Casper's Fate
Renesmee




I couldn't help but cry. Aro has my baby, who may be one of the best weapons he's ever had, through his eyes. Or he may be used as bait to kidnap the rest of us. Casper was going to live as part of the Volturi. Mark paced in the hall, trying to find where Casper was. Jacob had broken at least ten water glasses when he got a drink.
Now I was curious what he was looking for in the fridge. He came back with two bottles of formula.
"We have to feed the kids," he explained. Karrie rushed up to him and took the pink bottle from his hand. After one sip, she threw the bottle...
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hey everybody. sorry its taken so long i've had quite a lot to do. its not long but i hope you like it anyway :) Cari i hope the last bits okay you logged off when i needed the answer so i just went with my instincts, i hope thats fine with you??

part 3
Carlisle wasn’t listening to much of our conversation. He seemed preoccupied in his own thoughts.
“Are you okay?” I asked him. Edward suddenly let out a growl, letting go of my waist, he stalked out.
“What’s the matter?” Emmett asked.
“I know who’s after us.” Carlisle said dully.
“Who?” Esme pleaded.
“Victoria’s sister,...
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Chapter 16: Unspoken Favorites (Jake's POV)

As I was about to take my anger out on Edward, a crushing thought came into my mind.
My voice was unsteady. “I told her she would be ok… I knew all along that this was a bad idea and I went along with it. It’s all my fault… and here I am blaming everyone else. I’m sorry.” My head was spinning I had to get out of there. As I headed for the stairs a strange beeping started up in Amore’s room. A strange heart began to beat furiously. I paused where I stood about to head down the stairs. I slowly turned around ignoring everyone else as...
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Hey guys!!
So I kinda let the idea sit around for a couple days and now have a total of 7 people who would be interested in writing a piece for the contest.

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twilightGGlost
Edward_Bella234
_madz_
patrisha727
jamie_kataeff
Twilight597
dinosteph
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I am going to give this list another 24 hours and then tomorrow night I will post word limits, themes, and how judging is going to work. I'll let you know right now that we're going to keep it short, probably around 1500 words.
posted by twilight-7
I stared at Alice, convinced I’d misheard what she just said. She’d seen Charlie? That was impossible....no one could see him. Not with the Shadow Hunters there. But Mitchell said the Shadow Hunters were gone. So that means Alice can see him.
I smiled widely and jumped with happiness. Mitchell stood up slowly, finding it hard to believe too.
“What did you see?” we both asked together.
She frowned then, looking up at Edward. He nodded once. I hated that. She was asking him permission to tell me. Why did people do that? Edward wasn’t my owner. They could tell me anything they wanted to,...
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posted by _madz_
okay guys, this is really short. im sorry, i've just had no time this week. please tell me what you think anyway :)


part 22
“If there was only some way to make you see that I can’t leave you.” I whispered. “Time, I suppose, will be the way to convince you.”
The corner of her mouth pulled up slightly. The idea must have pleased her. “Okay.” She said agreeably.
I was glad to see her happier again but the pain was still flowing through me at full force.
A questioning look came into her eyes before she asked “So—since you’re staying. Can I have my stuff back?” she spoke in...
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posted by AdaLove
Laurent was an original member of James' coven. When James and Victoria chose to hunt Bella Swan, Laurent told the Cullens everything about them.
After this, Laurent went to live with the Denali Coven; despite living with "vegetarian" vampires, Laurent cheated the diet as evidenced by his red irises.

******Death*******

When Bella visited Edward's meadow, Laurent stumbled across her, having returned to Forks as a scout for the vengeful Victoria. He attempted to kill Bella (he was currently hunting when he found her) and he reasoned that being killed by him was a better fate than being found by...
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Hey. two in one day! Here’s the next part.

part 2
“Are you okay?” esme asked
“no.” I replied holding Edward.
“What’s the matter Bella”” jasper asked.
I let go of Edward and turned towards the rest of my family. All of them had their faces full of worry. I couldn’t hurt them again, this is my last time I told myself. I took a deep breath that whizzed down my throat. “ I’m so sorry.” I told them” I’ve put you in danger again.”


Part three.
“Well there’s no surprise there then.” Emmett chuckled. Rosalie threw a look of pure disbelief I his direction. Emmet shut...
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