Twilight Series Article: Dreams do come true Chapter 4

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posted by Darktimes104

I wanted to take a minute to thank all of you who read my story and comment...PLEASE continue to do so.(thank you...now to the story :D )

Emmett's POV

I tried to open my eyes, it worked for a minute. I saw her, my angel, the one that saved me. I tried to leave them opened but the pain got worse so I had to close them. After the pain subsisted I tried to speak, I heard screams, it was coming from me. The pain was getting worse now, it was starting at my heart and shooting all around my body. I was still screaming. "Father, Edward!" I heard someone call in an angelic voice. At that moment my heart began to pound against my rib cage. I thought it was going to break all my ribs. I heard a conversation going on over the pounding of my heart. "He began to scream louder than ever and his pulse is racing, I'm worried." A voice chimed.
I felt a hand on my arm then it was gone, then another voice answered, "His heart is dying, it is the most painful part of the transition, but it is almost over. I heard footsteps leave the room and another soft hand on my arm and an angelic voice told me it will all be over soon.
What did that mean? Was I going to die? I felt like it, the way my heart pounded against my chest. What was the whole conversation earlier about, the transition, heart dying? His has to be death, transitioning from life to death. The beautiful women, angel, who saved me from the bear had to truly be an angel. If the last thing I saw before I die was her, I be happy.

house_of_nightx, groovychicklisa and 3 others like this

Darktimes104 PLEASE COMMENT I love hearing what everyone thinks and if you have any tips to make it better please please tell me. P.S.I just like the monkey -LOL- that's why hes up there.

Jakeluvr101 I loved it you might want to make each chapter longer though other than that i think it was pretty good KEEP WRITING PLEASE !!!

Darktimes104 Thanks for the tip I will work on making the chapters longer!

1TeamEdwardFan I agree with jakeluvr101, because they are really good but over so soon :) p.s I like the moneky too :)

halunik Great!

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Chapter 20

posted by mrsblack_1089

OMG THIS IS THE LAST CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm going to post them in one spot and name it as a story, so watch for 'Sunbreak' please!!!!!! I love everyone who loves Janesmee as much as I do and I hope you read more of my writings!!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo--mrsblack_1089 <33333333

A little cry woke us both the next morning. "What's that?" I asked groggily. I checked the bedside clock. In my opinion, it was too early to get up. A second cry joined the first, and yesterday came back in a rush. I bolted up in bed, and the rush of blood made me dizzy. "Oh!" I stumbled out of bed and nearly...

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In Response to "Twilight sucks...and not in a good way"

posted by Jakesgirl94

Ok first of all this is not a twilight hate article. This is in response to one.Trust me I am a twilight addict.So if you are reading this and you have not read the link titled "Twilight sucks . . . and not in a good way" then you should go and read it.This will not make sense if you have not read that article(Which in itself does not make much sense).

Ok so , first of all this article made me laugh , it is not because it was funny but because whoever wrote it is probable being beaten to death by twilighters everywhere.So let me say this: "twilight sucks...and not in a good way"Sucks...and not...

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steph meyer speaks, breaking dawn and casting

posted by jpolanco

"In regards to the question, "Is Breaking Dawn the last book in the Twilight Saga?" The answer is, "I don’t know." It’s the last one for a while, at least. Of course there will be Midnight Sun, but that’s covering old material. I’m not sure if I will go forward with the Twilight characters–I’m a little burned out right now. Ask me again in two years."

"Breaking Dawn is in the editing phase. It it tentatively set for release Fall 2008. It could be later if we hit a snag in editing. Usually editing takes longer than a few months, but both I and my editors will be putting in lots of...