ok so i know that carrie ann said that she wasnt going to write this story any time soon but i got her notes and im improvising so most of this article will be my work but carrie anns ideas.
but enjoy anyway this is part 13 and its short, and _madz_ this is the part i told you about jake...

part 12
“Where is she?” Tara demanded glaring at hem.
“Gone for a walk ... Or that’s what she said anyway. Went hunting or something she muttered it so quietly I wasn’t quite sure what she said, sorry.” Kris muttered
“Where exactly did she go ... I want a word with her. She comes to our land and although she’s welcome she disturbs the peace.” Carlisle asked.
“Yeah I’m coming with you” Edward growled ant the sometime that Alice let out o frustrated sigh.
“Jacob whined like many of us that surrounded the white house wanted to know what was going on. Edward turned to me.
“She’s gone after your father ... again.” As soon as he whispered this Jake ran off. I still hadn’t managed to digest this when I ran after him in a desperate hope that I wasn’t too late.
Distant shouts came from behind me demanding me to come back... the sound of the river faded away.


Part 13

Edward soon caught up with me looking furious.

"Bella will you slow down love we need to think rationally here before we just follow Grace." I ignored his angelic voice and carried on. He signed loudly "some things never change, your still stubborn" he mutters accusingly beside me as we came across Charlie’s house.

I ran straight in through the back door and tried to focus on where Charlie is. I saw him before he saw me. When he did he looked petrified confused and then upset and finally pleading. I looked at Grace and Jake who was in the room too.

Jake who is still in his wolf form seems to have every hair on his huge body standing up and shaking in frustration. Grace though looks too full of herself with her plastic features all satisfied that we were all here for her own good.

Unexpectedly it became all too clear.

Grace has been planning this a long time, a along she was against me.

My bad luck never changes but I’m too furious to concentrate on this now me and Edward would concentrate on this later because right now I want nothing more then to rip that vampires head off and burn the pieces myself...

I growled and took a step forward towards her, but Edward and Jacob stopped me from going any further Edward grabbing me from behind and Jacob stopping me from the front.

Edward looks at me in surprise as he held me close in his arms. Electricity shot through my body as he does, he is always surprised at what I do, because I hardly ever let him in my head just in emergencies and to let him know that I love him more then my own life, but I think he prefers it this way.

When he spoke though I was too desperate to get to Charlie to feel the frantic craving I had for him to listen to his clear voice and give it the full attention it deserved, but I remember what he said and my response and the terrible scare the whole family had afterwards.
"Give me one good reason why i should, this is her plan. Don’t you see this?"

"Calm down Bella for god sake. Don’t lose your temper again today" but I couldn’t calm down. My silent unbeating heart seemed to stutter slightly and then stop. That is how bad I am feeling.

"Give me one good reason why I should? Can’t you see? She’s planned this from the beginning?"

Emmett and japer and the rest them arrived the wolves surrounded the house as they were too big to fit in to it.

Jacob started to growl in frustration. He ran at grace and she drops Charlie, Alice grabs him and turned him towards the corner of the room. Grace advanced at Jake and then...

Jake fell down on the floor shaking uncontrollably...

Grace has bitten him he is going to die.

Jake shifted painfully into human form and I let out a scream, all around me they shouted "NOOOO"

But it was too late

The venom has already spread

He is dying

And Renesmee, the Cullen’s and I can’t do anything about it.

...