Sorry I have'nt written in awhile. I'm also not sick anymore! I'll try to get another chapter up today.
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He just stared opened mouth at me, which in turn making me self-conscience.
"Do I have to drag you?"
He seemed to snap out of it, but it was still there in his eyes. But at least he wasn't drooling, yet.
He went off into the woods to go turn into a wolf. While I waited on the rocks I watched little flickers of my past. It was sad. Nothing good happened since I was a vampire. Except for finding my aunt, but even then it had down-sides.
I heard a whimpering sound come from behing me, Seth. I controlled my facial expressions, and got up.
"I'm fine. Ready to go?"
He nodded, and started running. I kept pace wih him, I felt...comforted, whole, when I was next to him.
I'll admit, as long as I was with him, I felt happier. Most of the time while we were running, I saw flickers. But to see them I had to close my eyes, so I wasn't watching where I was going.
I slammed into a tree, I wasn't hurt, but the tree was. I was flat on my back, eyes closed, seeing things. I saw a room, though I had no clue where it was at.
I opened my eyes to see Seth mouth open, and drool comming out. Gross. It better not hit me.
Then the drool splattered on my face.
"Eww! Seth! Nasty!"
I got up and wipped most of it off.
I turned around, and smelled. We were close to the house, you could tell. I brushed the bracken off my back.
I took a deep breath, preparing myself for what was probably going to happen.
Seth walked infront of me.
"Seth? Have you seen..." Alice rambled off worridly, before seeing me, when she did she tackled me. It wasn't a tackle actually, more like a jump/hug. But the surprise make me fall back on to the ground.
"MARY!" She yelled into my neck.
"I'm right here, you don't have to yell."
I heard laughing, and saw everyone else on the porch, except for Jasper, he was right behind Alice.
"Mary I..."
"It's fine. I shouldn't of told her that."
"But.."
"No buts."
He gave up on apologizing, which was my intent.
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He just stared opened mouth at me, which in turn making me self-conscience.
"Do I have to drag you?"
He seemed to snap out of it, but it was still there in his eyes. But at least he wasn't drooling, yet.
He went off into the woods to go turn into a wolf. While I waited on the rocks I watched little flickers of my past. It was sad. Nothing good happened since I was a vampire. Except for finding my aunt, but even then it had down-sides.
I heard a whimpering sound come from behing me, Seth. I controlled my facial expressions, and got up.
"I'm fine. Ready to go?"
He nodded, and started running. I kept pace wih him, I felt...comforted, whole, when I was next to him.
I'll admit, as long as I was with him, I felt happier. Most of the time while we were running, I saw flickers. But to see them I had to close my eyes, so I wasn't watching where I was going.
I slammed into a tree, I wasn't hurt, but the tree was. I was flat on my back, eyes closed, seeing things. I saw a room, though I had no clue where it was at.
I opened my eyes to see Seth mouth open, and drool comming out. Gross. It better not hit me.
Then the drool splattered on my face.
"Eww! Seth! Nasty!"
I got up and wipped most of it off.
I turned around, and smelled. We were close to the house, you could tell. I brushed the bracken off my back.
I took a deep breath, preparing myself for what was probably going to happen.
Seth walked infront of me.
"Seth? Have you seen..." Alice rambled off worridly, before seeing me, when she did she tackled me. It wasn't a tackle actually, more like a jump/hug. But the surprise make me fall back on to the ground.
"MARY!" She yelled into my neck.
"I'm right here, you don't have to yell."
I heard laughing, and saw everyone else on the porch, except for Jasper, he was right behind Alice.
"Mary I..."
"It's fine. I shouldn't of told her that."
"But.."
"No buts."
He gave up on apologizing, which was my intent.
Why is Rosalie so unpopular in the Twilight fandom?
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can you imagine being shown up by someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after reading a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can you imagine being shown up by someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after reading a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.