I'm sorry I haven't been writting as much.
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"Maria?" Alice hissed.
"Yup. She trained newborns, I was one of them. I shouldn't even be alive right now."
Silence filled the air.
"Maria, changed Jasper." Alice looked into his eys.
He nooded.
"If it wasn't for the angels, I would be dead now."
"Angels?"
"Actualy vampires, we do know their names, but we call them angels, because they free vampires."
"What's their names?"
"Peter, and his mate, I keep forgetting her name."
More silence.
"Do you guys know them too?"
"Yes. He is actualy supposed to be visiting soon."
"Oh."
I couldn't really think of much else besides that. I looked at the clock and realized it was late, they would be worried.
"Who would be worried?" The stupid mind reading thing was going to get old, really fast.
"I came here with a school. I kinda ditched them when I was talking to Alice, and that was a few hours ago. They won't even be worried, but I have to be back."
"Like a feild trip?"
"Kinda, though I paid for it. It takes some money to get where I was to here."
"Where were you?"
"Idaho."
"I though you lived in Mississippi?"
"I did."
"You can keep the binder for the night to look it over, I got ten more."
I stode out of the house. And starting running back towards the Hotel. They probably wouldn't care if I was dead, no one really wanted me. My mother was the only one, but she's dead. No one else wanted me, I'm not even sure about Alice. But part of me said she did. But I wasn't sure what for.
A connection to her past? Information? Or becasue we were actualy family?
But she had a family, and a mate. I didn't. It started to rain, just my luck.
Dripping wet, I ran throught the hotel, at a human pace.
"There you are!" Shouted one of the girls, she strode past me and hugged someone else. I went into my room, almost slamming the door.
I would cry if I could, but I knew I couldn't. No one wanted me. I changed into dry clothes, and stared out into the cloudy sky. I wondered what Alice was doing, probably with Jasper, having a good time.
She probably didn't even miss me. I was just a boring teenager, that was trouble and a freak.
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"Maria?" Alice hissed.
"Yup. She trained newborns, I was one of them. I shouldn't even be alive right now."
Silence filled the air.
"Maria, changed Jasper." Alice looked into his eys.
He nooded.
"If it wasn't for the angels, I would be dead now."
"Angels?"
"Actualy vampires, we do know their names, but we call them angels, because they free vampires."
"What's their names?"
"Peter, and his mate, I keep forgetting her name."
More silence.
"Do you guys know them too?"
"Yes. He is actualy supposed to be visiting soon."
"Oh."
I couldn't really think of much else besides that. I looked at the clock and realized it was late, they would be worried.
"Who would be worried?" The stupid mind reading thing was going to get old, really fast.
"I came here with a school. I kinda ditched them when I was talking to Alice, and that was a few hours ago. They won't even be worried, but I have to be back."
"Like a feild trip?"
"Kinda, though I paid for it. It takes some money to get where I was to here."
"Where were you?"
"Idaho."
"I though you lived in Mississippi?"
"I did."
"You can keep the binder for the night to look it over, I got ten more."
I stode out of the house. And starting running back towards the Hotel. They probably wouldn't care if I was dead, no one really wanted me. My mother was the only one, but she's dead. No one else wanted me, I'm not even sure about Alice. But part of me said she did. But I wasn't sure what for.
A connection to her past? Information? Or becasue we were actualy family?
But she had a family, and a mate. I didn't. It started to rain, just my luck.
Dripping wet, I ran throught the hotel, at a human pace.
"There you are!" Shouted one of the girls, she strode past me and hugged someone else. I went into my room, almost slamming the door.
I would cry if I could, but I knew I couldn't. No one wanted me. I changed into dry clothes, and stared out into the cloudy sky. I wondered what Alice was doing, probably with Jasper, having a good time.
She probably didn't even miss me. I was just a boring teenager, that was trouble and a freak.
Why is Rosalie so unpopular in the Twilight fandom?
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can you imagine being shown up by someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after reading a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can you imagine being shown up by someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after reading a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.