than dylan laughed nessie frowned "gee u guys cant take a joke! i dont love brittany! gee" he laughed, my heart was sinking tears filled my eyes, i looked away from all of them, bella let out a shaky laugh she went to talk to jacob, but nessie walked towards me "whats wrong?" nessie asked "nothing, i have to go bye" i said not looking back i bolted through the door into the woods. my heart broke into tiny peices i ran back to the cottage wich was now my home, i walked in i washed my face than i walked arouund than i found a room full of all of my stuff, edward must have done it, than i heard him walk in "hey,do u like it?" he asked "yes!" i exclaimed, edward didnt notice that i had been crying he was way to excited "well i want you to get dressed, coz were going to the house to have a party, bellas on her way home" he said, i hugged him i walked into my room, i cracked open the cupboard,i saw two beautiful dresses, alice i thought i smiled one was blue long and sparkly, the other one was white strapless it went down to the ground, i went into the bathroom and had a shower, i pulled the dress on and grabbed the silver heels i curled my hair and applyed mascara and lipgloss, i walked out pf my room, and out to the lounge room bella and edward were sitting on the lounge "omg britt you look omg" bella gasped edward smiled but i coudnt even in the slightest second look better than bella she were a knee-length blue dress "alright should we go?" edward said getting up, i nodded we all sprinted to the house we walked into the house,the whole family was there, i saw nessie she was too busy greeting people to stop and talk to me, my heart stopped there he stood, dylan but than i noticed another vampire standing next to him, she was gorgoues she wore a black dress, i turned around tears filling my eyes, i wiped them away than i heard him:"brittany over here" he shouted i turned around and faked a smile "hey, this is bianca" he said pulling the skinny girl close to him "hi" i siad my voice cracking "hey" bianca said evenly maybe there good friends? maybe there cousins? i walked off i knew it they were cousins she looked a bit like jake. After hours i decidec to talk to dylan looked around, than i went outside than in a dark corner dylan was kissing bianca, i ran away i cried harder than i've ever had before i went deep into the forest my dress was torn i didnt care at all, i kept running than i fell over i cried and rolled into a ball, i wish i was dead i cradeled my legs and cried, than i wierd scent rolled in, it was a vampire i stopped, than everything went black.
Ok don't get me wrong I love the Cullens but take a look at what I would do if I was a Cullen
I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride
I would go into my life story when ever I'm board
I would never sleep so I would jump all over
I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about
Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud
I would think about Jakes body
I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to date a girl like me
I'd copy Edward
I'd piss off Edward
^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^
I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger
I would jump off a big tree a yell "I belive I can fly"
And most of all I'm Crazy
So tell me if I should be a Cullen
I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride
I would go into my life story when ever I'm board
I would never sleep so I would jump all over
I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about
Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud
I would think about Jakes body
I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to date a girl like me
I'd copy Edward
I'd piss off Edward
^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^
I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger
I would jump off a big tree a yell "I belive I can fly"
And most of all I'm Crazy
So tell me if I should be a Cullen
Hi my name is Amanda and I have helped a few people out on fanpop. I'm in a college English course and wanted to put up and ad for myself! Anyone looking for an editor for there fan fiction I'm the one. I do not changes stories I just add more descriptive elements like how stephanie Myers is so descriptive. You can email your story at CoolMandyz43@Aol.com and then I will send them back to you and you can post it or change somethings I did. I would love to write my own fan fiction but I'm not a great idea person but I can really edit stories to the point of perfection! So anyone who wants a helping POV get at me!
This is for people who have been reading Esme's Story:
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
Its short sorry. its supposed to be a cliff hanger. the next one is a lot longer.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper said at once.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper said at once.