... Hi! Okay, I know this took a while, so I'm giving you a reminder of what happened last chapter. Yay!...
End of Chapter 12:
Karrie squeaked. Jeffery turned to her.
"Mom!" She whispered. They both pulled at my arms to make me follow them. Bella and Edward ran with me. It seems as though the chidren had the speed of a vampire. Then they did something unexpected.
Karrie jumped in midair, along with Jeffery. In Karrie's place was a bronze colored wolf, and in Jeffery's a golden wolf. Bella gasped. I decided to shift as well. Now there was three wolves in the hallway. We all ran farther into the halls, and after a few minutes, we stopped at a large wooden door. Karrie shifted and opened it. We entered a large room, complete with a sofa and mini-fridge. Karrie opened the frindge to a large stock of blood. I felt sick to my stomach as she ripped one open with her teeth and handed it to a pale body curled up in the corner.
A small hand pushed it away.
"You have to eat," Karrie argued. "Besides, you need to see who's here."
I saw two red eyes look up. I couldn't see much, because the figure was in the shadows. Then the person stood up and walked towards me.
Her face was soft, with purple circles around her eyes. Long, bronze hair fell down to her waist. I stared as Renesmee swiftly, but carefully, crossed the room.
...
Chapter 13. What's Happening?
Renesmee
We were taken to a large room. I cowered into a corner. Then I saw the children grew older. All three of them looked like they were fourteen.
Aro left the room. Jane stayed. She looked at me and smiled. I screamed in agony. Then there were three growls and my children exploded into heaps of fur. Three wolves got up. In Karrie's place was a small, bronze wolf. In Jeffery's was a golden-brown wolf. Casper was the red. Jeffery growled, and the others did the same. That's when Casper leapt forward and bit Jane's arm. Jeffery barked. The red wolf let go and turned around. Then he ran out of the room. Jane held her arm.
"Venom..." she whispered, staring at the bite mark Casper's teeth made. She ran out of the room. Karrie and Jeffery shifted again. I was very surprised to see their clothes were still intact. Jeffery saw how I was staring at their clothes.
"Mom, witch, remember?" he hinted.
I nodded, then gasped. My heart raced, and it felt like I was burning inside. I knew that I was part vampire... Was I becoming a complete vampire? That's when I remembered. Jacob told me that my heart stopped. I should have woken up a vampire. But Jacob put his blood into my heart, which fought the venom for a short while. The blood wore off, and it'll be a matter of minutes before the venom controls my heart permanently.
For three days I did nothing but sit there. I waited for Jacob to find me. On the other hand, I'd rather he never came here at all. He cannot get near the sadistic Jane.
These three days were hell. Karrie had many attempted -all failed- escapes, only to be led back in by Felix. Casper has taken to locking his room door behind him, keeping himself a secret. And Jeffery and Karrie both have tried numerous times to feed me blood. I never accepted. When Aro came to claim us as part of the guard, we were told that we may never leave unless it's for duty.
Finally, on day four, I heard somebody enter the room. I smelled Jeffery and Karrie, but the third scent I didn't recognize. Then I smelled blood coming closer. I pushed it away.
"You have to eat," Karrie pushed. "Besides, you need to see who's here."
I looked up. A handsome, tall Quileute was staring back. Jacob has arrived. I stood up, and slowly walked towards my angel. His scent didn't smell like a dog. I don't understand why everyone says he smells horrible. His scent was a lovely woodsy smell. He looked confused, like he was piecing everything together. Behind him, I saw my mom and dad. Karrie pulled them out of the room, and I could hear them talking outside, with the door closed.
"Nessie," Jacob whispered. It sounded like the nickname was sung by angels. I stared into his eyes.
"Yes?" I breathed.
"You're a..."
"Vampire? I know."
I was disappointed. There has to be something better to say, we're together again, after I was kidnapped! An, "I love you," was the first on my list. I turned away from him.
"Renesmee, what's wrong?"
"Nothing."
The first time I actually wished there was tears on my cheek.
"There's got to be something wrong. Is it the fact you're a vampire? Oh, honey, I love you, not what you are."
I felt his hands pull me back, against his chest. Then a pair of pants with a note appeared in midair.
The note said,
Um, you might want to put these on, Dad.
-Karrie
Jacob looked down and turned red. After putting on his pants, he pulled me against his chest again. I was shocked at how hot he was. Then he kissed me. His pulse quickened. His lips, like the rest of his body, were hot against mine. I wasn't finished kissing him when he pulled up for air. I forgot he would need air. Then I heard his stomach growl.
This'll take some getting used to.
End of Chapter 12:
Karrie squeaked. Jeffery turned to her.
"Mom!" She whispered. They both pulled at my arms to make me follow them. Bella and Edward ran with me. It seems as though the chidren had the speed of a vampire. Then they did something unexpected.
Karrie jumped in midair, along with Jeffery. In Karrie's place was a bronze colored wolf, and in Jeffery's a golden wolf. Bella gasped. I decided to shift as well. Now there was three wolves in the hallway. We all ran farther into the halls, and after a few minutes, we stopped at a large wooden door. Karrie shifted and opened it. We entered a large room, complete with a sofa and mini-fridge. Karrie opened the frindge to a large stock of blood. I felt sick to my stomach as she ripped one open with her teeth and handed it to a pale body curled up in the corner.
A small hand pushed it away.
"You have to eat," Karrie argued. "Besides, you need to see who's here."
I saw two red eyes look up. I couldn't see much, because the figure was in the shadows. Then the person stood up and walked towards me.
Her face was soft, with purple circles around her eyes. Long, bronze hair fell down to her waist. I stared as Renesmee swiftly, but carefully, crossed the room.
...
Chapter 13. What's Happening?
Renesmee
We were taken to a large room. I cowered into a corner. Then I saw the children grew older. All three of them looked like they were fourteen.
Aro left the room. Jane stayed. She looked at me and smiled. I screamed in agony. Then there were three growls and my children exploded into heaps of fur. Three wolves got up. In Karrie's place was a small, bronze wolf. In Jeffery's was a golden-brown wolf. Casper was the red. Jeffery growled, and the others did the same. That's when Casper leapt forward and bit Jane's arm. Jeffery barked. The red wolf let go and turned around. Then he ran out of the room. Jane held her arm.
"Venom..." she whispered, staring at the bite mark Casper's teeth made. She ran out of the room. Karrie and Jeffery shifted again. I was very surprised to see their clothes were still intact. Jeffery saw how I was staring at their clothes.
"Mom, witch, remember?" he hinted.
I nodded, then gasped. My heart raced, and it felt like I was burning inside. I knew that I was part vampire... Was I becoming a complete vampire? That's when I remembered. Jacob told me that my heart stopped. I should have woken up a vampire. But Jacob put his blood into my heart, which fought the venom for a short while. The blood wore off, and it'll be a matter of minutes before the venom controls my heart permanently.
For three days I did nothing but sit there. I waited for Jacob to find me. On the other hand, I'd rather he never came here at all. He cannot get near the sadistic Jane.
These three days were hell. Karrie had many attempted -all failed- escapes, only to be led back in by Felix. Casper has taken to locking his room door behind him, keeping himself a secret. And Jeffery and Karrie both have tried numerous times to feed me blood. I never accepted. When Aro came to claim us as part of the guard, we were told that we may never leave unless it's for duty.
Finally, on day four, I heard somebody enter the room. I smelled Jeffery and Karrie, but the third scent I didn't recognize. Then I smelled blood coming closer. I pushed it away.
"You have to eat," Karrie pushed. "Besides, you need to see who's here."
I looked up. A handsome, tall Quileute was staring back. Jacob has arrived. I stood up, and slowly walked towards my angel. His scent didn't smell like a dog. I don't understand why everyone says he smells horrible. His scent was a lovely woodsy smell. He looked confused, like he was piecing everything together. Behind him, I saw my mom and dad. Karrie pulled them out of the room, and I could hear them talking outside, with the door closed.
"Nessie," Jacob whispered. It sounded like the nickname was sung by angels. I stared into his eyes.
"Yes?" I breathed.
"You're a..."
"Vampire? I know."
I was disappointed. There has to be something better to say, we're together again, after I was kidnapped! An, "I love you," was the first on my list. I turned away from him.
"Renesmee, what's wrong?"
"Nothing."
The first time I actually wished there was tears on my cheek.
"There's got to be something wrong. Is it the fact you're a vampire? Oh, honey, I love you, not what you are."
I felt his hands pull me back, against his chest. Then a pair of pants with a note appeared in midair.
The note said,
Um, you might want to put these on, Dad.
-Karrie
Jacob looked down and turned red. After putting on his pants, he pulled me against his chest again. I was shocked at how hot he was. Then he kissed me. His pulse quickened. His lips, like the rest of his body, were hot against mine. I wasn't finished kissing him when he pulled up for air. I forgot he would need air. Then I heard his stomach growl.
This'll take some getting used to.
hello fanfiction writers
I feeling really bored right now, so i guess i thought about all of you guys/girls :D
I want to congratulate you all for making such awesome and great fanfiction. So it must be said, so everyone can read about you're fanfiction :-)
I read most of the fanfiction (allot actually) myself and i just adore them i sometimes print them out and start reading them like a book, it's really amazing that people are still so broad-minded :o)
*****To all fanfiction writers out there continue the great job and don't ever stop :D LOL and to the people who want to start a fanfiction on there own, good luck and enjoy what you write :D*****
I feeling really bored right now, so i guess i thought about all of you guys/girls :D
I want to congratulate you all for making such awesome and great fanfiction. So it must be said, so everyone can read about you're fanfiction :-)
I read most of the fanfiction (allot actually) myself and i just adore them i sometimes print them out and start reading them like a book, it's really amazing that people are still so broad-minded :o)
*****To all fanfiction writers out there continue the great job and don't ever stop :D LOL and to the people who want to start a fanfiction on there own, good luck and enjoy what you write :D*****
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i hope yOu like it!!!
i didn't know how my life will be has vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from then is torturing my self.
i felt like i'm trapped without a exit
the only thing thatr keep me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, nOw that they are not in mOre danger i feel more in peace.
But what will i shOuld tell charlie when the time to move arrive?
hoe he react to this, i think that he already know what we really are, but he is too scared to said it or just think about it.
But what i really know right now is that we are safe and will start our Happy Ever After.
I think!!!!
i hope yOu like it!!!
i didn't know how my life will be has vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from then is torturing my self.
i felt like i'm trapped without a exit
the only thing thatr keep me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, nOw that they are not in mOre danger i feel more in peace.
But what will i shOuld tell charlie when the time to move arrive?
hoe he react to this, i think that he already know what we really are, but he is too scared to said it or just think about it.
But what i really know right now is that we are safe and will start our Happy Ever After.
I think!!!!
im going to put an introduction to this one up today. it has to do with twilight and a band called Paramore(my two fav things-paramore and twilight)most of my friends like my writing but when i do post i would like some criticizing comments for me to improve with.
Thanks
<3 Danie
Bigger than the latest Indiana Jones. Bigger than the biggest James Bond. That's how big Twilight was yesterday.
The $37 million vampire flick, expected to have a killer opening day, had a monster opening day, grossing an estimated $35 million, Exhibitor Relations reported. One-fifth of that gross, or $7 million, came from Friday midnight screenings.
The box-office tracking firm said a $75 million Friday-Sunday gross was now a possibility. Going into Friday, $60 million was considered the movie's best-case scenario.
When the counting's done, Twilight's Friday take may rank as the 14th or 15th biggest opener of all time, having surpassed the debuts of Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull ($25 million) and Quantum of Solace ($27 million), to name two recent blockbusters.
Bolt, the animated talking-dog movie, was curbed by Twilight, grossing $7 million on Friday, Exhibitor Relations said.
ok, i know she loves both but its probably ovious who she loves more, but im not sure is it edward or jacob.
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she said when edward asked her,
" are you sure you made the right choice, i have never seen you in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she said when edward asked her,
" are you sure you made the right choice, i have never seen you in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better