please comment this is my first story
Bella’s POV
It was a cold day in Alaska but I didn’t care I was starting to read Wuthering Heights again when I remembered who gave it to me. I started to think of Carlisle, Esme, and my one and only love Edward when I suddenly had a vision of me living in Forks with them and Alice, Jasper, Rosalie, and Emmett. I decided that I would go and visit them. First I should call them because I have no idea how I will be able to get all of my stuff there. I wasn't planning to ride three times to get it all there.
Alice’s POV
“Alice what did you see” Jasper asked
“Edward got a girlfriend.” I said
“Eddy got a girl.” Emmett said “When were you going to tell us?”
“I don’t have a girlfriend.” Edward said
“Alice what are you talking about?” Rose asked
“Maybe I should have said he’s going to have a girlfriend” I said to them
Then suddenly Edward said “I can’t have a girlfriend because the only person I loved ever is trying to get rid of the stupid Volturi”
“What” we all said to him at once
“They wanted her to join because she is the most powerful vampire ever and they would not take no for an answer” he answered.
“Did you just say the most powerful vampire” Emmett said with a smile
“Yes. Why” Edward said “Emmett you would lose that fight after maybe a minute”
“How do you know” Emmett asked.
“She has every power that you know and more. She could beat me and Alice.” Edward said
‘No she can’t. Can she?’ I thought
“Yes she can Alice. She can put a barrier around her decisions. So if she wanted to give you something you would never know.” Edward said and he started to laugh
“What is that suppose to mean Edward.” I asked while Esme walked in and said “Edward that is not funny.”
I guess that Esme knew what Edward was laughing because Edward said “I think it is because she knows what we are talking about and shows me and you surprise for Alice”
“Maybe it is a little” Esme said back
“You’ll see. She can also show someone anything her thoughts even if that person is miles away.” Edward said “Alice give me the phone” After I gave him the phone it started to ring. He answered it and said I do too. Then Esme said “tell her yes, she’ll know what I’m talking about.” Then I heard a thank you from the phone.
Then I asked Esme “what is her name”
“EDWARD YOU DIDN’T TELL THEM MY NAME BUT YOU TELL THEM EVERYTHING ELSE EXCEPT THE OTHER REASON I LEFT YOU GUYS” I heard the girl yell through the phone
“Bella use your power to clam down cause I don’t think you can’t do it by your self” Edward said to Bella
Bella’s POV
It was a cold day in Alaska but I didn’t care I was starting to read Wuthering Heights again when I remembered who gave it to me. I started to think of Carlisle, Esme, and my one and only love Edward when I suddenly had a vision of me living in Forks with them and Alice, Jasper, Rosalie, and Emmett. I decided that I would go and visit them. First I should call them because I have no idea how I will be able to get all of my stuff there. I wasn't planning to ride three times to get it all there.
Alice’s POV
“Alice what did you see” Jasper asked
“Edward got a girlfriend.” I said
“Eddy got a girl.” Emmett said “When were you going to tell us?”
“I don’t have a girlfriend.” Edward said
“Alice what are you talking about?” Rose asked
“Maybe I should have said he’s going to have a girlfriend” I said to them
Then suddenly Edward said “I can’t have a girlfriend because the only person I loved ever is trying to get rid of the stupid Volturi”
“What” we all said to him at once
“They wanted her to join because she is the most powerful vampire ever and they would not take no for an answer” he answered.
“Did you just say the most powerful vampire” Emmett said with a smile
“Yes. Why” Edward said “Emmett you would lose that fight after maybe a minute”
“How do you know” Emmett asked.
“She has every power that you know and more. She could beat me and Alice.” Edward said
‘No she can’t. Can she?’ I thought
“Yes she can Alice. She can put a barrier around her decisions. So if she wanted to give you something you would never know.” Edward said and he started to laugh
“What is that suppose to mean Edward.” I asked while Esme walked in and said “Edward that is not funny.”
I guess that Esme knew what Edward was laughing because Edward said “I think it is because she knows what we are talking about and shows me and you surprise for Alice”
“Maybe it is a little” Esme said back
“You’ll see. She can also show someone anything her thoughts even if that person is miles away.” Edward said “Alice give me the phone” After I gave him the phone it started to ring. He answered it and said I do too. Then Esme said “tell her yes, she’ll know what I’m talking about.” Then I heard a thank you from the phone.
Then I asked Esme “what is her name”
“EDWARD YOU DIDN’T TELL THEM MY NAME BUT YOU TELL THEM EVERYTHING ELSE EXCEPT THE OTHER REASON I LEFT YOU GUYS” I heard the girl yell through the phone
“Bella use your power to clam down cause I don’t think you can’t do it by your self” Edward said to Bella
Renessemee Carlie Cullen
What is Renesmee going to do when she realizes she's only a half vampire, and she can't fit in with neither the humans nor the vampires? How will she react when mom and dad don't want to make her a full vampire? What if the Volturi were to offer her what the Cullens are denying her?
What if Bella realized that living forever as a vampire is not everything she imagined? What if the love triangle between Jacob, Bella and Edward were to end the alliance between the werewolves and the vampires?
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