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Chapter two
I started to gain feel of my body again. But then wished i had stayed in the blackness.My neck started burning and so did my wrist and ankles. The fire was moving its way through my body. Burning everything in its path.
I wondered what i did to go to hell. I couldnt think of anything. I was only 17.
Then i started screaming for anyone to help, but no one came. I was alone. Trapped.
Sometimes i stopped screaming. There wasnt any point. No one was coming.
After what seemed like hours some one came in. As soon as he walked into the room i started screaming. It was that man from the street.
"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?" I started screaming t him. This was because of him. He waited until i stopped speaking then started to speak.
"You are turning into a vampire..." I just stared at him in disbelief. Vampire. But they dont exist. There just myths. Arent they? I realised he was still talking so i started to listen.
"i made you because you have to help me destroy the other coven here."
I started to believe what he was telling me. But i didnt choose this. I didnt want to destroy anyone. I would have to find a way to escape.
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I was sure by now my body had turned to charcoal. I had closed my eyes because it helped my try and think of something besides the fire.
When the fire started fading from my finger tips. This is good this means that its stopping, but then my heart got hotter. How was that even possible? The fire also started fading from my toes but my heart got hotter even still.
Then all of a sudden my heart set of, beating double time. I just closed my eyes and used all my strength not to scream.
Then my heart stuttered and stopped. I opened my eyes. I could see everything. I stood up quickly. A move that should have made my vision blury but everything stayed clear.
James (The vampire that made her) had gone out hunting, he had only left about 20 minutes ago so he shouldnt be home soon.
This was my chance. I had to get out of here.
But i knew that if i crossed paths with any humans i wouldnt be able to help my self. So i took a deep breath and ran out of the door.
I wasnt breathing until i got somewhere free of human scent. I didnt want to harm humans because of what i have become. So i ran to a forest, where i knew people never walked. It was in a town called forks.
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I had been walking round the forest for two days. I hadnt eaten. I dont know how i could have so much control, but i did. I stayed in the deep forest. I saw an opening ahead so i decided to have a look.
I walked from the trees and a my eyes widened. My skin looked like it was embedded with thousands of diamonds. It looked beautiful.
I looked around and i was in a lovely meadow. There were gorgeous wild flowers growing. I went and sat in the middle of it and just stared at the beauty.
But then i heard something behind me. My natural instincts took over. I stood up and crouched ready to pounce and a growl came through my lips. But my eyes widened at what walked through the trees.
Chapter two
I started to gain feel of my body again. But then wished i had stayed in the blackness.My neck started burning and so did my wrist and ankles. The fire was moving its way through my body. Burning everything in its path.
I wondered what i did to go to hell. I couldnt think of anything. I was only 17.
Then i started screaming for anyone to help, but no one came. I was alone. Trapped.
Sometimes i stopped screaming. There wasnt any point. No one was coming.
After what seemed like hours some one came in. As soon as he walked into the room i started screaming. It was that man from the street.
"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?" I started screaming t him. This was because of him. He waited until i stopped speaking then started to speak.
"You are turning into a vampire..." I just stared at him in disbelief. Vampire. But they dont exist. There just myths. Arent they? I realised he was still talking so i started to listen.
"i made you because you have to help me destroy the other coven here."
I started to believe what he was telling me. But i didnt choose this. I didnt want to destroy anyone. I would have to find a way to escape.
******************
I was sure by now my body had turned to charcoal. I had closed my eyes because it helped my try and think of something besides the fire.
When the fire started fading from my finger tips. This is good this means that its stopping, but then my heart got hotter. How was that even possible? The fire also started fading from my toes but my heart got hotter even still.
Then all of a sudden my heart set of, beating double time. I just closed my eyes and used all my strength not to scream.
Then my heart stuttered and stopped. I opened my eyes. I could see everything. I stood up quickly. A move that should have made my vision blury but everything stayed clear.
James (The vampire that made her) had gone out hunting, he had only left about 20 minutes ago so he shouldnt be home soon.
This was my chance. I had to get out of here.
But i knew that if i crossed paths with any humans i wouldnt be able to help my self. So i took a deep breath and ran out of the door.
I wasnt breathing until i got somewhere free of human scent. I didnt want to harm humans because of what i have become. So i ran to a forest, where i knew people never walked. It was in a town called forks.
**********
I had been walking round the forest for two days. I hadnt eaten. I dont know how i could have so much control, but i did. I stayed in the deep forest. I saw an opening ahead so i decided to have a look.
I walked from the trees and a my eyes widened. My skin looked like it was embedded with thousands of diamonds. It looked beautiful.
I looked around and i was in a lovely meadow. There were gorgeous wild flowers growing. I went and sat in the middle of it and just stared at the beauty.
But then i heard something behind me. My natural instincts took over. I stood up and crouched ready to pounce and a growl came through my lips. But my eyes widened at what walked through the trees.
