*I know it may confuse you that Alice can see Renesmee, but in my version Alice has always been able to*
Renesmee’s Point Of View
My mind was conjuring up so many possibilities as a bounded up the front porch steps to my house. I had been at Jacob’s the whole day and then my mom called and told me to come over with Jacob as soon as possible. I was reaching for the door handle, but the door flew open before I had the chance to open the door.
“Surprise!” A chorus of voices shouted around me. Everyone was there. Mom, dad, Auntie Alice, Uncle Jasper, Aunt Rosalie, Uncle Emmett, Carlisle, Esme, Grandpa Charlie, and most of the pack from La Push.
I took a startled jump backwards and Jacob caught me from behind.
“Happy Birthday” he whispered lovingly into my ear.
I couldn’t help the wide grin that crossed my face. Jacob and I moved our way through the door and everyone was surrounding me with “Happy Birthday’s” all around. My mom and dad both gave me a big hug and my mom kissed me on the forehead.
“Happy 12th Birthday Renesmee,” My mom laughed “gave you quite the scare didn’t we?”
“No.” I lied. My dad laughed obviously reading my thoughts. If he wasn’t around I would have gotten away with the lie too. I was a good liar.
“Renesmee,” Auntie Alice called from the kitchen “we made you a cake!”
I’m sure she didn’t forget the fact that I didn’t eat human food and that the cake was more meant for my Jacob and his pack, but it was the thought that counted. I flashed her a grin. “Chocolate I hope?”
“Of course!” she laughed. All of a sudden, her face went blank. The cake dropped from her hands and splattered onto the floor. Uncle Jasper was at her side in a flash.
“Alice, Alice! What’s wrong? Alice!” he whispered to her. Panic clearly on his features.
Dad had the same blank expression as Auntie Alice as he allowed himself into her mind.
Some of our guest’s faces were puzzled. Some worried. I’m pretty sure mine was a mixture of both.
“Dad?” I asked as I moved to stand at his side. “Dad, what did Aunt Alice see?”
He was frozen for a second then glanced down to answer my question. “You, Renesmee.”
Renesmee’s Point Of View
My mind was conjuring up so many possibilities as a bounded up the front porch steps to my house. I had been at Jacob’s the whole day and then my mom called and told me to come over with Jacob as soon as possible. I was reaching for the door handle, but the door flew open before I had the chance to open the door.
“Surprise!” A chorus of voices shouted around me. Everyone was there. Mom, dad, Auntie Alice, Uncle Jasper, Aunt Rosalie, Uncle Emmett, Carlisle, Esme, Grandpa Charlie, and most of the pack from La Push.
I took a startled jump backwards and Jacob caught me from behind.
“Happy Birthday” he whispered lovingly into my ear.
I couldn’t help the wide grin that crossed my face. Jacob and I moved our way through the door and everyone was surrounding me with “Happy Birthday’s” all around. My mom and dad both gave me a big hug and my mom kissed me on the forehead.
“Happy 12th Birthday Renesmee,” My mom laughed “gave you quite the scare didn’t we?”
“No.” I lied. My dad laughed obviously reading my thoughts. If he wasn’t around I would have gotten away with the lie too. I was a good liar.
“Renesmee,” Auntie Alice called from the kitchen “we made you a cake!”
I’m sure she didn’t forget the fact that I didn’t eat human food and that the cake was more meant for my Jacob and his pack, but it was the thought that counted. I flashed her a grin. “Chocolate I hope?”
“Of course!” she laughed. All of a sudden, her face went blank. The cake dropped from her hands and splattered onto the floor. Uncle Jasper was at her side in a flash.
“Alice, Alice! What’s wrong? Alice!” he whispered to her. Panic clearly on his features.
Dad had the same blank expression as Auntie Alice as he allowed himself into her mind.
Some of our guest’s faces were puzzled. Some worried. I’m pretty sure mine was a mixture of both.
“Dad?” I asked as I moved to stand at his side. “Dad, what did Aunt Alice see?”
He was frozen for a second then glanced down to answer my question. “You, Renesmee.”
Jane's POV
Me and the others quickly approched Forks hospital, I looked around. Then i spun around a nodded. The others took off going around back. I walked to the front, I held a single gun. But i knew I didnt need it! *giggle*
Renesme lay in pain on the rock hard hospital. She moaned in pain. "It's ok" Jacob said softly. *Screaming in distince* "What...was that?" Bella inqiured.Edward shook his head. For he didnt know. *gunshots* Bella and Edward stood up, frightened. "Edward go check whats happining,I'll call Alice and the others ok?" Edward agreed and ran out the room. Bella quickly dialed her other family member's. On the other line, Alice and the whole family listened. "Well be there in 5 miniutes!" Shouted Alice into the phone. 5 minutes later, the rest of the cullens arrived, rushing to a certain room, with a certain girl crying out in pain.
Me and the others quickly approched Forks hospital, I looked around. Then i spun around a nodded. The others took off going around back. I walked to the front, I held a single gun. But i knew I didnt need it! *giggle*
Renesme lay in pain on the rock hard hospital. She moaned in pain. "It's ok" Jacob said softly. *Screaming in distince* "What...was that?" Bella inqiured.Edward shook his head. For he didnt know. *gunshots* Bella and Edward stood up, frightened. "Edward go check whats happining,I'll call Alice and the others ok?" Edward agreed and ran out the room. Bella quickly dialed her other family member's. On the other line, Alice and the whole family listened. "Well be there in 5 miniutes!" Shouted Alice into the phone. 5 minutes later, the rest of the cullens arrived, rushing to a certain room, with a certain girl crying out in pain.
I am sorry that i hvae not been on in almost a year i discovered FanFiction.net and fell in love with it.
I'm also sorry to say that i may not finish this story. I will either change to where it is Bella and either Jasper, Sam or Paul. I am leaning more to Jasper. The reason for this is because I have fallen in love with Jasper, Sam and Paul being with Bella. Along with a little bit Jared.
Or I will allow someone to take over this story. I already have someone in mind to cintinue it if that person still wants to write it.
I have yet to decided which one it will take me a while to choose which one with school softball and explorers.
Please commett cause I will look at those and they will also help me decide which one
I'm also sorry to say that i may not finish this story. I will either change to where it is Bella and either Jasper, Sam or Paul. I am leaning more to Jasper. The reason for this is because I have fallen in love with Jasper, Sam and Paul being with Bella. Along with a little bit Jared.
Or I will allow someone to take over this story. I already have someone in mind to cintinue it if that person still wants to write it.
I have yet to decided which one it will take me a while to choose which one with school softball and explorers.
Please commett cause I will look at those and they will also help me decide which one
“Everybody likes to make fun of “Twilight” – adults, children, house pets – but the producers of the films threw a monkey wrench in the gears of the irony machine by stuffing the soundtrack to their latest effort full of awesome songs from ultra-cool indie bands. “Eclipse” is a who’s who of moody indie rock, featuring a lineup that would make Pitchfork’s brains explode: Beck, Bat For Lashes, Metric, Vampire Weekend, Muse, the Black Keys…the list goes on and on. Perhaps this all shouldn’t be surprising given that music supervisor Alexandra Patsavas made a name for herself turning television’s “The O.C.” into an avenue for indie rock exposure, but it’s still a very pleasant surprise to see the music from a “Twilight” film become the “Singles” soundtrack of the aughts.”