heyy everyone.. umm i wanna know how u like the changes i made. if i kept the events the same i thought it would be to much lyk the original version, but i may be wrong. i would appreciate the comments and suggestions. thanks!!



Okay I narrowly escaped Edward yesterday so I need to be really careful. So I promised I would tell you about what happened in the past few days. We were all in the main house and Alice was dancing around fixing things that were already perfect so I knew something was up. She was really anxious and it was almost like she was waiting for something. All of a sudden there was a loud crash and we all whipped our heads around. I felt myself gasp… Alice had just dropped one of Esme’s flower vases!! Alice!! She was always so graceful and she would have had time to catch it if she saw it dropping. She looked paler than normal and her eyes were somewhere distant. She had just had a vision. It was dead silent, and even Nessie had stopped playing with Jacob who had both been suddenly absorbed in what was happening with Alice. And then she spoke, “It’s the Volturi, we’ve all been sentenced to die.”
    After those words left her mouth I sat there in shock. I don’t think anyone in that room moved for a very long time and all you could hear was the rapid beating of Jacob and Renesmee’s hearts. After what seemed like ages, Alice walked over and grabbed Jasper’s hand and walked out the door without a word. Long after the footsteps of Alice and Jasper faded, Renesmee finally snapped us all out of our trance. She surprised us all by talking and saying, “Auntie Alice and Uncle Jasper have been gone a little to long don’t you think?” And I think that is when everybody realized that she had run off and it was all a blur then. I yelled to Jacob to watch Nessie and everyone was rushing out, using our vampire instincts to follow Alice and Jasper’s trail. After hours and hours of searching, Rosalie, Esme and I returned to the house all sobbing, in a vampire way of course. Renesmee had fallen asleep and I told Jacob he could go home and sleep. Just like I knew he would, Jacob insisted on staying and nobody objected; not even Rosalie who hated him. Eventually, Carlisle, Edward and Emmett returned with a note they had received from Sam and some other Quilete boys from Alice and Jasper. Apparently, Alice and Jasper had asked permission to cross the borderline and all they said was that “the cullens are all in grave danger and to please give them the note.” We all waited patiently for somebody to read it. Edward finally stepped up and as he did this, I noticed the note was on the back of a page from my book. I began to wonder why she would take all this time to take a page from my book while she could have gotten any old piece of paper. Anyway, the note read: “We both love you so much and we’re sorry we had to leave you like this. I don’t want to say to much, but Irina went to the Volturi after she saw Nessie because she was convinced Nessie was an immortal baby. The Volturi are using this as an excuse to come to Forks and slaughter and collect. Basically, they plan on offering the talented members of our family death or to join the Volturi. We need to get witnesses to show Aro that Nessie is not an immortal baby and stall him long enough to talk with them about the whole situation. So, split up and we need to gather all covens and nomads that would be willing to help us, such as the Denali Coven, Peter, Charlotte, and just anyone you can think of. Trust me it is the best solution to this whole situation. Just listen to my directions and everything will be fine. And everyone, please don’t come looking for me. Just follow my instruction and remember that I love you all.” That note set everybody in motion and Emmett ran up the stairs and came down with two world maps. Everybody began mapping out where they were going to go to find people to witness for us. I offered to take Renesmee back to our cottage. I secretly just wanted to take a look at the book Alice had ripped a page out of, but I didn’t mention that. Nobody objected so I went. On the way, a smell sparked my interest. There was a trail left by Alice leading straight to our cottage. I followed the trail, opened the door to our cottage, put Renesmee into her crib, then went to the shelf above the fireplace and grabbed the book. As I opened it, there was a note on the page from Alice! It had an address which I memorized almost instantly due to my vampire ability, then quickly noticed the words “Burn this” at the bottom of the page. I did as I was told but I was so curious as to why Alice would go to this length to keep something from the rest of the family, especially Edward with me being the only one whose mind he can’t read. After reading this and everything that was going on with the Volturi, I felt like someone was going to jump out of nowhere and I did not feel safe alone in our cottage. I decided to bring Renesmee back to the main house with me. I put my fears to the back of my mind and hurriedly returned to the main house, not wanted to raise suspicions. Rewriting this is bringing back all my fears and worries, and I think I’ll take a break from writing for today. Don’t worry I will be back tomorrow while Renesmee is at Charlie’s and the boys go on a hunting trip.
XoXo, Bella