Twilight Series Article: My Breaking Dawn Review

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posted by TotallyMe105

Ok this is my first article ever on here so go easy on me.
For my first article I dacided to review Breaking Dawn since I have strong opinions on the book andso do most of you guys.sooo without further or do....

"Breaking Dawn Review"

Good Things:
1.)Personally I thought the wedding was beautifully portrayed and the way I imagined it and Bella finally stopped whining about Jacob long enough tosay "I Do" to Edward.
2.)I like how Stephenie Meyer gave a surprise withthe whole Renesmee thing.I also like how she made it lead up to think that Ness was going to be a boy.
3.)The book was well written and very descriptive and informative.She settled it down to three books finally changing it form Bellas POV to Jacobs.
4.)The Humor:) Ilaughed like crazy in this book.
5.)The Cullens.It seemed they became closer and more like a family then a clan in this book.
Bad Things:
1.)Personally Im Switzerland but i mean seriously does it seem Bella mourns over the Jake situation a little to much and a little toooo long???
2.)I really would of preferred Edwards POV instead of Jakes. Is it just me or does it seem Edward barely shows his face in this book.
3.)I love fluff so I would have prefered more Daddy/Daughter moments between Edward and Renesmee.He held her 3 times in the whole book andhes her dad!!!
4.)The Ending.It wasnt the best way to end a saga.
5.)The Nahuel Situation.Well I liked Renesmee being unique and not like anyone else so there are 4 of her species on earth!!!

Characters At There Best:
Edward
Alice
Jacob
Emmett
Rosalie
Esme
Renesmee

Characters At There Worst:
Bella
Jasper
Carlisle
Renee
Charlie

Over all 3.5 out of 5 stars

-Thx for reading:)

patrisha727, bitten_byedward and 1 other like this

zaray wow...........really i give it 4.5/5 stars but we all have opinions

your edward cullen love story (part2)

posted by taini

''edward where are we going?'' you asked feeling nerves overcome you.''it's not important right now''he whispered trying to keep controll.''why are you so mad?''you asked you've never seen him ike this beffore.''i just can't stand it when someone makes you angry...i'm going to kill mike newton!''he shouted increasing his speed limit. ''why did you fight you've always been in controll untill you lost it today why?''you asked him.''like i said i can't stand it when someone makes you angry and when they try to flirt with you...i was reading his thoughts i knew what he wanted i knew what he felt...

your edward cullen love story (part1)

posted by taini

''ok class today we're switching seats''your teacher announced.''_and edward cullen,mike and tyler...''the sound of your name made you jerk up as edward cullen sat next to you.''hey_my name is edward cullen''he said in his perfect voice.''hi'' you replied shyly.at the end of class you walked fast down the hall but tripped over mike newton and tyler,''sorry babe''mike smiled at you he knew you hated when people called you babe.''stop it you know i hate that!'' you yelled at him through klenched teeth.''sorry babe''he chuckled again darkly,''mike just GO!!!'' you yelled furiously.''make me!''he...

Short second life of Bree tanner in diegos point of view. ENDING ROUGH DRAFT!

posted by cheerathlete08

Well I promised this tomorrow but I finished it and well here it is. It's Bree tanner in diegos point of view. Going from where he left her his final night with her. I wrote this fir fun and have only wrote this one. Here's the link about me explaining what I am doing: link
And all that I am also continuing midnight sun you first timers reading my fan fiction. Umm...what next? Oh yeah no copyright intended just free weighting. Oh yeah one side note this is a rough draft. It is not edited of anything. I just wrote it for kicks and it is my next project I am working on. So you will see this draft...

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As the sun sets :Chapter 26: What the heck was that?

posted by xoxpoisonxox

This is a small book i am writing about the life of Renesmee cullen after (Breaking Dawn) It is in he rpoint of view for almost the whole time (with a few exceptions)She is now a teen and her life seems to be more then what she bargained for. I suggest starting from chapter 1 to get the full impact and information (:

Note:
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I understand that this chapter may be a little hard to follow or confusing at some parts. Although it will all be explained within the next chapter, if you would like me to break down what happened within the chapter thenn just message me (:

-Brianna B

Chapter 26: What...

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Life, Love, and the Mafia

posted by LexisFaith

So, this song right down there.V. is my new favorite song in the world. So, get on youtube or grooveshark and listen to it!!!
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Don't want no money.
Just want your sex.
Take a bite of my bad girl meat.
Show me ya teeth.

Got no direction.
Just got my vamp. (uh uh)
Take a bite of my bad girl meat.
Show me ya teeth.

Tell me something that will save me.
I need a man that makes me alright.
Tell me something that will change me.
I'm gonna' love you with my hands tied.
Show me ya teeth.

Teeth~ Lady GaGa.
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Bella POV

I...

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Life, Love, and the Mafia.

posted by LexisFaith

Bella POV

The next morning I showered, got dressed, and straightened my hair for a change, parting my hair to the side and swooped my eye-length bangs. I situated the thick straps to my black tank-top that I paired up with a pair of dark blue hollister jeans- the only jeans that fit my properly.
I dusted on a bit of blush, silver eyeshadow, mascara, and a peach tented lipgloss. This was pretty much the normal look when I actaully felt like getting pretty. Which wasn't often.
A knock on the door made me jump and I held my hand to my pounding heart.
"Are you done in there? I need to get ready too."...

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As the sun sets: Chapter 22: Seeing red

posted by xoxpoisonxox

Chapter 22: Seeing Red

The pain was almost unbearable. Growing hotter and hotter running through my limbs. I wanted to drop whatever was causing such a painful feeling, but nothing lay in my arms. All i saw was darkness, parylized by pain.

I never imagined a sensation hotter then fire itself. The time i was attacked by Alex, that was nothing compared to what now burned inside me.
It seemed the burning grew- rising and peaking and rising more until the sensation surpassed logical feel.

Through all this, i couldn't make a sound. I wanted to scream, but i couldn't. My voice had been taken away from...

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As the sun sets: Chapter 18: The day Italy became ugly

posted by xoxpoisonxox

This is a small book i am writing about the life of Renesmee cullen after (Breaking Dawn) It is in he rpoint of view for almost the whole time (with a few exceptions) I suggest starting from chapter 1 to get the full impact and information (:

Chapter 18: The day Italy became ugly.

I stepped out of Paul's car as we parked into his home. It was a quiet little place, built right off the beach. I wondered if this was Rebecca's preference, or Paul's little tribute to La Push. Paul was much different, as expected though. I hadn't seen him in almost seven years, when he had his wedding. He dosn't...

Chapter 12: Starry night sky.

posted by EnchantdEquinox

Chapter 12: Starry night sky.
“Come on Ness, we’ll go for a swim." Jacob took her hand in his.
"That sounds great!" Renesmee smiled.
"It’s quite a walk, is that okay" Jacob teased.
"It sounds like an adventure to me! Let's go!"
Renesmee tied the hem of her baggy T-shirt in a knot just below her hips. Jacob yanked his shirt off over his head and tossed it onto a low branch.
It had taken them an hour and forty-five minutes of hard running to get to the river, but it was worth it. The surface of the water was smooth and dark, reflecting a sky full of stars. Renesmee took a step towards the riverbank,...

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As the sun sets: Chapter 6: Less then three...

posted by xoxpoisonxox

Chapter 6: Less then three..

I Made my way out of the car and into jacobs house, i noticed billy wasn't there once more. I turned to Jacob,

"Where is billy? I havn't seen him around lately.."

"Oh, Well him and the other elders were informed about another tribe down in arizona, but it was all just teens, nobody to tell them what was happening, so thier going to be down there for a bit, to help out."

"There are more?" I asked a bit surprised.

Jacob sighed "Yes, they seem to be showing up more often.." He made a face,

"Wait then that means there are even more..." He nodded slightly.

We both sat down...

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Our New Life (Chapter 6- Visitors)

posted by Angrykittykj

Chapter Six: Visitors

Edward pulled me tightly against his chest, smoothing my hair from the top of my head down to my waist. It was more effective than any tranquilizer could have been. Edward’s touch was magical and honestly, it made me feel worse.

“Are you going to be all right, Bella?” he asked in his beautiful honeyed voice.

I pulled away from him and looked into his eyes; they were filled with worry, nothing more. His earlier fury had faded away with our run through the woods. I brushed his cheek with my fingertips and he closed his eyes as if to savor the soft touch. “I’m going...

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Twilight at the Royal Wedding?

posted by Hellohoudini

Fashion Critic Slams Victoria Beckham's Royal Wedding Look

We all know who won the best-dressed award at Friday's royal wedding (Kate Middleton, natch), but which guest was the biggest fashion disappointment?
No, it wasn't one of Prince Andrew and Fergie's daughters (those crazy hats!). According to Entertainment Tonight fashion guru Steven Cojocaru (aka "Cojo"), the worst-dressed honors go to the usually impeccably attired Victoria Beckham.

"She looked like an extra in Twilight," Cojo tells Us Weekly of Beckham's dark-navy dress and Philip Treacy topper. "She looked like an old widow in mourning...

Twilight - Moving In 3

posted by shelly_fanpire

Warning rated - M

Bella POV
*Bella...* I was so confused he stoped.
*what happened?* *Bella, your pulling my hair*
I laughed *why are you laughing*
*I thought you ware about to stop you know... it*
*I would never do that* he smirked at me.
he started kissing me again and slowly took my bra off.
*Bella your so beautiful* he keep kissing me.
I smiled and keep kissing him.
then he slwly slid he's hands down my body and took my underwears off, at the same time I run my hand down he's back and I took off he's boxers.
*Bella you ready?* he was kissing my nack.
*yes* he came on top of me and slowly slid into...

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twilight chatrooms

posted by EmmettOk

ok i don't like the names i give first time give them new ones

Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight or the characters - unfortunately. I don't own the songs either.

VampMindReader107 - Edward

ClumsyLamb18: - Bella

PsychicShopaholic: - Alice

EmotionbyName: - Jasper

GrizzlyBear: - Emmett

Better_than_you: - Rosalie

Dr. Vamp Cullen: - Carlisle

Mother2Many: - Esme

ClumsyLamb18 has signed in

GrizzlyBear has signed in

GrizzlyBear: Power to the sheep!

ClumsyLamb18: Hello to you too, Emmett

GrizzlyBear: Hello Bellsy!

ClumsyLamb18: Emsy!

GrizzlyBear: Emsy? That's a new one.

ClumsyLamb18: Emsy!

GrizzlyBear: Bellsy!

ClumsyLamb18:...

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1. Oh, Teacher

posted by DarkStranger

So yeah, I'm back! I know who read my stories want to kill me because I didn't update like months,but I'm sorry and no I will not update those story's, maybe someday when my mind will be in emo side I will XD

Warning! This fan fiction contains a lot curse words.

EDWARD POV

I'm standing in the parking lot 30 minutes till first lesion starts and there is no one around. Which really surprised me.
I looked up into the sky which was cloudy and I felt cold breeze mixed with snow in my face. I closed my eyes and deeply breathed in. I liked the snow it felt like nothing else in entire world it's beautiful...

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St. Vamperra

posted by uniquezandy

Bree's pov
Dear diary,
Another year has passed, and I'm back in this borading school! It's not that bad, but it's boring. At least I have a best friend here called Victoria. It eases the pain. She's a red-head; that I've been friends with since I came here when I was 11. Right now; shes loved up. She has a boyfriend called James and there both vampires. Yes Diary; I said vampires. This school, isn't normal. Surprise, surprise, it's a school for vampires. The name is a total give away if you knew the secret. I am writing this now, on the bottom bunk (that I share with victoria,) listening her...

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Kayla's Visions, Chapter 44

posted by twilight-7

Kayla’s POV

We flew through the forest, following Edward as he tracked Charlie’s scent. Alice and I had both tried to figure out where he was from our vision but the forest all looked the same to us.
“Edward, where are we going?” I asked him as we passed the same tree three times.
“Wherever Charlie is,” he replied, his voice low. “He must be lost. This is completely random.”
Charlie was lost. He did say to his attacker that he was lost. I glanced at Alice who had stopped running to have a vision. I stopped too and watched her warily. After a few seconds she shook her head and...

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Wouldn't Change a Thing 3

posted by LexisFaith

Edward stood up and they both leaned over the bar, bringing eachother into the 'guy slap hug'. When Jasper out stretched his hand I caught the name Tyler tattooed on his opposite wrist.

"Jasper, this is Bella. The lawyer." Edward smiled to Jasper.

"Oh, so you're the Bella Swan. I'm Jasper Cullen, nice to meet you." He held out his hand to me, much like Rosalie just did.

I shook. "Nice to meet you too."

"So," He turned to Edward. "Remember that girl I have been telling you about? The one I have been seeing for about a month?"

Edward nodded.

"She's comming tonight. So you can meet her." He smiled....

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Edward and Bella's honeymoon. Edward's POV chapter15

posted by halunik

“You’re tired. Sleep, love.” I started humming the lullaby . It always helped her to fall asleep. She clasod her eyes and murmured:
“I wonder why I’m so tired. That couldn’t be part of your scheme or anything.”
I couldn’t stop the chuckle. She was so right.
“For as tired as I’ve been, you’d think I’d sleep better.”
“You’ve been sleeping like the dead, Bella. You haven’t said a word
in your sleep since we got here. If it weren’t for the snoring, I’d worry you were
slipping into a coma.” I was good in making you tired, dear. But we had a lot of fun. Actually...

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All for the Love of Sin 9

posted by LexisFaith

"I wonder how many friends I will make! Like you and Aunt Alice, and Aunt Rose, and Uncle Emmett and Uncle Jasper and Daddy are all friends. Oh, and Aunt Angela and Ben." I was smiling down at Alicen as she ran throught clothes racks at Carter's. "Mommy." She stopped infront of me.

"Yes?" I looked down at her.

"Do you think the other girls and boys will like me? What if they call me names or make fun of me." She hung her head.

I bent down to her eye level and tucked a few curls behind her ear. "Why would you think that?" I asked.

She shrugged her shoulders. "I dunno'."

I ran my hand down her cheek...