Chapter 2 is up, please read and comment below. The chapters are getting longer now. I've got some ideas for later chapters, maybe something in Esme's point of view (we never really see her, thought it would be nice), I'm thinking of posting chapters weekly, some of them might be a bit late, I've got a lot on, but please look out for them. See you all with Chapter 3 Soon
Edwards POV
"Alice where are we going, can't we just go home with the others?" I said. All I wanted was to go home to my Bella and make sure she was ok.
"Edward she will be fine. Bella is a eighteen year old woman, I'm sure she can look after herself for fifteen minutes. Now quit whining and stay out of my head,you're not supposed to see this and I need to think without having to translate something in my head to keep you out."
Alice gave me one last look then hopped out of her Porshe 911 Turbo and began to skip to an big oak front door.
"Don't make a run for it either, I will see." She added in an undertone to me over her shoulder.
Alice was gone for nearly an hour before she returned with a black package in her hand. She slid in next to me and gracefully threw the package over her shoulder, so that it neatly landed foulded on the back seat.
"Right, we're done then, call your little girlie friend and tell us to meet us at the house, as I'm sure you already know I have a surprise for her and she is going to love it unless you are finally willing to bet against me?" She smiled up at me.
How could someone so small be so annoying? She knew perfectly well that there was only one time I was willing to bet against her and even then I was worried that she would be right.
The wedding was only the first step and then Bella would do anything in her power (and believe me she could be very convincing when she wanted to) to become a vampire.
Hurry up Edward,call her, or she will get there way after us and then the plan won't work. She needs to get there before us, then Emmett can distract her with something and then we walk in, you go sit with her for a while, whilst I sort everything out. And finally surprise she loves it.
Alice's thought were even more annoying than her words. I dialled the number and waited for 7 rings, humans could be so slow sometimes.
"Hello?" Her soft, velvety voice answered. I couldn't wait to marry her and be able to call her mine.
"Hi honey, it's me," She knew this already though I could tell by the quickening of her breath. "Head on over to the house, Alice says she's got a surprise for you, unfortunatly I can't help you she won't tell me what it is. Plus it will be just you girls tonight, we're planning the bachalor party. Love you."
"Kay," she said, her voice was distracted "I'll head on over."
"Bel-" I started but the line was cut off.
Edward, what's wrong? sometimes I wish I could block out Alice's thoughts.
"Jacob." Was all I replied. I didn't know how I knew but I knew. He was there. I should have known that if I'd forbidden her to go to La Push, he would go to Forks.
Edwards POV
"Alice where are we going, can't we just go home with the others?" I said. All I wanted was to go home to my Bella and make sure she was ok.
"Edward she will be fine. Bella is a eighteen year old woman, I'm sure she can look after herself for fifteen minutes. Now quit whining and stay out of my head,you're not supposed to see this and I need to think without having to translate something in my head to keep you out."
Alice gave me one last look then hopped out of her Porshe 911 Turbo and began to skip to an big oak front door.
"Don't make a run for it either, I will see." She added in an undertone to me over her shoulder.
Alice was gone for nearly an hour before she returned with a black package in her hand. She slid in next to me and gracefully threw the package over her shoulder, so that it neatly landed foulded on the back seat.
"Right, we're done then, call your little girlie friend and tell us to meet us at the house, as I'm sure you already know I have a surprise for her and she is going to love it unless you are finally willing to bet against me?" She smiled up at me.
How could someone so small be so annoying? She knew perfectly well that there was only one time I was willing to bet against her and even then I was worried that she would be right.
The wedding was only the first step and then Bella would do anything in her power (and believe me she could be very convincing when she wanted to) to become a vampire.
Hurry up Edward,call her, or she will get there way after us and then the plan won't work. She needs to get there before us, then Emmett can distract her with something and then we walk in, you go sit with her for a while, whilst I sort everything out. And finally surprise she loves it.
Alice's thought were even more annoying than her words. I dialled the number and waited for 7 rings, humans could be so slow sometimes.
"Hello?" Her soft, velvety voice answered. I couldn't wait to marry her and be able to call her mine.
"Hi honey, it's me," She knew this already though I could tell by the quickening of her breath. "Head on over to the house, Alice says she's got a surprise for you, unfortunatly I can't help you she won't tell me what it is. Plus it will be just you girls tonight, we're planning the bachalor party. Love you."
"Kay," she said, her voice was distracted "I'll head on over."
"Bel-" I started but the line was cut off.
Edward, what's wrong? sometimes I wish I could block out Alice's thoughts.
"Jacob." Was all I replied. I didn't know how I knew but I knew. He was there. I should have known that if I'd forbidden her to go to La Push, he would go to Forks.
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"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I said under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't you let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I said giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I said under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't you let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I said giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
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Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now they don't say where they went they don't really exclain why they went AND people say reading can't hurt you! I got a huge head ach and i am a little dizzy. LIVING PROOF! I now know how brittanie spears felt when she didn't know what to do.I can't really think about anything more for this- see ya tomoorow! You think i ended it bad ? well least it isn't like sapranos where they stop in the midlle of a sent- .....
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