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posted by Isabellaashley
This is my own story which was inspired by the twilight series and I had an idea to write my own story about vampires but I only managed to write the preface only so I would appreciate some comments on it and perhaps some ideas to make my story interesting but to any future writer please do not copy this as this is my idea and i hope to get it published if I do finish this story. Thanks everyone!

Preface

I found myself standing in the very woods that i'd promised to stay away from but I had my reasons for being here. it was getting darker and colder so I wrapped my jacket around me tighter. The woods was filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and he appeared from the treetops of a nearby tree and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers to my spine before slowly approaching me and my heart was pounding inside my chest. I was vunerable as ther wasn't anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to diehere, alone.Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing as the cold and bitter November wind blew and I found myself shivering because of the coldnss and fear that I felt.
These questions filled my head and I knew that he ws still watching me as my breathing became heavier. I never expected this dat to come so soon but ever since Luke and his family's arrival, I should have seen this coming soon and this was one of the risk that I took for being with Luke but I would gladly pay the price. As I looked directly into his eye, I saw hatred and anger and it had consumed the slayer's mind.
I knew that this was the end of me now.

That's all for now...Sorry if it is a little long... I will continue soon whenever I am online again... Keep the comments coming in.Thanks for your comments..
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posted by iluvtwilight123
"Congrats Nessie," i said awkwardly. I knew i should have prepared for this but i didnt know she would get it so soon.I mean she is only 12 years old physically but alive for 2 years now.
I moved her out of earshot and told her "Well honey you know about the birds and the bees so i just want to tell you be safe," i said it fast but i couldnt help it she was growing to fast. So i looked at Edward for help "Mood swings" he mouthed. Renesmee seemed to know that because wshe didnt want to hear anymore of it so she went to 1st base.
For a girl that has no atheletic ability i rule at baseball, I...
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posted by Yoss
Chapter 4 - Electric

I closed my eyes with great effort. I couldn’t take my eyes away from the electric sapphire blue eyes.

“Whirl around! Whirl around!” My mind screamed at me. I tried to move my body and follow my mind’s bidding but it seemed my body has a mind of its own. It refused to follow. I opened my eyes. The sapphire eyes that held me captive a while ago were no longer on the pond’s reflection. My body automatically turned its back on the pond. My eyes scanned the garden in front of me until my eyes found him.

He was casually leaning on a giant cherry blossom’s trunk. He...
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posted by Yoss
Chapter 2 - Playful

The soft, cool breeze stirred my hair. I purred in contentment – not wanting to open my eyes, though I’m fully awake now. I’m sure Aunt Alice would come – barreling, anytime soon. I rolled on my back hugging my pillow.

A light shone directly on my face.

“Uncle Emmett, quit it” I complained as I buried my face with my pillow. “Don’t you think its way too early for practical jokes?” I demanded, my voice muffled by the pillow. I’m sure my goofy uncle could still hear me clearly.

The light shone relentlessly, now making my arm, which holds my pillow, warm....
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posted by twilight-7
There were two vampires. A was a male and a female. The male was as tall as Emmett but not built like Emmett was. The male vampire was strong; you could see that clearly, the shirt he wore was straining against his chest and arms. He had cropped black hair and his eyes glinted red. The female next to him was as tall as me. I was five foot nine. She had long flowing chestnut brown hair and her eyes were black. She wasn’t standing still. She was kind of jumping from one foot to the other, restlessly.
Edward stood beside me. He was holding my hand tightly and I could feel the tension and rolling...
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Well,for the role of Heidi Volturi I have chosen an actress from One Tree Hill.She's called Daneel Harris.Here are the reasons why she should play Heidi:
1.She is very tall
2.She has mahagony red hair.
3.She is very good at remembering the script.

So,overall, I think that Daneel Harris would be the perfect actress playing Heidi and also she represents the characteristics of her character..

I don't think that AnnaLyne McCord Will make a good Heidi Volturi in New Moon.She doesn't represent the characteristics of her character.

So the One Tree Hill star Daneel Harris will make a perfect Heidi!
posted by twilight-7
I felt numb. The three vampires that had run into my house were still standing there. I didn’t know why. I knew they weren’t in shock, they had known this was going to happen. They just hoped they could have stopped it. They moved incredibly fast. One went to Charlie, one came to me and the other stood there, her face blank.
Edward wrapped his cold arms around me and pulled me off the back of the couch. He lifted me gently in his arms. I didn’t protest and I didn’t struggle. I let him.
“Carlisle, we’ll have to get him to hospital now,” Alice spoke quietly. She was trying not to...
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posted by dinosteph
So, I finally wrote this chapter, I've been preoccupied for the past week or so, but it's finally here. I'm getting really excited with my story line and I hope you're all enjoying it, if not, let me know what you don't like and I'll see what I can do about it :P


End of Chapter 7

“EDWARD!” Alice yelled from outside.

Edward reached around me and carefully started to lift me.

“Ugg!” I moaned, noticing that the pain skipped intense, making it's way closer to extreme now. He hesitated before placing me back down, causing the pain to flair up again, the room was suddenly spinning and his face...
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posted by twilight-7
Chapter 7.

Edward's thoughts - bold
Kayla's thoughts - italics


I jumped to the side and Edward landed in the spot I was in before. He turned to me, his gold eyes glittering. He stared at me before jumping at me again. I met him this time in mid air. We crashed together and fell to the ground but just before we landed I flipped round so he would receive the impact. We landed with a loud thud that probably shook the trees. I jumped backwards off him and crouched. When he stood up I flew at him, wrapping my legs around his marble chest. I held my hands on either side of his face and turned his head...
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posted by twilight-7
this is a bit short, i know. it's just a part that i wanted to write were its just Kayla and Edward.


I was still in Edward’s car, parked outside my house. We were sitting in silence, neither of us saying anything or thinking. It was easier than I thought to be able to sit next to him. I thought that because I knew what he was, that I would be scared of him but I wasn’t. Not an ounce of fear was in my body.
“You’re not scared of me,” Edward stated.
“No,” I answered. “And I don’t know why.”
“I think I do,” he said. He flashed a smile at me.
What are you? he thought.
“Let me...
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