This is my own story which was inspired by the twilight series and I had an idea to write my own story about vampires but I only managed to write the preface only so I would appreciate some comments on it and perhaps some ideas to make my story interesting but to any future writer please do not copy this as this is my idea and i hope to get it published if I do finish this story. Thanks everyone!
Preface
I found myself standing in the very woods that i'd promised to stay away from but I had my reasons for being here. it was getting darker and colder so I wrapped my jacket around me tighter. The woods was filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and he appeared from the treetops of a nearby tree and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers to my spine before slowly approaching me and my heart was pounding inside my chest. I was vunerable as ther wasn't anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to diehere, alone.Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing as the cold and bitter November wind blew and I found myself shivering because of the coldnss and fear that I felt.
These questions filled my head and I knew that he ws still watching me as my breathing became heavier. I never expected this dat to come so soon but ever since Luke and his family's arrival, I should have seen this coming soon and this was one of the risk that I took for being with Luke but I would gladly pay the price. As I looked directly into his eye, I saw hatred and anger and it had consumed the slayer's mind.
I knew that this was the end of me now.
That's all for now...Sorry if it is a little long... I will continue soon whenever I am online again... Keep the comments coming in.Thanks for your comments..
Preface
I found myself standing in the very woods that i'd promised to stay away from but I had my reasons for being here. it was getting darker and colder so I wrapped my jacket around me tighter. The woods was filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and he appeared from the treetops of a nearby tree and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers to my spine before slowly approaching me and my heart was pounding inside my chest. I was vunerable as ther wasn't anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to diehere, alone.Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing as the cold and bitter November wind blew and I found myself shivering because of the coldnss and fear that I felt.
These questions filled my head and I knew that he ws still watching me as my breathing became heavier. I never expected this dat to come so soon but ever since Luke and his family's arrival, I should have seen this coming soon and this was one of the risk that I took for being with Luke but I would gladly pay the price. As I looked directly into his eye, I saw hatred and anger and it had consumed the slayer's mind.
I knew that this was the end of me now.
That's all for now...Sorry if it is a little long... I will continue soon whenever I am online again... Keep the comments coming in.Thanks for your comments..
one eager look from you and by heart starts to soar.
i dont know how it could be. that i would love you more
a taste of time right here in my hands words cant describe
what my eyes can.
side by side.i want all of you forever.no less time will ever do
you say how can you ask me to take your life.oh edward that was long ago when
i looked into your eyes.
its apart of you and always will be.without you.i am incomplete
so take me by the hand and lead me anywhere.with you my time is yours to share. i love you
bella
i dont know how it could be. that i would love you more
a taste of time right here in my hands words cant describe
what my eyes can.
side by side.i want all of you forever.no less time will ever do
you say how can you ask me to take your life.oh edward that was long ago when
i looked into your eyes.
its apart of you and always will be.without you.i am incomplete
so take me by the hand and lead me anywhere.with you my time is yours to share. i love you
bella
Okay beacause I am a huge Twilight fan I have joined this club. I fell in love after the first 3 chapters of Tiwilight and I am still in the process of reading the books. If you could please at least say in the beginning of your article that it is concerning X books. That would help me out soooo much because I only have a limited amount of time I can read because of school and homework. The mentioning of things that I have not read yet is making me want to read the books so much more and it has caused me to get in trouble at school for reading when I shouldn't be. Thank you so VERY much.
okay so we all know that edward is the best charcter in twilight. why? because of how loving he is. He treats bella like if she were gold and his biggest treasure.Many of us wish to have a boyfriend or girlfriend like edward. It makes someone really happy to be loved so greatly.
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in love and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would love edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the books yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank you for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comment of wat u think of my article...=þ
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in love and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would love edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the books yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank you for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comment of wat u think of my article...=þ