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posted by Yoss
Chapter 4 - Electric

I closed my eyes with great effort. I couldn’t take my eyes away from the electric sapphire blue eyes.

“Whirl around! Whirl around!” My mind screamed at me. I tried to move my body and follow my mind’s bidding but it seemed my body has a mind of its own. It refused to follow. I opened my eyes. The sapphire eyes that held me captive a while ago were no longer on the pond’s reflection. My body automatically turned its back on the pond. My eyes scanned the garden in front of me until my eyes found him.

He was casually leaning on a giant cherry blossom’s trunk. He was all in black. Casual black shirt. Faded black jeans. Black leather shoes.

My breathing hitched. Black only intensified his perfect beauty. My eyes hungrily devoured the perfection before me.

Wavy blonde hair almost past his shoulder blades. Smooth creaseless forehead. Perfectly arched golden eyebrows. Straight roman nose. A full seductive mouth that is almost feminine in shape. And then of course, the beautiful eyes framed by long thick golden lashes.

I realized that his face held the most melancholic expression. His deep blue eyes filled with such deep mystery.

An angel of sorrow…

Though his stance was casual, unthreatening – I couldn’t help but notice that his whole aura screamed of danger. What my mind registered, my body immediately ignored. My feet automatically took a step forward.

STOP! What do you think you’re doing? – My mind rebelled.

I took a deep breath. What is happening to me? Who is this stranger? Where the hell is my family? Where’s Jacob?

JACOB. It was like a bucketful of iced water was poured over my head. I shook my head as I try to clear my disoriented mind, willing my body to be under my command, once more.

I stared back at the golden boy still leaning on the trunk. His mysterious eyes narrowed ever so slightly. He must have read the hesitation in my chocolate brown eyes for he raised his hand and seductively beckoned for me to move forward.

I was about to take a step forward when…

“Nessie, NO!” Jacob bellowed.

He was instantly at my side. His whole body was trembling violently. His face was contorted in pure rage.

The angel straightened up. His lips twisted into a beautiful cruel smile.

“Renesmee…” He called out to me like a lion purring, trying to seduce its prey.

Before my mind could register anything else, a great russet wolf lunged into the air. Its fangs exposed aiming for the angel’s throat.

“NO!” I screamed.

Can’t the Angel see Jacob can hurt him?

Can’t Jacob see the Angel is also dangerous?

I didn’t see it happen; things were too quick even for my half-vampire eyes, but suddenly Jacob was on the ground - deep vines wound tightly around his body. Jacob snarled. I threw myself on the ground, trying to free Jacob. My hands trembled as I realized that the vines that chained him to the ground were actually giant tree roots.

“Let him go!” I shrieked at the Angel - tears streaming down my face, blurring my vision.

“Renesmee…” He called out to me, once more.

I shook my head.

“No..no..” I choked. His mysterious eyes bored into mine. I could not fight the pull. It was like I was being magnetized towards him. I was sobbing now. I couldn’t believe I was doing this while the love of my life was chained helplessly to the ground.

I was in front of the mysterious Angel when I heard Jacob shout.

“Run, Nessie, run!” Jacob was sprawled naked on the floor - the roots cutting deeply into his skin, creating deep gashes. I stared at him in horror.

I turned to face the mysterious Angel, ready to beg for Jacob’s sake. If it’s me he wants, he can have me. Just let Jacob go.

Before I could utter a plea, his beautiful sapphire eyes turned bloody red. His lips pulled back in an ugly snarl.

Then,I screamed with all my might.
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posted by KaylaLovesYou
Okay so I have written a story similar to this. Same concept just more different. The other story I posted was/is on fanfiction.net I wrote that story years ago and now looking back at it, I want to change it up and fix my grammar and what not. This story picks up right after new moon before eclipse. No Victoria battle, no kissing Jake, no marriage, no Renesmee, at least idk yet. (; Enjoy. Review. Please.
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What if Edward and Jacob left Bella for a while and as this time alone for her, causes her pain, more pain then they ever imagined. She turns...
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posted by Ilovegore
I understand that I will probably get a lot of hate crime for this but I don't care THE WORLD DESEVES TO KNOW! THE TRUTH!
why harry potter is better than twilight.

1. HP fans don't rely on characters looks to like a story/movie.

2. even though twilight has good romantic scenes they have nothing else! HP has romance, action, adventure, friendship, even death!

3. OH and in twilight I didn't know that blood doesn't come out of your head or neck when you chop it off!

4. HP is for females males and for all ages. Twilight is for teenage girls! I am a teenage girl and I even hate twilight!

5. J.K Rowling...
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posted by Berenice910
Bella is a very quiet girl who is hard to figure out.
Then she meets Edward . He could figure out
anyone exept Bella . But he knows he will love her
forever.But he is not the only one who loves her.
Wearwolf Taylor Lautner A.K.A Jacob likes her to.
But she ends up picking Edward.In Breaking Dawn
part 1 Bella merries Edward .While she is on her
honey moon with Edward she figures she is pregnet .Every second the baby grows inside she
is dieing . Then when she gave birth she died . Then in Breaking Dawn part 2 she becomes a
vampire
I don't really care for Jacob that much, but this a scene that I've always wanted to see written: Jacob's wedding with Nessie. Now, I'm not the best writer in the world, so please don't judge too harshly:

Renesmee sat on the living room couch with Jacob's arm tight around her waist. Beside them sat Alice, a big pile of bridal magazines in her lap.
"I just can't believe you two are getting married already," she gushed, flipping through the glossy pages of a Modern Bride issue. "It seems like just yesterday Ness was still in diapers. Oh, where has the time gone?"
Renesmee rolled her eyes.
"Anyway,"...
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posted by marvel517639
Here's chapter 4 enjoy:)
Hala's Pov
I never thought that i would fall in love after my mother died.I thought that life suck and there wasn't any reason for me to be here. I have no hope but until today when i meant Seth. He made me feel like there was something to live for. Like i worth something. I've never loved anyone beside my mother. Every kiss and touch was a magentic shocked through my body. It felt great. Seth was explaining to me imprinting that every wolf imprints in when they find their 'Soul Mate' and they will do everything for them. The Seth told me that he imprinted on me and...
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posted by bookworm4nero
Jacob all the way!!
Jacob all the way!!
Dear Edward


Edward, you are THE guy according to 99.9% of the girls out there but not me no siree! here is why:

Watching Bella while she is asleep:
I get that you wanna protect her blah blah all the romantic stuff, but you started doing the watch-her-while-she-is-asleep thingy RIGHT after you met her. What were you protecting her from? oh right you were scared that she would die in her sleep or something, would have been interesting to see how you would have saved her from that one.

The whole deal with blood:
Do not care whether you drink human blood, animal blood or any other blood. Its disturbing...
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