Chapter 4 - Electric
I closed my eyes with great effort. I couldn’t take my eyes away from the electric sapphire blue eyes.
“Whirl around! Whirl around!” My mind screamed at me. I tried to move my body and follow my mind’s bidding but it seemed my body has a mind of its own. It refused to follow. I opened my eyes. The sapphire eyes that held me captive a while ago were no longer on the pond’s reflection. My body automatically turned its back on the pond. My eyes scanned the garden in front of me until my eyes found him.
He was casually leaning on a giant cherry blossom’s trunk. He was all in black. Casual black shirt. Faded black jeans. Black leather shoes.
My breathing hitched. Black only intensified his perfect beauty. My eyes hungrily devoured the perfection before me.
Wavy blonde hair almost past his shoulder blades. Smooth creaseless forehead. Perfectly arched golden eyebrows. Straight roman nose. A full seductive mouth that is almost feminine in shape. And then of course, the beautiful eyes framed by long thick golden lashes.
I realized that his face held the most melancholic expression. His deep blue eyes filled with such deep mystery.
An angel of sorrow…
Though his stance was casual, unthreatening – I couldn’t help but notice that his whole aura screamed of danger. What my mind registered, my body immediately ignored. My feet automatically took a step forward.
STOP! What do you think you’re doing? – My mind rebelled.
I took a deep breath. What is happening to me? Who is this stranger? Where the hell is my family? Where’s Jacob?
JACOB. It was like a bucketful of iced water was poured over my head. I shook my head as I try to clear my disoriented mind, willing my body to be under my command, once more.
I stared back at the golden boy still leaning on the trunk. His mysterious eyes narrowed ever so slightly. He must have read the hesitation in my chocolate brown eyes for he raised his hand and seductively beckoned for me to move forward.
I was about to take a step forward when…
“Nessie, NO!” Jacob bellowed.
He was instantly at my side. His whole body was trembling violently. His face was contorted in pure rage.
The angel straightened up. His lips twisted into a beautiful cruel smile.
“Renesmee…” He called out to me like a lion purring, trying to seduce its prey.
Before my mind could register anything else, a great russet wolf lunged into the air. Its fangs exposed aiming for the angel’s throat.
“NO!” I screamed.
Can’t the Angel see Jacob can hurt him?
Can’t Jacob see the Angel is also dangerous?
I didn’t see it happen; things were too quick even for my half-vampire eyes, but suddenly Jacob was on the ground - deep vines wound tightly around his body. Jacob snarled. I threw myself on the ground, trying to free Jacob. My hands trembled as I realized that the vines that chained him to the ground were actually giant tree roots.
“Let him go!” I shrieked at the Angel - tears streaming down my face, blurring my vision.
“Renesmee…” He called out to me, once more.
I shook my head.
“No..no..” I choked. His mysterious eyes bored into mine. I could not fight the pull. It was like I was being magnetized towards him. I was sobbing now. I couldn’t believe I was doing this while the love of my life was chained helplessly to the ground.
I was in front of the mysterious Angel when I heard Jacob shout.
“Run, Nessie, run!” Jacob was sprawled naked on the floor - the roots cutting deeply into his skin, creating deep gashes. I stared at him in horror.
I turned to face the mysterious Angel, ready to beg for Jacob’s sake. If it’s me he wants, he can have me. Just let Jacob go.
Before I could utter a plea, his beautiful sapphire eyes turned bloody red. His lips pulled back in an ugly snarl.
Then,I screamed with all my might.
I closed my eyes with great effort. I couldn’t take my eyes away from the electric sapphire blue eyes.
“Whirl around! Whirl around!” My mind screamed at me. I tried to move my body and follow my mind’s bidding but it seemed my body has a mind of its own. It refused to follow. I opened my eyes. The sapphire eyes that held me captive a while ago were no longer on the pond’s reflection. My body automatically turned its back on the pond. My eyes scanned the garden in front of me until my eyes found him.
He was casually leaning on a giant cherry blossom’s trunk. He was all in black. Casual black shirt. Faded black jeans. Black leather shoes.
My breathing hitched. Black only intensified his perfect beauty. My eyes hungrily devoured the perfection before me.
Wavy blonde hair almost past his shoulder blades. Smooth creaseless forehead. Perfectly arched golden eyebrows. Straight roman nose. A full seductive mouth that is almost feminine in shape. And then of course, the beautiful eyes framed by long thick golden lashes.
I realized that his face held the most melancholic expression. His deep blue eyes filled with such deep mystery.
An angel of sorrow…
Though his stance was casual, unthreatening – I couldn’t help but notice that his whole aura screamed of danger. What my mind registered, my body immediately ignored. My feet automatically took a step forward.
STOP! What do you think you’re doing? – My mind rebelled.
I took a deep breath. What is happening to me? Who is this stranger? Where the hell is my family? Where’s Jacob?
JACOB. It was like a bucketful of iced water was poured over my head. I shook my head as I try to clear my disoriented mind, willing my body to be under my command, once more.
I stared back at the golden boy still leaning on the trunk. His mysterious eyes narrowed ever so slightly. He must have read the hesitation in my chocolate brown eyes for he raised his hand and seductively beckoned for me to move forward.
I was about to take a step forward when…
“Nessie, NO!” Jacob bellowed.
He was instantly at my side. His whole body was trembling violently. His face was contorted in pure rage.
The angel straightened up. His lips twisted into a beautiful cruel smile.
“Renesmee…” He called out to me like a lion purring, trying to seduce its prey.
Before my mind could register anything else, a great russet wolf lunged into the air. Its fangs exposed aiming for the angel’s throat.
“NO!” I screamed.
Can’t the Angel see Jacob can hurt him?
Can’t Jacob see the Angel is also dangerous?
I didn’t see it happen; things were too quick even for my half-vampire eyes, but suddenly Jacob was on the ground - deep vines wound tightly around his body. Jacob snarled. I threw myself on the ground, trying to free Jacob. My hands trembled as I realized that the vines that chained him to the ground were actually giant tree roots.
“Let him go!” I shrieked at the Angel - tears streaming down my face, blurring my vision.
“Renesmee…” He called out to me, once more.
I shook my head.
“No..no..” I choked. His mysterious eyes bored into mine. I could not fight the pull. It was like I was being magnetized towards him. I was sobbing now. I couldn’t believe I was doing this while the love of my life was chained helplessly to the ground.
I was in front of the mysterious Angel when I heard Jacob shout.
“Run, Nessie, run!” Jacob was sprawled naked on the floor - the roots cutting deeply into his skin, creating deep gashes. I stared at him in horror.
I turned to face the mysterious Angel, ready to beg for Jacob’s sake. If it’s me he wants, he can have me. Just let Jacob go.
Before I could utter a plea, his beautiful sapphire eyes turned bloody red. His lips pulled back in an ugly snarl.
Then,I screamed with all my might.
Let me start off by saying that I think Dakota Fanning is a fabulous actress. That being said here are my reason why I don't think she would make the best Jane. Their are a bunch a little problems and one big problem with her playing Jane. The big problem for me is her age. Dakota Fanning was born on Febuary 23 1994. That would put her at 15 years old when she starts filming in March. Thats only 4 years younger the Kristen(Bella) who was born in 1990 and only 2 years younger the Taylor(jacob) who was born in 1992. Jane is ONLY surpost be 12-13 years old and NO WHERE near Bella's age.
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie you know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... or with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie you know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... or with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
okay so we all know that edward is the best charcter in twilight. why? because of how loving he is. He treats bella like if she were gold and his biggest treasure.Many of us wish to have a boyfriend or girlfriend like edward. It makes someone really happy to be loved so greatly.
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in love and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would love edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the books yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank you for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comment of wat u think of my article...=þ
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in love and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would love edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the books yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank you for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comment of wat u think of my article...=þ