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posted by wbraithw
Stephenie Meyer
Stephenie Meyer
In a first new book for almost two years, Stephenie Meyer returns to the world of Eclipse. This story features Stephenie's unbeatable combination of mystery, suspense and romantic intrigue.

To be honest, I was about to give this book 3.5 stars, just barely 4 stars. At first, a lot of it was pointless and I just didn't really care much for the story. Then, I got to the part when the newborn vampires clash with the Cullen family in Eclipse and I loved it, loved seeing how the stories interspersed and loved seeing it from Bree's perspective.

I kinda hoped that because Stephenie was writing from a wilder character's perspective that she would stray from her usual writing style and it would surpass my expectations. Unfortunately, the fighting scenes could've been better executed and the development between characters a bit slower. It's a pity Bree's story wasn't a novel. I really think the story would be much more of a success D:

It was really interesting to read about the newborn vampires. You look at the Cullen family, civilized with the humans and in many ways flawless. But then, you look at this newborn army of vampires and they're wild and fierce, merciless when getting to what they desire most, which is human blood. It is incredible about how much is kept from the newborn vampires. They live in fear of human's stereotypes on vampires - burning in sunlight, getting staked and recoiling from garlic. They have not mastered what skills they've been given and all they feel is getting to what they want and doing it in such reckless ways, that the Volturi are required to come around.

I absolutely love Bree. She did not choose to be a newborn vampire. She was "born" into a place where she was required to be on the bad side, against her better judgement and it was really sad. To know that she had so much potential in her, and so much willingness to be good, that she couldv'e been something. Yet the Volturi don't give chances :( It's absolutely heartbreaking (if you read Eclipse) to know what her tragic fate is long before you begin the book. I thank Stephenie Meyer that she at least wrote this book to give us a chance to delve into the action of the newborn vampires and see it in a new, fresh way, other than in Bella's perspective (no offense).

If you're a big Twilight fan then what are you waiting for? You gotta read this book. If you're not so up for it, maybe it wouldn't be the best book for you.

The writing has got better...

Before I write this review, I think I'd better state my position on The Twilight Saga. I LOVE the books but I am well-aware that they are not examples of quality writing. I like the atmosphere, the plot, the characters. I do not like the way they are written and do not consider Ms Meyer a good writer. I would have rated all 4 books as 5 stars for enjoyment and 3 for writing. Hasn't stopped me reading them over and over, so she has got something right and I acknowledge that. Just wanted to be clear that as a fan, I see the flaws of the series and do not give it praise where it's not due.

So, with that out of the way, Bree Tanner. I was always going to buy it, because I expected more of the same things that I enjoyed from the other four books. Well, I was right but I got all that and more. The quality of the writing has seriously improved! The word choice is better, the flow is better, the characters are more fully fleshed out. A bonus that I wasn't expecting at all!

Before I started reading, I wondered whether knowing Bree's fate (from Eclipse) already would spoil it for me. It didn't at all. If anything, it made me more engaged with the story. I really wanted her to make the most of her "short, second life". It is all told from Bree's point of view a short while after she has been turned into a vampire against her will. She is with all the other newborns but she is sitting back, keeping out of trouble, trying to get a sense of what is happening to her. We meet Riley and get a better feel for his character. We also meet two of the other newborns, Diego and Fred, both of whom end up being important to Bree's attempt to survive. Their characters are quite a highlight. Diego and Bree are somewhat thrown together and tentatively explore their doubts about Riley and his motivations.

Without spoiling the plot, here's what I liked about the story:

1) Bree is not at all what we thought when we met her briefly in Eclipse.
2) We find out a lot more about what it's like to be a newborn (puts Breaking Dawn and Bella's experiences into better perspective)
3) We find out what the newborns did and didn't know before they went into battle
4) We find out exactly what Victoria and Riley were up to when they were out of the picture in Eclipse.
5) We find out what the Volturi were thinking during the newborn problem and then the battle.
6) We find out more about the battle.

That and the fact that I just really liked Bree herself, made this short novel into a winner for me. I read it in 2 hours and really enjoyed it. Obviously, if you don't like the saga and didn't enjoy Eclipse in particular, you won't like this!

Interesting but read it for free online!

I love the Twilight Saga - as with all sagas, readers become gripped by the characters and their fates. However, I am not surprised that Stephenie Meyer intended this to go into the Twilight Guide as a short story as this reads as some sort of extended experiment she wrote primarily for herself. The major problem is that she cannot write monsters. Bree is a monster - she eats people. She is no Bella or Cullen yet we are supposed to sympathise because she loves another monster. Unlike Charlaine Harris or Anne Rice who can write engaging monsters, Meyer simply should stick to the lovely conscience-driven Cullens. I suggest Stephenie Meyer get back to writing her sequel to The Host or creating a new universe rather than letting her publishers push her into releasing mediocre material. This novel has a lovely cover (as do all the Twilight novels) but other than that, read it for free online - go to her webpage for directions - and donate the money to charity.

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Chapter 3

Edward’s POV

We went out of the school – cutting classes. Bella was still silent sitting on the front seat with me. Alice was not with us, she’s riding her Porsche. Every minute, I glanced at Bella. I can’t stand it when she’s in bad mood. I’m uncomfortable when she’s not talking with me.
“Hey, are you okay?” I finally managed to ask.
She didn’t respond as if she didn’t hear me. Bella was really good when it comes to ‘pretending’. She didn’t even look at me. She was still staring at the window. Her eyes were expressionless. Her lips pursed.
“Are you mad at...
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Edward's point of view when he leaves Bella.

I cant believe im being this, this....idiotic!! I now own the perfect life, all due to my love, whom i am now leaving.
What kind f boyfriend am i?? How can i leave her, her scent, her rosy cheeks, all i will have will be memories.
But, im immortal, memories will fade, jut not as pain free as mortals......
There she was, stood in front of a fallen tree, looking just as tense as i am. Let me brace myself to do this term of
idiocy.
"Bella, we're leaving," I tried to hide the emotions that now break through my normally strong, rock-like voice, "We need
to...
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this one was fun for us to wright. hope you enjoy it.




Charlie's pov


Bella's here.....I said to Sue.

" Thats great " Sue said.

I went to the door to open it up for her. It looks like she brought Nessie,Jake and Alice as well.
"Hey guys come on in."

"Hay dad."

"Hi Grandpa"

"Hi Charile" Jake and Alice said together.

"Sue is here I see'' Jake said.

Ya she and I have somthing to tell you. But frist would you like anything to eat. Sue made breakfest.

"Sure" Jake and Nessie said.

"We just ate" Bella and Alice said.

So Sue made up a plate for Jake and Nessie.

" This is really good even better than Edwards'' Jake...
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posted by Emmett4ever
Hey everyone this is my first story and I hope all of you like it.


Bella's POV


Ugh! The day I have been wishing would never come is here. It's September 13th. I'm offically 18. Great the sun picks today to shine. I hope Charlie and Renee listened to me when I said I don't want any presents. I don't want to act happy on the day I want to mourn. I dressed in a gray shirt and jeans. I went downstairs to get breakfast started. "Happy Birthday,Bells" Charlie greeted me tis morning.CRAP. "Thanks,Dad" I replied."Your mom sent you this" Charlie wrapped box. I took the box and unwrapped it. It was a...
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Just when i thought my life couldnt get any better. I had a wonderful family and "almost" family, great friends (even if most of them were "mythical" creatures) and the best and greatest... fiance in the world. With the wedding only 2 weeks away, i'd better get used to it. I smiled to myself at how reluctant i was to think the world let alone say it out loud.
Speaking of my... fiance, why wasnt he here yet? Anxiety deffinitly wasnt good for me!
Edward had promised to be upstairs and in my arms as soon as Charlies head hit the pillow; which had been 15 minutes ago... not that i was counting....
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hi, please tell me if you like this poem.
and also please write comments. ^_^ thanks for reading it.

bella i need you to know
I will never be a foe
even if you go back to him
and all them even after
us we were best friends
but i hope one day the wound mends
but you hurt me so bad
i was so sad
i almost never got over you
but now that i see you'r haveing a baby
do you mind if she loves me because i want her
to be my renessme.
and she replaces you and all you used to do she is so sweet and when she talks to me I love her
and sure i'll take care of her because she belongs with me she is my renessme.
Warning: This is just my fantasy coming through. And some information to you; the story plays before Bella became a Vampire and there is no Nessie in sight. So its just for our little Jacob's sake, he needs some luving.

Information: Sorry for the long wait, i just really wasnt inspired. But i hope that will change by now. So have fun...

I wish i could scream
What day of the week was it? Not that it was really important, but the point was that i hadnt left that room in about a week, or more. And always by my side was my beautiful girlfriend, the reason why my heart kept beating, Kristine. All...
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posted by renesmeblack
9. The Semi-Sweet Taste of Reunion
Renesmee




I couldn't sit up. I couldn't even move my eyes. The angel looked into them for a fleeting second, with bright crimson eyes. In that same second they grew darker until they were the dark brown I knew. I wish my energy would return. The angel placed his hand over my heart.
"No," he whispered. "No, not my love. NO!!!"
He screamed with rage and ran at Mark.
"You! I saw you! You were killing her, now she's dead! She's dead!!!" he screamed.
"Renesmee asked for this, personally, Jacob. She wouldn't take no for an answer. She wanted the baby out before she...
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posted by CharmedVamp101
I pulled her onto the bed and wrapped the blanket around her, there was no way I wanted to freeze her to death. Then I wrapped my arms around her. Already, she was falling asleep. She was thinking about tomorrow and the wedding that was in two days. I smiled at her pictures, she didn't at all think of the wedding dress though.
I could tell when she was out. Her mind went dark, then it was filled with different pictures and my face was the background. We zoomed into a picture, one that hadn't happened. One that, I never wanted to have, of course the experience would be wonderful, but it was...
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posted by KrystenPeres
Dylan (Matt Dallas) and Gianna (Krysten Peres)
Dylan (Matt Dallas) and Gianna (Krysten Peres)
1. Hello Past

It's hot. I loved the weather in Arizona for that reason. Rain and cold are as scarce as an ace of spades. The windows of Carols, my mother, mini-van were rolled down. The air was slowly but surely getting colder. I inched towards Dylan, my boyfriend. He wrapped his arms around me causing my heart to race. He was looking out the window. I stared at his face lit by the sunset. The contrast shadows from the sun on his fair skin are beautiful; making him look like an angel.
"I still don't know why we're moving to Massachusetts...," my little sister Marcie announced; drawing my attention...
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Chapter 13 Pizza Boy (Nessie's POV)

I opened my eyes and saw Jake, my father, Sam and my grandfather standing over me. Sam had a strange look on his face like a deer caught in headlights; almost as though he wanted to run out of the room but he couldn’t. He was carrying a freshly killed elk. I swallowed hard trying not to think about what I was about to do.
    “Nessie, you don’t have to do this we can try to find another way…”
    I looked at my husband and wanted to cry. He looked horrible. His hair was standing up in every direction I could...
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I'm a Twilight fan myself, but this HAS to be said.

Since the movie came out, did you see a significant rise of it's fans on Fanpop? I did. It jumped alot. My question is, and maybe I'm wrong, are some of the new fans for the story or for the hot vampires/werewovles?

I can see why Twilight can be hated, even though I am a fan. Some Twilight fans are nuts. They scream "OMG I LOVE EDWARD CULLEN?JACOB BLACK!!!!!!!!!!!!" Not that that isn't true, but is that all there is in Twilight? Do those 'fans' care for the story at all? At first, I thought it would pass, but it's gotten pretty bad where...
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posted by Edward_Bella234
Sorry this took so long to get up. I have been working on other writing projects. So here it is, the long awaited Chapter 4.

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I glanced around the room at everyone’s faces. They were all looking at Alice. Sheesh, I thought to myself Enough visions for one day! I knew my dad would have smiled if he wasn’t concentrating on what Aunt Alice was seeing so hard.
    In the same second, both there heads snapped up.
    “Soon” They whispered in synchronization....
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Russet Noon Official Cover Artwork by Stephanie Lostimolo
Russet Noon Official Cover Artwork by Stephanie Lostimolo
According to an official statement issued today by independent publisher AV Paranormal, the talisman image currently being used as the cover art for the novel Russet Noon will be the same one featured on the book cover when it is released as a paperback this Fall of 2009.

Numerous allegations of "theft" and "copyright infringement" have been made against author Lady Sybilla for using the talisman image "without permission" from its creator, artist Stephanie Lostimolo.

On May 11, 2009, Lady Sybilla responded to these accusations with the following statement: "I have every intention of giving credit...
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please comment this is my first story

Bella’s POV

It was a cold day in Alaska but I didn’t care I was starting to read Wuthering Heights again when I remembered who gave it to me. I started to think of Carlisle, Esme, and my one and only love Edward when I suddenly had a vision of me living in Forks with them and Alice, Jasper, Rosalie, and Emmett. I decided that I would go and visit them. First I should call them because I have no idea how I will be able to get all of my stuff there. I wasn't planning to ride three times to get it all there.

Alice’s POV

“Alice what did you see” Jasper...
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posted by samiam4edward
I was covered in bruises, bumps and cuts and had just fallen out of a tree twice, I decided it was third time lucky and I was going to get up the there. In fact, I was so determined to climb this tree that I wouldn’t even really care if I broke an arm or a leg in the process. So I walked back a few paces and started to run. I got within a metre and I jumped – and slammed face-first into the tree trunk. I fell straight to the ground and flat on my face. I flipped myself over, moaning in pain. I looked at my right leg, biting back tears. There was a massive gash from my knee down to my ankle....
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posted by twilight-7
My muscles locked frozen in place. My mind screamed at me to move but my legs wouldn’t obey. I screamed, not that anyone would come to my rescue.
Three bullets blasted into my chest throwing me back into the wall. I stood there for a moment, utterly stunned. Pain ripped through my chest, particularly my lungs, almost immediately and I could feel my top becoming gradually wetter. I slid down the wall and clutched at chest. I couldn’t feel where the bullets had entered my chest but I could feel all the blood.
“KAYLA!” Edward was screaming. “Kayla, speak to me!”
“He shot me,” I said...
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posted by renesmeblack
18
Renesmee




I was crying. Jacob knelt down on one knee, looking up at me with hope in his eyes. In his hands was a small, velvet box. It was opened to reveal a gold ring with rubies scattered around the surface.
"Will you marry, me? I've been waiting for this moment for seven years, and I can't wait any longer," he said in a mushy-lover's voice.
I couldn't either. I threw myself at him, kissing him. I felt warmer. He stood up, holding me tighter and tighter. Then he broke away.
"Let's put up the tent," he said excitedly.
After he slid the ring on my left ring finger, we worked real hard to put up...
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posted by twilight-7
“Dad, how’s it him?” I asked. “How can he be alive?”
He didn’t answer but continued to stare at the broken pieces as if he could see Loren there.
“How is he alive?” I demanded. “I killed him! I put a bullet through his brain! I saw his dead eyes!”
The fear was back as it no longer needed to be squashed as my mother wasn’t here. I was panicking. The guy I had killed had called me to tell me he was coming to kill me. That did not happen!
“Kayla calm down,” Charlie said. “There’s no need to panic.”
“There’s every need,” I said. “I don’t know if you noticed...
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"Edward" I heard a faint voice yell, it was very...BELLA, but i believed it was Jane,another of the Volturi, i completely ignored it, keeping my eyes tight shut.
I heard the slooshing sound of the fountain, as though it was a paddling pool.
I took a step towards the clock tower, my foot almost in the sunlight, but not before...
A body crashed into me and i lifted it up in my arms. Bella. I slowly opened my black, hungry eyes and the clock tolled, I looked at Bella.
"Amazing i said" my voice full of wonder "Carlisle was right."
She mouthed my name, and finally caught her breath "You've got...
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