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I wrote a poem can u plz tell me if its good?

Im just a girl
he was just a boy
thats what everyone else saw....
but they saw so much more in each other..
to him she wasnt just a girl she was an angel that had taken his heart
to her he wasnt just a boy he was her soulmate, who'd left his heart with her....
it hurts me because all that love is gone he's found somone new who he has given his heart to.......
love is rare
hold on to it.........
my heart is broken.....
in to little peices......
im showing you.....
what you've done to me......
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??? wow someone has relationship issues. that is so depressing. I dont really like it its really sad .
9twilightlover5 posted over a year ago
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well im telllng a story this happened to my friend,,, so i just wrote it idc if u dont like it im just try=in to point out that love dosrnt always work..... but tnax for ur comment
twilight_lover9 posted over a year ago
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wow !!!!!!!! omg !!! ♥♥♥
twlight_girl posted over a year ago
 twilight_lover9 posted over a year ago
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jennyjen said:
it is awesome i love it.... its great.......i love it
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posted over a year ago 
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thank u
twilight_lover9 posted over a year ago
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