I agree with the Max X guy, you have something but it needs some work. probly try not to sound exactly like the who ever your trying to sing and control your voice, you sound like your trying to hard
Honestly, not bad... Could use a lot of work, but still not horrible or anything. I think you should try to put more passion into it. Dont be afraid to SMILE, use your eyes to show that you are actually FEELING the song and what it means.