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I need some help. If you are a writer, then please do help (:

So I have a MAJOR writers block. I've taken a WHOLE month break and I think it's time to start again. The story that I want to update NOW is 'The Past Will Never Change'. It was very unique but I'm having a little trouble. I discussed with one of my friends that I wanted to make the next chapter Edward's POV, with an explanation of why he left Bella in NM. So if you could read the story and maybe give me tips on how to write that? I'm not really good with sticking to the plot line.

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So I will credit you when I post it up here and on FF.net. I'll prop you and if you could even write a tiny chunk for me, I'll REALLY appreciate it. Thanks (:
 lollipopszx3 posted over a year ago
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akashaapril said:
I really think you should some from edward's pov. then kind of write from both throughout the story, eventually having them meet again. I think that would be pretty good. ummmmm...maybe have jacob and the pack in a little chapter telling what happened to them.
as for writing a little chunk, I won't do, for the fact that I don't really know whats going on and what you have planed, if anything.
but anyways, those are just a few things i would do.
and i know how you feel, i get writers block all the time, when i'm writing. so i was glad to help. :)
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:D thanks! But I know what I'm doing and I want to get an inside of when Edward left Bella. Then the rest will be in Bella's POV.:D
lollipopszx3 posted over a year ago
rubytuesday101 said:
You have a good story,for the next chapter explain about how edward feels and how he has to go to school and do normal things.Then he should meet bella and her son.Thats just idea but i think you should keep writing it's a good story.
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Thanks! I might do that for later chapters because I want to show how Bella feels!
lollipopszx3 posted over a year ago
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