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Twilight Series Question

ok so im riting a story and it starts out after renesmee and jake are married, read and comment i no its alot.

When I was done and looking descant I sucked in a big breath and descended the long staircase, Jacob saw me and the instant he did his whole face lit up. It looked like just seeing me changed his day, from a bad one - one of stress, of anger - to the best day of his entire life. He ran up to me and scoped me up into his arms. "Where did you go?" he yelled even though I was in his arms still. "I wake up and saw that you went there, I thought you ran away!"
    I almost did, I thought. No it was wrong to make his day worse, I'd tell him about the baby after the thing with Sam got worked out. "I couldn't sleep." I said then tried to smile weakly and failed. I jumped out of his arms and ran to the bathroom. He came after me, probably too stunned to say anything, and waited in the corner as I was violently sick.
Thats all i got im not done tho
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fantastic! keep it up!
briza posted over a year ago
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OMG, did u write tht, i love it :)
Life_sucks posted over a year ago
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add me and please if you dont mind send me the finish product
mizzsalvatore12 posted over a year ago
 pinkfluby114558 posted over a year ago
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4433girl said:
GREAT JOB SO FAR I CAN'T WAIT TILL YOU FINISH. IT'S REALLY GOOD
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disneyminniejd said:
WOW that is really good. And i am not just saying that to be nice it is really good lol.You should finish it and let people know because i want to read the rest and i am a HUGE twilight fan (TEAM JACOB!!!!!!!):D
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Michelle-Bieber said:
I think it's really good you should totally keep writing :)!!!!!!!!!!!<3
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Castiel4ever said:
Keep writing. It's good!
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Dayli said:
Oh great job, please keep writing super cool. I'm a fan of the series and cant get enough...
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im a huge fan too,I want more, more more! but idk y SM is writing abut Bree Tanner
pinkfluby114558 posted over a year ago
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Omg i said the same thing i mean Bree was just a character that took what like 2 pages on the book? i mean she is going to be writing more about Twilight she needs to finish Midnight Sun... my opinion. but let me know when you write more on what you are working on right now..
Dayli posted over a year ago
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yaya
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