lovebaltor You're welcome :) I'm a little confused with this opening though, tbh, so here's my little critique: Who are these sixteen people? If you count up all the Winx (including Roxy) and the Specialists (With Nabu), that only adds up to 13. This "following the footsteps of their parents" leads me to believe that this could possibly be the children of the Winx? A prologue is something that opens a story and establishes the setting and gives background details; usually an earlier story that ties into the main one. This [i]does[/i] provide some background details, but I don't think it gives enough. Who are these sixteen people? Are they the Winx and Specialists? Their children? The parents of the Winx and Specialists? This information would really make the intro to this story more coherent. And this quiz...why is it so important? How is this mission more dangerous than all other missions the Winx have faced? I know this can be explained in the first chapter, but a prologue should give more background knowledge than this. The ending was fine, and flowed much more smoothly than the beginning. The intro is what threw me off because you didn't provide the readers with enough detail.

florasedge31  @lovebaltor, pif (Princess-Flora) has an extra character that she uses as Flora's twin sister. which adds up to 14. I dont know who the other 2 are though. @pif, This sound really cool and I cant wait to read it.