Rachel's POV:
The next day Andrew and me went out for shopping and got some dresses, and also some sandals that reminded me of the one that Cindrella had.
It was very very pretty.
We went back to the park.
"Try it on and walk like the other girls" He said giving me the sandals.
I couldn't stand on that because I lost my grip and fell down.
He got a call from one of his friends.
They told told him to be at the park and also added that they were coming.
We both were seated at one of the benches in the park.
Before that he asked me to take my glasses and asked me to wear the dress and sandals that we bought at the mall.
Actually, the dress was very short (according to me).
Waiting there for nearly fifteen minutes, we were a bit tired.
The group came towards us.
"Hey dude, who is this chick?" Jake questioned.
"Wanna come for a ride?" Peter asked me.
Andrew stood up and asked "Can't you guys recognize her?"
All said "NO!"
"Now tell us who she is" Brittany told walking towards us.
"Okay! Fine! This is.... Rachel".
"You mean Rachel Stewart , the NERDY one?" Oliver asked.
Andrew nodded.
"Man, what did you do to her?" Peter asked.
"Guys, I'm gonna help her in participating in the Queen of the Year Contest" he said "And I need your help too, Brittany"
"No way! You want me to help this b**ch?" she said.
"Who do you think you are? Who do you think I am?" she said at me and left.
"Andrew she too is participating in it and you can't ask her to help her, dude!" Oliver said pointing at me and Brittany.
After some time, everyone left us alone.
"Let's go back home" he said.
We both went to my home and climbed upstairs towards my room.
"Come on try walking with your sandals..." he told me.
I started to walk but I failed falling on the floor.
"I don't have my grip while I wear this" I said pointing at the sandals.
"You can do it and you SHOULD do it" he said.
"Okay..." I said and started walking with those sandals.
Again I fell down.
But.
This time I was over him.
I fell over him and we were on the bed.
I kept staring into my eyes when I was being mesmerized by his eyes.
I was able to feel his arms on my waist.
We were very close.
I mean very close.
What are we both doing?
Stupid butterflies started flying in my stomach.
[A/N: Are they gonna kiss?? Comment to let me know how you feel! And answer the above question..The first person who answers will get the dedication for next chapter!! :)
-Nivi xxxx]
The next day Andrew and me went out for shopping and got some dresses, and also some sandals that reminded me of the one that Cindrella had.
It was very very pretty.
We went back to the park.
"Try it on and walk like the other girls" He said giving me the sandals.
I couldn't stand on that because I lost my grip and fell down.
He got a call from one of his friends.
They told told him to be at the park and also added that they were coming.
We both were seated at one of the benches in the park.
Before that he asked me to take my glasses and asked me to wear the dress and sandals that we bought at the mall.
Actually, the dress was very short (according to me).
Waiting there for nearly fifteen minutes, we were a bit tired.
The group came towards us.
"Hey dude, who is this chick?" Jake questioned.
"Wanna come for a ride?" Peter asked me.
Andrew stood up and asked "Can't you guys recognize her?"
All said "NO!"
"Now tell us who she is" Brittany told walking towards us.
"Okay! Fine! This is.... Rachel".
"You mean Rachel Stewart , the NERDY one?" Oliver asked.
Andrew nodded.
"Man, what did you do to her?" Peter asked.
"Guys, I'm gonna help her in participating in the Queen of the Year Contest" he said "And I need your help too, Brittany"
"No way! You want me to help this b**ch?" she said.
"Who do you think you are? Who do you think I am?" she said at me and left.
"Andrew she too is participating in it and you can't ask her to help her, dude!" Oliver said pointing at me and Brittany.
After some time, everyone left us alone.
"Let's go back home" he said.
We both went to my home and climbed upstairs towards my room.
"Come on try walking with your sandals..." he told me.
I started to walk but I failed falling on the floor.
"I don't have my grip while I wear this" I said pointing at the sandals.
"You can do it and you SHOULD do it" he said.
"Okay..." I said and started walking with those sandals.
Again I fell down.
But.
This time I was over him.
I fell over him and we were on the bed.
I kept staring into my eyes when I was being mesmerized by his eyes.
I was able to feel his arms on my waist.
We were very close.
I mean very close.
What are we both doing?
Stupid butterflies started flying in my stomach.
[A/N: Are they gonna kiss?? Comment to let me know how you feel! And answer the above question..The first person who answers will get the dedication for next chapter!! :)
-Nivi xxxx]
The sky turned as dark as the eerie path in an endless cave as I walked briskly up the pathway of my new house. I finally reached the door and the strong, cold wind howled in my ears and tore away the last of autumn's golden leaves. I took a deep breath, opened the door and cautiously stepped inside. I was greeted by a grand entrance hall and the greatest flight of stairs I've ever seen! I decided to take a tour around this magnificent mansion. "Am I dead or am I alive?" I'd whisper, absolutely stunned. I opened the door of my new bedroom. I felt a buzz of excitement erupt in me. There was a portrait that hung over the king size bed. It was of a girl with long, wavy ginger hair. she wore a navy ball gown and her eyes shone like sapphires. I unpacked my bags, got into my PJs and read a chapter of my book.
Could This be The Proof of Life We've Been Looking For?
curiosity rover
“You can’t!” I screeched, griping the thick grass beneath my paws.
“The whole forest will belong to the Pack of Shadows!” the dark wolf exclaimed enthusiastically, his fur flickering like shadows, “No wolf will stop us!”
I have to do something! I couldn’t let it end like this! Not with the alpha in this state! Not with the pack split in four!
“Out of my way pup!” he tossed me aside like a tiny mouse.
“No!” I leaped at him, biting and clawing with all my strength.
“This is pointless! You cannot defeat me she-wolf!” I felt him bite me and fling me away again. I was too tired to move now, after traveling this far without resting, I can no longer breathe enough to live.
I’m over; this is the end of the Pack of Ice! I lay winded and defeated, awaiting death’s arrival patiently.
1. Leaving holes in the backstory.
As learned from Marty Chan, the human imagination is not only the most beautiful place in the world, it can also be the most horrific. If a person leaves some space empty (ex: "Tara disappeared after the encounter and was never heard from again....") , your mind will immediately fill it in, your imagination coming up with the most grisly scenario possible....
2. Waiting a REALLY long time for the killer/ monster to show up.
The person becomes bored and even slightly drowsy, which makes them more vulnerable to fear. If the antagonist pops up about halfway through (especially out of nowhere, and at night) they'll jump up as though just awaken from a nightmare. A little humor will definitely help if you're planning on doing this.
As learned from Marty Chan, the human imagination is not only the most beautiful place in the world, it can also be the most horrific. If a person leaves some space empty (ex: "Tara disappeared after the encounter and was never heard from again....") , your mind will immediately fill it in, your imagination coming up with the most grisly scenario possible....
2. Waiting a REALLY long time for the killer/ monster to show up.
The person becomes bored and even slightly drowsy, which makes them more vulnerable to fear. If the antagonist pops up about halfway through (especially out of nowhere, and at night) they'll jump up as though just awaken from a nightmare. A little humor will definitely help if you're planning on doing this.
