The concept you have is very interesting, but your execution could use some work. You have a good idea of perspective, but the eye that is farthest away is a little to big in proportion to placement and perspective, especially when compared to the other half of the face. And the lips are a wee bit offset as well. You may also want to work a little more on shading and light source. But it's good nonetheless!
Happy drawing!
getting better, but if you used thinner outlines it would make it look better
posted over a year ago
well for one, I'm using a computer mose, two this was done on Deviantart muro so I kind of had an issue, if I had better equipment, it wouldn't look this way.
pretty cool! was this done on a computer? if it was, than its WAY better than my cpu art. im better without a computer. i like the hair and the ears, too.