Percy Jackson and the Olympians

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Percy Jackson and the Olympians Question

Thoughts on my made up prophecy? ^__^

My horrible attempt at a Prophecy for my fanfic. :D Be honest please... I need to know if it sounds catching and makes you want to read more about it...

Four halfbloods shall embark on a quest
to the land of the rising sun
where what they seek shall rest.
Taken by the one slain by twins
'Tis the one seeking revenge, changing skins.
Three shall be of the eldest gods
while one shall be of the goddess of thoughts.
Succeed they might, fail they may
for one shall meet the end of their days
in that lurks Death.

So...what do you think? Mysterious enough to keep the reader's attention? Gives away too much? FEEDBACK APPRECIATED! xx
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In the land that reeks Death* Sorry :P
cuteypuffgirl posted over a year ago
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I like it but who goes on the quest?
alex31234 posted over a year ago
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wats the title of the fanfic
greeksrule11 posted over a year ago
 cuteypuffgirl posted over a year ago
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Percy Jackson and the Olympians Answers

Nicolicious said:
Great it's really mistifiying it's better than the one i suggested
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posted over a year ago 
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You kidding? You inspired me! :D
cuteypuffgirl posted over a year ago
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Really I inspired someone :O
Nicolicious posted over a year ago
sideshowbobbart said:
I like it although I think it reveals a bit too much as we can immediatly guess who the four halfbloods shall be and it maybe should be a bit more mysterious ...
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posted over a year ago 
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Actually Zeus's kid will not be Thalia, she'll be an OC of mine.
cuteypuffgirl posted over a year ago
Nikita15 said:
It sounds awesome!!! Love, love, love it!!
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posted over a year ago 
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Thanks :)
cuteypuffgirl posted over a year ago
silver93 said:
Um, I don't think Athena would appreciate being referred to as the Goddess of thoughts. It sounds like they're going to Japan, are you incorporating Japanese Gods?
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posted over a year ago 
percabethandchb said:
Its perfect 4 percy jackson!
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greeksrule11 said:
soory it's good but its to obvious and the four poeple on the quest so easy its percy thalia and nico which are the "three shall be of the eldest gods" everyone one knows that the eldest gods which are male are zeus poseidon and hades.and the last is annabeth i mean serouisly "while one shall be of the goddess of thoughts." everyone knows athena is the only smart goddess with a child.
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Technically the eldest god who would have children is Demeter.
nixiedover posted over a year ago
mslone90 said:
It reveals too much information regarding what they are to do, and all letters must be capitalized in the beginning of each line.
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nixiedover said:
Most prophecies or four or six lines long, so there's that.
And no offense, but it wasn't that great a prophecy...
But that's just the prophecy itself, the plot and suspense of this book is just like, " What's gonna happen? tell me. TELL ME OR I EAT YOU."
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posted over a year ago 
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Minus the obviousness of who's going on the prophecy...
nixiedover posted over a year ago
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And some other stuff, but that's it
nixiedover posted over a year ago
ShortPerson said:
YES YES I WANT TO READ THIS! LINK?
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