Date: February 18, 1960
Location: Ogden Utah
Time: 4:02 PM
Railroad: Southern Pacific
Donut was working in the train yard, uncoupling freight cars going down the hump. He was thinking about the story Ryan told him yesterday. At first, he doubted the story was true, but a few hours ago, Donut heard about a terrible train crash that happened just north of their location.
Donut: Why did Ryan have to tell me that story? The ghost he mentioned could get on board my train, and haunt me.
Meadow: *Stops the train, and looks at Donut* Donut, stop talking to yourself, and uncouple those freight cars!
Donut: Sorry. *Uncouples the first three freight cars from the train*
Meadow: Thank you. *Makes the train move forward again at 3 miles an hour*
Michael: *Talking on a loudspeaker* Donut, come to my office.
Donut: Shit. What did I do this time?
In Michael's office
Michael: In Winnemucca, our railway has a shortage on engineers. They want you to go over there, and drive trains for some time.
Donut: How long will I stay there?
Michael: Not too long. You should be back here by tomorrow.
Donut: Okay.
On his way to Winnemucca, Donut crossed the viaduct where Anthony derailed his train.
Donut: I sure hope I don't have to cross this bridge on my way back.
But he did. Other tracks to Ogden were blocked off by the snow. When Donut got to the viaduct, it was 11:04 PM.
Donut: *Looks around as he slowly crosses the bridge in his train* Looks like that ghost won't show up anywhere. Ryan made that up. *Sees a pink light, and stops his train on the viaduct* Must be a red signal with faulty wiring. That's funny, I don't remember seeing any signal near this bridge.
But it wasn't a signal. It was the ghost of the engineer that crashed her train 18 years ago.
Donut: *Sees the ghost coming towards him* Oh no you don't! *Drives his train backwards, away from the ghost* All I have is eight empty boxcars. You won't get me!!
Donut slept in his train on a siding, and returned to Ogden at 6:30 in the next morning.
Donut: *At his house, calling Michael*
Michael: *Answers the phone* Yes?
Donut: Sir? I'm sick. I can't come to work today.
Michael: I'm sorry to hear that. Feel better. *Hangs up*
Donut: Ugh. *Goes to his bed to sleep*
The End
On the next episode of Ponies On The Rails
A mare visits the Union Pacific from another railroad
This has been a SeanTheHedgehog production
The Leader in fanfictions
Location: Ogden Utah
Time: 4:02 PM
Railroad: Southern Pacific
Donut was working in the train yard, uncoupling freight cars going down the hump. He was thinking about the story Ryan told him yesterday. At first, he doubted the story was true, but a few hours ago, Donut heard about a terrible train crash that happened just north of their location.
Donut: Why did Ryan have to tell me that story? The ghost he mentioned could get on board my train, and haunt me.
Meadow: *Stops the train, and looks at Donut* Donut, stop talking to yourself, and uncouple those freight cars!
Donut: Sorry. *Uncouples the first three freight cars from the train*
Meadow: Thank you. *Makes the train move forward again at 3 miles an hour*
Michael: *Talking on a loudspeaker* Donut, come to my office.
Donut: Shit. What did I do this time?
In Michael's office
Michael: In Winnemucca, our railway has a shortage on engineers. They want you to go over there, and drive trains for some time.
Donut: How long will I stay there?
Michael: Not too long. You should be back here by tomorrow.
Donut: Okay.
On his way to Winnemucca, Donut crossed the viaduct where Anthony derailed his train.
Donut: I sure hope I don't have to cross this bridge on my way back.
But he did. Other tracks to Ogden were blocked off by the snow. When Donut got to the viaduct, it was 11:04 PM.
Donut: *Looks around as he slowly crosses the bridge in his train* Looks like that ghost won't show up anywhere. Ryan made that up. *Sees a pink light, and stops his train on the viaduct* Must be a red signal with faulty wiring. That's funny, I don't remember seeing any signal near this bridge.
But it wasn't a signal. It was the ghost of the engineer that crashed her train 18 years ago.
Donut: *Sees the ghost coming towards him* Oh no you don't! *Drives his train backwards, away from the ghost* All I have is eight empty boxcars. You won't get me!!
Donut slept in his train on a siding, and returned to Ogden at 6:30 in the next morning.
Donut: *At his house, calling Michael*
Michael: *Answers the phone* Yes?
Donut: Sir? I'm sick. I can't come to work today.
Michael: I'm sorry to hear that. Feel better. *Hangs up*
Donut: Ugh. *Goes to his bed to sleep*
The End
On the next episode of Ponies On The Rails
A mare visits the Union Pacific from another railroad
This has been a SeanTheHedgehog production
The Leader in fanfictions
LATER:
Airbourne: And that's why you should let my client go..
Judge : Please sir your client Master Sword has been caught robbing a blank with a stolen police car... And all you did was show up, sit down, and say "that's why you should let him go"..
Airbourne: ...... I'll give you twenty bucks.
Judge: DONE! (pounds hammer).
LATER AGAIN:
Master Sword: See, told you my friend will get us out.
Saten: I guess... He creeps me out though.. He kept asking for an dirty picture of Twilight..
Master Sword: Oh yeah. Same way I have one for your Derpy
Saten: (angrily) WHAT!?
Master Sword: Yeah, have it over my wall-
Saten: (punches Sword in the face).
Master Sword: (holding his bloody nose) still worth it!
That's all I got, so end of episode.
Airbourne: And that's why you should let my client go..
Judge : Please sir your client Master Sword has been caught robbing a blank with a stolen police car... And all you did was show up, sit down, and say "that's why you should let him go"..
Airbourne: ...... I'll give you twenty bucks.
Judge: DONE! (pounds hammer).
LATER AGAIN:
Master Sword: See, told you my friend will get us out.
Saten: I guess... He creeps me out though.. He kept asking for an dirty picture of Twilight..
Master Sword: Oh yeah. Same way I have one for your Derpy
Saten: (angrily) WHAT!?
Master Sword: Yeah, have it over my wall-
Saten: (punches Sword in the face).
Master Sword: (holding his bloody nose) still worth it!
That's all I got, so end of episode.
Has anyone ever read CHEERLIEES GARDEN.
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw movies (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her more like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for more of my latest story..
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw movies (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her more like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for more of my latest story..