It was 12am in Ponyville, and all the ponies were asleep, except for one little pony, Score. For some reason she couldn't sleep well.
Score: Ugh!! Why can't I sleep?!?!? (Looks at clock) UGH!!!
Score gets out of bed, and grabs a cup of milk. Then, she finally falls asleep. At around 3am, she hears a loud noise. And she decides to go and investigate.
Score: W-Who's there?!
????: ...........
Score: (grabs pan) Come out wherever you are!!!!
????: GET IN THE BAG!!!!
Score: What?!?!
????: That's right, get in the buckin Bag!
Score: *gasp* *whispers* the army.....
Suddenly, a bunch of Colts dressed in uniforms come out. One comes out of Score's closet, and others come from under her bed.
Score: What the hay are you all doing here!!! I said I wasn't gonna join the army!!!!!
Colt: We didn't asked you if you wanted to, your going to!
Score: Azura! CS! Nikki! Stormy! Pacifica!! HELP!!!!!
Colt: (puts tape on Score's mouth)
Score: MMMMMF!!!!
Colt: Listen Score, if you don't join the army NOW, we will take over Ponyville and kill all your friends! Got it?!?!?
Score: (calms down) *nods*
Colt: Good then! Now let's go everypony! (Puts Score into a bag)
Colt: We're gonna need more than just one pony!
Colt: I think I know some ponies as strong as Score!
Colt: Okay then, lets get them.
They all left Score in a bag in their army car. And they went to kidnap the rest. The first house where they stopped was in Peppermint's house. They grabbed her and put her in a bag, then threw her inside the car with Score. After that, they headed to Aura's house. Aura did fought back, but it was too late. They shoved her in the car too. Finally, they went to Grape Fruit's house. Grape fruit did hit a colt with her legs, but they also shoved her in the car, then they all left to San Palomino Desert.
To be continued.....
Score: Ugh!! Why can't I sleep?!?!? (Looks at clock) UGH!!!
Score gets out of bed, and grabs a cup of milk. Then, she finally falls asleep. At around 3am, she hears a loud noise. And she decides to go and investigate.
Score: W-Who's there?!
????: ...........
Score: (grabs pan) Come out wherever you are!!!!
????: GET IN THE BAG!!!!
Score: What?!?!
????: That's right, get in the buckin Bag!
Score: *gasp* *whispers* the army.....
Suddenly, a bunch of Colts dressed in uniforms come out. One comes out of Score's closet, and others come from under her bed.
Score: What the hay are you all doing here!!! I said I wasn't gonna join the army!!!!!
Colt: We didn't asked you if you wanted to, your going to!
Score: Azura! CS! Nikki! Stormy! Pacifica!! HELP!!!!!
Colt: (puts tape on Score's mouth)
Score: MMMMMF!!!!
Colt: Listen Score, if you don't join the army NOW, we will take over Ponyville and kill all your friends! Got it?!?!?
Score: (calms down) *nods*
Colt: Good then! Now let's go everypony! (Puts Score into a bag)
Colt: We're gonna need more than just one pony!
Colt: I think I know some ponies as strong as Score!
Colt: Okay then, lets get them.
They all left Score in a bag in their army car. And they went to kidnap the rest. The first house where they stopped was in Peppermint's house. They grabbed her and put her in a bag, then threw her inside the car with Score. After that, they headed to Aura's house. Aura did fought back, but it was too late. They shoved her in the car too. Finally, they went to Grape Fruit's house. Grape fruit did hit a colt with her legs, but they also shoved her in the car, then they all left to San Palomino Desert.
To be continued.....
Has anyone ever read CHEERLIEES GARDEN.
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw movies (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her more like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for more of my latest story..
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw movies (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her more like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for more of my latest story..