My Little Pony Friendship is Magic Article: Discord"s Revenge Part 1

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posted by Mylittlecute12

When mane6 were doing there own business when they all heard evil laughing. Twilight: who's there!
Discord:its me (evil laughing)
twilight:oh so its u discord! i knew it!
Discord: why i don't like being a filly (evil laughing)
twilight: i can't cause i grew up and why are u asking me!
Discord: cause of this! (makes twilight a filly)
filly twilight: hey!!
Discord: just to tell u when this hourglass is out of sand u will be a filly forever!!!!!!!!!!! (evil laughing)
filly twilight: no no!!!!!
Discord: now to do the same with ur friends!!!!!!!

To be continued.........

tailsfan111 likes this

btflash I'm really sorry to say this, but I have to. I can't stand to read this. For one thing, you could improve the grammar of this A LOT. The grammar is just terrible. I mean, you have a good concept here, it was just written with horrible grammar. For another thing, you're rushing through this excessively. I can't see any descriptive details except for the words in each parentheses, and those don't even exceed four words each. The words are also way too simple for my taste. If I was an average fanfic reader, I would've turned away from this almost instantly. You have to make this INTERESTING and use complicated words, not words at a 3rd grade level. Sorry I'm being so hard on you, but it had to be said.

Mylittlecute12 oh i didn't realize

btflash A fanfiction isn't something that anyone can write in a couple of minutes. A fanfiction is something that you put a lot of time, effort, and sometimes frustration into. It's important to take your time when writing a fanfiction, or it just becomes bland and "loses its flavor" Again, I'm sorry if I was too hard on you, but think of this as a learning experience. This fanfiction does have potential, and it would be good if you take enough time to make it good.

Mylittlecute12 yeah your right.

applejackrocks I love it! keep it up!

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Filly Luna

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Twilight Sparkle

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Mane 6 as humans

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MLP:Fim humans

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Equestria Girls Game App

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Princess Luna and Derpy Hoves

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Bronies: A rant on the Hate going too far!

posted by PhoenixRoyale

This issue makes Fluttershy cry!

Note: Out of 5 random bronies on this club (It was originally intended to be a certain group, but my patience goes up and down, and at that moment, I became a bit too impatient with the rest who didn't reply, so I asked some random bronies, who I wish not to say who), four have agreed that I should write a rant which targets this lovely situation. It may include pictures regarding of negativity about us, which may include stereotyping, immaturity, inaccurate portrayal, or just downright excessive hating. If you're about to prepare your Twilight Gun and go on a love and tolerate beatdown spree,...