Can you help me?

My cousin's birthday is soon,and my present is a song I wrotte to her listening to Michael and Lisa

"You and I"

You and I
You and I
will be together forever
You and I
we'll be together forever
You're everything to me
and you know,and you enjoy that
You let me down sometimes,but you don't care
Or may be yes
You that I will always love you,no matter what happen
You know I will always defent you,but I know
Nobody can hurt you like I can
No one can save you,or kill you,or love you,like I can
You and I
You and I
will be together forever
You and I
just like good friends
Who don't love each other
How can I stand you?I don't know
But I'll always support you
How can I be so blind?How can I try to save you?
Nobody knows why I love you and I hate you at the same time
And no one will knows that I can kill you
again and again
but I on't want to
'cause I'll miss you,fucking bitch
You really understand me,sweetie
and I know
Nobody loves you like I do
and nobody will understand you,like I do
Every one say we're crazy
every one,they're just idiots
You I love you,I know you love me
Why we fight so much? just tell me why
And I know,this will be forever
You and I
You and I
will be together forever
You and I
We can walk all the world together
'cause we're one,we're one
You're my life


Do you like it? You think is nice?
Please help me!
I'm not sure about it
Thanks!!