What do yall think of this poem i made up it's called love is dead when it says cant you see all you have to do is look at me i drew a pic of a skelaton

love is dead cant you see all you have to do is look at me im all strung up my heart in two be thankful this isn't you my puddle of tears on the ground to sign of love to be found i wait and i wait but no love for me love is dead can't you see love is what never came for me :(