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My Earth day poem.. i wrote it in feburary and i had Mr.Thriller in mind when i wrote it. Do you like it. No negative comments unless its creative critisism:)

What is this we've done.
Don't you realize what I, Me, You, Us, We have done to THEE.
Our home for ever with no where else to go, the end of the road.
Go ahead drink the water, its' tates comes from you.
Fine as wine the air has Just the right amount of smoke and here I will choke with your factories blowing steam and your money making machines.
WE are destroying OUR selves, but it's okay.
someone will fix it right? They'll figure out something?
They'll figure out....
oh they....
NO! they who?
WE are they, and They created this disater so they shall help fix it.
Green is the color of our world no going back with it's filthy sources going black.
How about you over there, Mr.Millionaire.
help us re-love the planet and re-build the world.
Peoples' success up there nose, Money is the answer to it all i suppose.
No?
Then what is?
there's other children that want toys and clothes, plants and animals also have a need for their population to grow.
We must have forgotten about love.
L.O.V.E
You hate me.
I hate you.
Unexceptable.
I shall not take, I shall not take or let the world recieve hate.
Go ahead burn down another forest, but when you chop down that tree I hope you're thinking of me when there's no more air to breathe and you all will wonder, how could this be?
I'll tell you how.
Never mind, I already did.
Open up your hearts and realize the life we live.

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i have more on www.allpoetry.com/RobynnIvory
ilovetheWORLD posted over a year ago
 ilovetheWORLD posted over a year ago
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peterslover said:
This is beautifully written. Well done. People don't realize that they are; we, us, I, me. WE are all responsible for the planet. And you shared that thought very well in your poem. You should send your poem to the "Readers Digest" magazine. I think they would like to print it! I'm posting this most beautiful photo of a patch of green that is untouched by man, except for the dirt road.
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This is beautifully written. Well done. People don't realize that they are; we, us, I, me. WE are all responsible for the planet. And you shared that thought very well in your poem. You should send your poem to the "Readers Digest" magazine. I think they would like to print it! I'm posting this most beautiful photo of a patch of green that is untouched by man, except for the dirt road.
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K5-HOWL said:
This poem was totally awesome like wicked! Wuv it :3
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This poem was totally awesome like wicked! Wuv it :3
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Beautiful pic!!!!!!!! <3
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caligurl16 said:
I love it! Beautiful!
I feel the same way...
<3
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liberiangirl_mj said:
I love your poem!! you write it in a beautiful way.. and is so true...
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I love your poem!! you write it in a beautiful way.. and is so true...
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2468244 said:
*clap clap clap clap* AWESOME!!!!!! i love it!!! Mr. Thriller would too!!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox to u <3
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reneemonique said:
hehe i like your street name for michael,Mr.Thriller good one:)
Absalutly gob-smaked,its very well written,      ilovetheWORLD. I liked how you added simple things like Love and Hate,children,forests,life and Hearts. Most of the things that Michael sang about,he'd be very proud and yes we all are kind of responsible for our world,earth and many of us dont,it teaches a great lesson:)<3 xx
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hehe i like your street name for michael,Mr.Thriller good one:)
Absalutly gob-smaked,its very well written, 	  ilovetheWORLD. I liked how you added simple things like Love and Hate,children,forests,life and Hearts. Most of the things that Michael sang about,he'd be very proud and yes we all are kind of responsible for our world,earth and many of us dont,it teaches a great lesson:)<3 xx
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wow love the pic!
evanescence_ posted over a year ago
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