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My poem about my love

My heart screams for your love
I want to be free, like a graceful dove
I beg and plead for someone to love me
I want to let you be
You are happy with her
I can’t help but feel insecure
When you’re with her I’m glad
But part of me is still sad
My soul feels like its dead
My heart’s pain if affecting my head
I want someone to care
I want to feel the love in the air
My heart is melting, slowly breaking
I want to stop the aching
Isn’t there someone out there loving me?
My heart is like a lock, someone holds the key
Until my heart is unlocked, I remain sad
But my pain will stop because you are glad

 brooke9878 posted over a year ago
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aitypw said:
This is so cute!
I love it!
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This is so cute!
I love it!
posted over a year ago 
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Thank you
brooke9878 posted over a year ago
irena83 said:
I like your style,and the poem is very nice,real and sad. The beauty of this poem is that you don't find relief in hatred but you scream secretly,and your heart is broken,so you need someone to be there for you. And you still wait,you hope that day will come,when sadness is gone...
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posted over a year ago 
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Thank you... this poem really describes me
brooke9878 posted over a year ago
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