Love Question

A poem I wrote about someone I love.

When you’re happy, I’m glad
When you’re depressed, I’m sad
When you’re with her, it doesn’t pain me.
I feel happy that you and her are free.
But do you love me?
I wonder that while my heart is breaking.
I smile even though it’s aching.
Will I ever find love?
Will I ever have the freedom, like a dove?
My sadness is consuming my soul, right to the very top
But because you’re happy, the pain will stop.

It's about a friend of mine who wanted to ask me out, then met a different girl (true story)

brooke9878 posted over a year ago

you should have posted this as an article, not a question :)

Olivine posted over a year ago

Too late now :)

brooke9878 posted over a year ago

brooke9878 posted over a year ago

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Love Answers

kerikeri said:

aww! sad! :(

posted over a year ago

I know right? It sucks...

brooke9878 posted over a year ago

no it's not sucks! :)

kerikeri posted over a year ago

melikhan said:

poor u
=[

posted over a year ago

As long as he's happy... so am I

brooke9878 posted over a year ago

thriller4ever said:

I'm very sad that your hearts broken....but always remember god does everything for our good. maybe god didn't want you to be with him...maybe god thought deserve better things and people and maybe there's an awesome guy waiting to meet a wonderful girl like you and come into your life....cheer up girl!!

posted over a year ago

I'm trying too, but my friends also hate him, so it makes me sad again!!!

brooke9878 posted over a year ago