So here is Chapter 4 I know its short I’m sorry I just really couldn’t get in the groove and honestly I really don’t like it.. I actually rewrote it 5 different times and it still hasn’t come out the way I really wanted it to, so I’m sorry if it sucks and thanks for reading! =) O and I’ve grown to love 5x24 because we saw the feeling House has for Cuddy =) and that made me happy! Moving on here is chapter 4
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As House walked down the hall he continued to hear the whimpers and laughter that only fueled his anger. Without thinking he threw open Cuddy’s bedroom door. When he opened the door his stomach was full of disgust for the man that was currently on top of the woman he loved. Even though he wouldn’t admit it to anyone even himself. House looked down and saw the discarded underwear on the floor, and the terror in Cuddy’s eyes and it made him lose control.
House yelled startling Danny “Get the fuck off her!” while yelling House swung his cane toward Danny’s head. His can struck Danny right in the temple knocking him off Cuddy and onto the floor. Cuddy looked up and saw House suddenly feeling a little safe for the first time since Danny entered her house. House and Cuddy made eye contact for a brief moment until House was tackled to the ground. Cuddy gasped.
Danny had tackled House and started to punch at Houses face and chest. “Now you’ll get some of your own medicine you crippled bastard.” Danny said to House while beating him. Cuddy saw something flicker in Danny’s hand. Cuddy froze Danny had a knife and he was going to kill House. One moment Cuddy was on the bed and the next she was on top of Danny’s back yelling, screaming and hitting with all her might to get him off House. Cuddy managed to get Danny to drop the knife, but Danny did throw Cuddy off him toward the ground. Throwing Cuddy off him was all the time House needed to get Danny on his back. Danny was suddenly on his back getting beaten by House. House had gotten so into punching and hitting Danny. House’s knuckles were bloody and he still wasn’t finished. Danny quickly went unconscious, but House wouldn’t let up until he felt soft delicate hands on his shoulders and Cuddy’s soft voice telling him to stop.
“House..Greg.. stop your going to kill him. He’s not worth it.” Cuddy knew she still wasn’t getting to him so finally got face to face with him. She put her hands softly on his stubbly cheeks to get his attention and said “Greg. I’m going to need you here not in jail please stop he’s not worth your life” she softly ran her hands through his stubble and through his hair. That somehow brought House out of his daze, and quickly wrapped his arms around her body. He moved his mouth to her ear and whispered “He didn’t touch you did he?”
“No Greg. You came and saved me before it happened.”
“If I hadn’t left earlier then none of this would’ve happened. You would’ve been safe.” He almost broke down, but steeled himself back up for Cuddy’s sake.
Cuddy could hear the regret in House’s tone. She couldn’t take it anymore “Greg, you saved me. If it weren’t for you he would’ve raped me, and my life would’ve changed forever. You Gregory House you saved me and I don’t think I’ll ever be able to repay you for that.” Tears fell as Cuddy let out how much she truly thanked House for saving her. As tears fell down her face House put his hands on her cheek and gently wiped away the tears that fell with the pad of his thumb. To reassure her she was safe he gave her a gentle kiss on the lips……
Sorry I stopped it here, but I thought this was a good place to stop and I’ve hit writers block.. Please Read and Review.. Do I have too much description and not enough dialogue? I’d like to know your thoughts.
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As House walked down the hall he continued to hear the whimpers and laughter that only fueled his anger. Without thinking he threw open Cuddy’s bedroom door. When he opened the door his stomach was full of disgust for the man that was currently on top of the woman he loved. Even though he wouldn’t admit it to anyone even himself. House looked down and saw the discarded underwear on the floor, and the terror in Cuddy’s eyes and it made him lose control.
House yelled startling Danny “Get the fuck off her!” while yelling House swung his cane toward Danny’s head. His can struck Danny right in the temple knocking him off Cuddy and onto the floor. Cuddy looked up and saw House suddenly feeling a little safe for the first time since Danny entered her house. House and Cuddy made eye contact for a brief moment until House was tackled to the ground. Cuddy gasped.
Danny had tackled House and started to punch at Houses face and chest. “Now you’ll get some of your own medicine you crippled bastard.” Danny said to House while beating him. Cuddy saw something flicker in Danny’s hand. Cuddy froze Danny had a knife and he was going to kill House. One moment Cuddy was on the bed and the next she was on top of Danny’s back yelling, screaming and hitting with all her might to get him off House. Cuddy managed to get Danny to drop the knife, but Danny did throw Cuddy off him toward the ground. Throwing Cuddy off him was all the time House needed to get Danny on his back. Danny was suddenly on his back getting beaten by House. House had gotten so into punching and hitting Danny. House’s knuckles were bloody and he still wasn’t finished. Danny quickly went unconscious, but House wouldn’t let up until he felt soft delicate hands on his shoulders and Cuddy’s soft voice telling him to stop.
“House..Greg.. stop your going to kill him. He’s not worth it.” Cuddy knew she still wasn’t getting to him so finally got face to face with him. She put her hands softly on his stubbly cheeks to get his attention and said “Greg. I’m going to need you here not in jail please stop he’s not worth your life” she softly ran her hands through his stubble and through his hair. That somehow brought House out of his daze, and quickly wrapped his arms around her body. He moved his mouth to her ear and whispered “He didn’t touch you did he?”
“No Greg. You came and saved me before it happened.”
“If I hadn’t left earlier then none of this would’ve happened. You would’ve been safe.” He almost broke down, but steeled himself back up for Cuddy’s sake.
Cuddy could hear the regret in House’s tone. She couldn’t take it anymore “Greg, you saved me. If it weren’t for you he would’ve raped me, and my life would’ve changed forever. You Gregory House you saved me and I don’t think I’ll ever be able to repay you for that.” Tears fell as Cuddy let out how much she truly thanked House for saving her. As tears fell down her face House put his hands on her cheek and gently wiped away the tears that fell with the pad of his thumb. To reassure her she was safe he gave her a gentle kiss on the lips……
Sorry I stopped it here, but I thought this was a good place to stop and I’ve hit writers block.. Please Read and Review.. Do I have too much description and not enough dialogue? I’d like to know your thoughts.
