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The Host Chapter 1 The First (4/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

“So, what’s the plan?” Katherine’s voice came out of Damon’s bedroom. Damon and Elena were outside, leaning against the wall opposite of the door. “The plan is to lock you in here for all eternity” Damon replied. “You’ve always had a great sense of humor, Damon” Katherine sarcastically said. “Come on” Damon said to Elena. He walked downstairs, Elena behind him. “Damon, what is the plan?” Elena asked. Damon opened the door and let Elena go first as he answered. “We’re going to your place” he said. Elena blinked. “Why? How is going to my house solving Katherine’s problem?”
“We need to have something. Something your witch friend can put a spell on to protect Katherine from the sun” Damon explained. “I’m not sure if you noticed, but I don’t really have woman friendly stuff in my house” Elena nodded. That made sense. “Wait! I have to give something that belongs to me to her?!” Elena now realized upset. Damon shrugged his shoulders. “Only temporarily. Once we get Stefan back and we’re all safe and happy you get back whatever you’ll give and then she can burn like a barbecue steak for all I care” he said with a smirk. “Well, I guess I can miss something. I’ll see” Elena reluctantly gave in. “Get in the car” Damon said waving at the car.
A few minutes later Elena opened the door of her house, running into Jeremy. She waved at her brother, but he was looking behind her. “Damon! I can see you!” he said shocked. Damon frowned his eyebrows. “Yeah, good for you” he slowly said with an expression that looked as if he seriously questioned Jeremy’s mental well being. “But you’re dead!” Jeremy continued. “Thanks for rubbing it in, pal!” Damon said. Elena made a few steps towards her brother. “Jeremy, are you okay? You haven’t been taking drugs, have you? Let me see your eyes” she commanded, sounding worried. “Maybe he’s on blood now” Damon suggested. Elena abruptly turned around. “You’re not helping, so stay out of it” She turned back to her brother. “What’s going on?” she asked, accenting every word. “I don’t know” Jeremy said, helplessly lifting his hands. “I don’t know what’s wrong. I’m probably just hallucinating. Maybe I just need to get some rest. Yes, that’s what I should do”
“But…” Elena started to protest, but Jeremy already ran upstairs. She looked at Damon. “What the hell was that all about?” Damon lifted his hands. “I don’t know, I’m just…staying out of it”

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Silver's Fanfic Reviews! Bad fanfics:Naruto Episode 1 (Part 1 and 2)

posted by alexischaos2004

Hullo my lovelies. My name is alexischaos2004 or Alexis. Today, I am going to review a fanfiction based off of Naruto, and it is pretty bad. I got the bits from the fanfic from another review on it. So, let's go!

"ARE YOU &&& KIDDING ME? I can't believe we && &$& $& &&&)(&# &$#&T&S two trips to the dentist!"

First, who says actual text symbols in a sentence? Nobody could actually say them. Next, please work on your grammar. I'm not really sure the world of Naruto even has dentists. (It was written like this on the other review on this...

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The Host Chapter 14 Natural (3/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Elena was too ashamed to leave her room and she didn’t open when someone knocked. And thus Caroline invited herself in. She found her best friend sitting in a corner, her arms thrown around her knees.
“Ah, poor thing” Caroline sighed compassionate as she walked to Elena, a box in her arms. “Damon told me what happened. You okay?”
Elena shrugged and wiped her tears. “He’s says this is normal. How would he know? He’s a dude, isn’t he?”
“But he’s right” Caroline said and she sank down next to her.
“My stomach hurts” Elena sobbed. Caroline searched through her box and...

The Vampire Diaries - After Founder's Day

posted by Triscia95

Elena’s POV
    The night got colder as I walked further away from the Founder’s Day party. Just a few more steps and I’ll be at the school.
    I reached the school’s front door but when I tried to open them but they wouldn’t budge. I gave up and sighed. I crossed my arm’s trying to keep warm. Looking around trying to find another way in, though the only way I knew of was the doors in the back of the school.
    I slowly walked my self to the back doors. I grabbed the frost bitten door handle and pulled it open. Once I walked...

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When morning meets night Page 2

posted by alexischaos2004

"Alright than." Silver nodded slowly, turning back to face down at his notebook and pencil. Shadow panted, looking up at the clock on the wall. It was 2:59, and they would leave class at 3:00. "One more minute...." Shadow mumbled to himself, his eyes still locked onto the clock, panting. Now, it turned 3:00, and Shadow immediately got up out of his seat and skated off. Silver watched his whole class leave, and he followed. He pushed his chair under his desk, and took his notebook and pencil with him as he hovered down the hallway. Shadow looked behind him, and teleported to his house.

"...Shadow?"...

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Doppel Crossed chapter 22 The Riot (4/10)(TVD)(finale)

posted by HaleyDewit

Veronica parked her car in front of her supernatural prison. She stepped out and walked to the back of her car.
Two of her minions, guarding the entrance, came towards her to give her a hand. Veronica unlocked the trunk and the two men grabbed Jeremy’s arm.
“Lock him up” she ordered furious. They both held him tightly, though he was in no condition to fight them. “Is Rachel inside?”
One of them confirmed that and she headed to the entrance. Rachel was pacing through the room where Caroline, Stefan and Katherine were captivated.
“Can I talk to you for a moment?” she asked dead serious....

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Doppel Crossed chapter 20 The Gathering (9/10)(TVD)

posted by HaleyDewit

Matt, Keith, Bonnie, Jeremy and Veronica were sitting around the kitchen table. Veronica had given each a cup of coffee, in order to stay awake.
“Thank you” Jeremy said uncomfortable. “You don’t really know Elena. It’s not like you owe her anything”
Veronica cast him a grin that didn’t reach her eyes. “Anything for my soldiers” she replied charming.
“How’s that going?” Matt asked, trying to keep a conversation. “Do you need anyone else in your…army?”
“Why? Interested?” Veronica returned, raising her eyebrows. “For now the training’s canceled” She turned...

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Doppel Crossed chapter 11 Holding On and Letting Go (8/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

“Caroline!”
Caroline was walking on the parking lot of the school. Her conversation with Matt had lasted longer than either of them had expected. She recognized Tyler’s voice, but didn’t bother to turn around. When she reached her car and opened the door Tyler rushed to her and slammed the door.
“Tyler!” Caroline exclaimed reproaching.
“I’m sorry” Tyler said. He took a deep breath. “I saw you talking to Matt” he started.
Caroline quickly turned around. “Oh no. No, no, no, no. You do not get to play jealous boyfriend. You had your shot, you blew it. Now you can go back to...

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Dopple Crossed chapter 9 Complications (7/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Damon and Elena were lying on the hospital bed. Damon was holding Elena in his arms and they were staring at the ceiling.
“I really hope Stefan can talk him out of it” Elena said soft and sad.
“You can always, you know, compel him” Damon said. “I mean, let me or Stefan do it”
Elena lifted her head and looked at Damon as if she strongly considered it, but then shook her head. “No” she said and she lay back down. “I’m tired, Damon” she whispered.
Damon gave her a soft kiss on her upper lip. “Then sleep, princess, I’ll be here watching over you” He looked up at the window....

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Dopple Crossed chapter 6 Loss and Gain (6/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Tyler parked his car on the parking lot of the Mystic Grill. He saw Caroline leaning against the wall outside drinking some Bourbon. He hoped she wouldn’t look up. But as he made his way to the entrance she looked up.
“Tyler?” she said surprised.
Just keep walking, Tyler thought.
“I know you can hear me, Tyler” Caroline said uncomprehending. “Why are you avoiding me?”
Tyler stopped and walked towards Caroline. “Caroline, hi” he forced himself to say. He scratch his hair, feeling uncomfortable. “Don’t you…don’t you have school to go to?”
“Lunch break” Caroline explained....

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Dopple Crossed chapter 5 The Intruder (9/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Damon and Derek entered the Boarding House. Damon took Derek’s arm and raced to the basement. He walked to the freezer and opened it.
“Wow! You have quite a supply here” Derek said admirable.
“Help yourself” Damon said and Derek took a bag of blood. Then they heard a bang.
“What’s that?” Derek asked agitated.
“I have no idea” Damon said frowning. He looked at Derek. “You stay here”
Derek nodded fiercely and Damon ran towards the noise. “Elena?!” he shouted.
“I’m in here!” Elena replied. Damon entered his bedroom. Elena was sitting on the ground surrounded by wooden...

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The Host Chapter 20 The Host (8/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Caroline and Tyler dropped on the ground. They looked up and discovered they were outside. A red glow enlightened the scene and the sun was slowly rising.
“Good thing Bonnie gave him back his ring” Tyler said.
“Can you please not say that name?” Caroline asked. “I don’t want to think about what she got me involved into, let alone hear her name, especially not from you”
Tyler took her hand and nipped it softly. “I’m sorry’
“ ‘s Okay” Caroline said, treating him with a little smile.
“Ehm, shouldn’t they have come out by now?” Tyler asked looking at Bonnies house.
Inside,...

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The Host Chapter 20 The Host (2/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Stefan grabbed Elena by her hair and dragged her back into the house, his ripper face still on.
“Stefan, let go of me. You’re hurting me” Elena cried.
“Well, you’re hurting me!” Stefan growled. “We haven’t even officially broken up yet and you’re already clinging on my brother like a fetus on a navel string”
He dragged her to his bedroom and wanted to throw her inside, when he felt a sudden aching in his back. He looked aside and saw Katherine. He brought his arm back until he found the stake.
“Okay, first of all, ouch!” Stefan said and he pulled out the stake. “Second...

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The Host Chapter 14 Natural (9/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

The Salvatore Boarding House
Stefan and Katherine were back home. Stefan had told Jeremy everything that had happened on Elena’s birthday and only after making sure Jeremy wouldn’t do anything stupid he had left.
“You must be hungry” Katherine said and before Stefan could comment she went off to the basement. She came back with two bags of blood and walked to the cupboard, where she pulled out two wine-glasses. She poured the blood in the glasses as if it were wine. She gave one to Stefan and lifted hers to toast. “Cheers” she said and she hooked her arm in Stefan’s. She pulled...

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The Host Chapter 12 Just the Two of Us (4/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

A cold wind teased Kelsey’s naked body and she shivered. She slowly opened her eyes and looked around. There was nothing but leaves. Kelsey searched the ground with her hands and they touched something cold and solid. She slowly and fearful rotated her head. When she saw her sister’s body she gasped and covered her mouth. “Oh my God” she started crying as she crawled to Amber. “Amber, wake up. Please, honey, wake up” But Ambers eyes remained closed. “I’m so sorry, Amber. This is all my fault” she sobbed.
“Hey, you didn’t do all of it. I kicked some ass too”
Kelsey looked...

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The Host Chapter 11 A Clear View (4/10)

posted by HaleyDewit

Klaus was standing in the center of the parking lot, staring in the distance, waiting for his spy to come back with the doppelganger. He had no intention in killing her rightaway. Not if there was a chance both Salvatores would come to her rescue and could witness her death. That would be beyond his imagination.
He heard some struggling and understood they were back.
“Excellent timing” he slowly said when Amber dropped Elena before his feet. “Please, be a little careful with our special guest”
Amber shrugged. “She’s just a human. She doesn’t matter”
“You were human, not so long...

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The Host Chapter 9 Not What It Seems (5/10) (The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Damon and Elena were in the kitchen, while Jeremy was playing some videogame and Alaric was out.
“Okay, what kind of flavor do you want? We have chocolate, vanilla, strawberry. Make your pick” Damon said, when he showed the three boxes of pudding powder. He was making dessert for after dinner.
“Ehm… strawberry” Elena said. She moved on her chair and felt something pushing against her leg. She stuck her hand in her pocket and took out her cell phone. She suspiciously looked at it. “What’s this?” she asked carefully. Damon turned his head and looked at the black, rectangle that...

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The Host Chapter 7 The Hunt (6/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

“I still can’t believe you killed him”
Amber and Kelsey were hiding in the woods.
“And I can’t believe you just drained him” Kelsey fired back. Amber shrugged. “You know what I am, what did you expect?”
“Who turned you?” Kelsey asked.
“Some guy named Stefan, why?” Amber said. Kelsey’s eyes widened. “Stefan Salvatore?” “Yeah” “You got involved with a Salvatore? Are you out of your mind?”
“I didn’t get involved with him! He got involved with me. He attacked me. And why are you so upset about him being a Salvatore?” Amber asked uncomprehending.
“The...

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Three's a Crowd chapter 14 The Promise (6/10)

posted by HaleyDewit

Mrs. Jones was cleaning the breakfast table when someone rang the bell. She put the dishes on the dresser and walked to the front door. She opened and froze.
“You” she said weak when seeing Cas.
“Hello, Mrs. Jones” Cas said friendly. “Can I come in, please?”
“I…I don’t know, Mr…” Mrs. Jones stammered reluctant.
“Novak. Castiel Novak” Cas introduced himself. He nodded at Meg. “This is Meg Masters. She’s a close friend. Please, Mrs. Jones, I just want to talk to you”
Mrs. Jones sighed. “Fine, then” she said and she let them in. She led them to the kitchen where...

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Three's a Crowd chapter 10 Truth or Dare (7/10)(SPN)

posted by HaleyDewit

Dean and Jo were sitting in a restaurant. Jo had convinced Dean to go out so that he could take his mind of Cas and whatever it was that kept making him ill.
“You look pretty” Dean said, with a faint smile.
“I didn’t even change my outfit” Jo answered cynical.
Dean looked down and Jo recognized his expression.
“Are you texting?” she asked upset.
“What?” Dean said quick. “No, no, I was…I was checking time…”
“why? You bored?” Jo asked offended.
“No!” Dean denied firm. “I just…I don’t want to leave Cas alone for too long. He’s sick and I’m afraid that...

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Dopple Crossed chapter 3 Cry For Help (6/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

“Why exactly are we doing this?” Stefan asked Rebekah. They were standing in front of the Boarding House.
“Because I’m going to be part of your life now and I want to know everyone that’s important to you. Your brother is important to you, isn’t he?”
Stefan sighed. “Yes, he’s very important”
“Well, then get inside” Rebekah said and she opened the door, entering the house. “Hello?” An instant later a strong hand grabbed her throat and forced her against a wall.
“Who are you?” Damon asked threatening.
“Well, I guess you must be Damon” Rebekah said soft.
“Damon,...