How is it? I wrote it!

Title:Forever Rain...

Life always gave me life
time pain,
Every season for me was
rain..
Fate got fainter,
Whenever my beloved one suffered ,
I've drunk blood tears..
Every reason faked out,
Cried, cried and slept..
In heavy rain.,
All things burnt out.
My heart was a pit..
With pickaxe it dug out.
There were hole with
streaming blood...
Little big pit around my
chest full of red water.. My life gifted me lifetime
foreve rain.,
Life gave me less reason for a smile...
Life is a lier....
(when you left .. Than .. .) By-Mixxup(my poetry
name).

I hope you'll like it or understand my feelings... .