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Once upon a time not so long ago,
There lived a boy and girl who's families hated
each other.The families were the Smiths and the
Fahls. The reasons they hate each other are
unknown. The reasons were lost about 6 months ago.
(At a market in torento)Geoff-Dude you should geta girlfreind.Duncan-Why?They just drag you down.Geoff-No They Don't.Duncan-Yes they do.(someone pits right in front of Duncan)Duncan-what are you doing spiting infront of me.Christian- Ohh sorry about that i meant to hit you.Duncan-OHH REALLY BUB!Christian-yea really but what are you going to do about it?Duncan-This!
What will Duncan do to Christian?
When will Courtney come into the story?
What happened to Geoff?
When will I stop asking pointless Questions?
I will stop right now.Come back next week for another part of DxC Romeo and Juliet!
Once upon a time not so long ago,
There lived a boy and girl who's families hated
each other.The families were the Smiths and the
Fahls. The reasons they hate each other are
unknown. The reasons were lost about 6 months ago.
(At a market in torento)Geoff-Dude you should geta girlfreind.Duncan-Why?They just drag you down.Geoff-No They Don't.Duncan-Yes they do.(someone pits right in front of Duncan)Duncan-what are you doing spiting infront of me.Christian- Ohh sorry about that i meant to hit you.Duncan-OHH REALLY BUB!Christian-yea really but what are you going to do about it?Duncan-This!
What will Duncan do to Christian?
When will Courtney come into the story?
What happened to Geoff?
When will I stop asking pointless Questions?
I will stop right now.Come back next week for another part of DxC Romeo and Juliet!
Okay I'm curious as to what you readers want.I only have 1 comment for my new chapter and its been 2 days.I don't know if i'M just impatient or if my story really sucks.I know most of you rpobably like it and don't comment but,I have a low self esteem and when i don't see comments i don't feel too confident to continue because i think no one will read them.My WHY DO YOU LIKE HER story is the most popular now.And that was one of the first ones I did.Now I think I peeked too early.
Anyway,it helps me to see more comments about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Anyway,it helps me to see more comments about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Courtney-um hey so how u doing Duncan-fine fine very nice Duncan-hey can i talk to u in private Courtney-sure sure they walk to a a hallway Trent -im gonna go listen to them be right back dudes .... Duncan-so Courtney um I broke up with Gwen Courtney-why u guys were perfect for each other Duncan-we were cause u were really mean and mad Courtney-i was but then i gusse i got over u Duncan-u did Courtney-i dont know how but i guess i did Duncan-look im sorry if i hert u so would u like to be um Courtney-to still be friends thatll be nice Duncan-sure we can but i ment more than friends Courtney-oh u mean boyfriend and girlfriend Duncan-yeah Courtney-but What will be diffrent this time Duncan-look will be honest and not crazy I just want to be with u Courtney-really? Duncan-really then they kiss
Narrators POV:
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do you Duncan Paine Take Courtney Flower to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do you Courtney Flower Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce you man and wife you may now kiss the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best day of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best day ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got home they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched movies on cable.
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do you Duncan Paine Take Courtney Flower to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do you Courtney Flower Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce you man and wife you may now kiss the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best day of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best day ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got home they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched movies on cable.
Okay; This.. May possibly sound wierd. But! It's kinda related. So.. I was reading Twilight. Then; All of the sudden... The love triangle popped into my mind. Do you know how Edward is protective, somewhat strict about Bella, and who she hangs out with? Well... Edward is like a male version of Courtney. then; Theres... Gwen. -_-. Gwen is layed back; Protective when she wants to be; and knows how to have fun. See? Jacob's a male version if Gwen—Not goth though. Then, Bella is a female version of Duncan. You see how in NewMoon; she got into tons of trouble? And; Thats how Duncan is.
Now.. What do ya think?
Now.. What do ya think?
Duncan`s POV:There was nothing to say.Courtney pulled her fangs back in and started to fastly walk away.I followed her."See.I am a monster."Courtney said."No you are not.So don`t say that."I said grabbing her by the shoulders.She was cold,but I didn`t care cause I loved her.I`ve never loved a girl like Courtney.There was just something about her that made it alright.It felt good though."Thanks.But you don`t understand.I`m a killer."she said."I don`t care."I said.I bent my neck over."You don`t want this."Courtney said."I want you."I said."You are sure?"she asked."Yes."I said.Courtney`s fangs quickly came back out again and sank into my neck.
Today something happend that made me think of duncan and courtney. I was sitting outside of a random class room and I saw my friend Nolan. He stoped and we started to talk. He pulled out a small poke ball and darkri was in it. "Wow." I said "I used to have one of this kind of thing. only it had torchik." Nolan gave it to me and guss what I said without even thinking. " Wow. this is realy dum and chiledish ... but... I love it!" And to make things REALLY strang Nolan was moving only a block away. SSSSOOOOOOO ya. If you think that is strang plz tell me caz I think I am going CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!